Date: Sep 15, 2017 08:43 am Title: Chapter 34
Mae is so wrong to think Mike is just using Gabby! He truly cares about her. But then again I guess she is just being protective of her little sister.
Micahel will have to prove himself to Mae for her to understand. Gabby is a woman that can make her own decisions even though she made some wrong ones in the past everyone iof them a learning one.
Great update Gabby looking forward to reading more!
Author's Response:
Thsnk you! Yes, Mae is coming from a place where she thinks she is protecting Gabby, but she will soon realize how wrong she is.
thank you for reading and reviewing!! â¤ï¸
Date: Sep 15, 2017 05:23 am Title: Chapter 34
Look, Mae about to piss me off! I understand her having some reservations towards Michael... and regardless of him being a celebrity she need to come off her high horse just a bit! I've been waiting for her to find out who Michael really is, and now that she knows, I think she'll be even more cold hearted to Gabby's situation.
i loves how Andrew came running into the room and still didn't know it was Michael! LOL...besides Mae's attitude, I love her little family. And how Drew thinks her pancakes are nasty!!! LMAO.
And I loved how Michael stepped in front of Gabby to protect her from Andrew and his bat! SO manly! Manly Michael always leaving my pulse going up!
Im still curious as to what will follow with Gabby and Michael as they head back to California. Her problems are now his problems and because Jeanine was someone from his past, she definitely is going to let Michael feel the heat from this. I believe she is going to make things even more hell for the both of them. Levi on the other hand seem as though he doesn't care.
Wonderful chapter! Continue soon please!
Author's Response:
😂😂😂 does Mae remind you of someone?? 😂 And yes, Mae needs to tone it down before she definitely lose Gabby and MJ from her life but she will soon learn.
and Manly protective Michael 😠Girl ....
thsnk you for reading and reviewing!!!â¤ï¸
Date: Sep 15, 2017 12:02 am Title: Chapter 34
Oh noo mae, showin ur true colors much?? Like she is really not listening to michael or gabby's feelings at all. I don't know where she's getting those vibes from buut ima need her to get it together lol.. and this story is just getting better and better, keep it up!
Author's Response:
😂😂 Mae is on one, ain't she? I understand her wanting to protect her sister but she's going about it the wrong way. She will soon see that though.
Thank you you for reading and reviewing!! â¤ï¸
[Report This]Date: Sep 14, 2017 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 34
Mae is being a bitch. Plain and simple. Poor Michael doesn't deserve to be treated that way. Please continue soon!!!
Author's Response:
😂😂 Mae is a big bitch with telling Michael off. Let's hope she can redeem herself before it's too late!!
thsnk you for reading and reviewing!! â¤ï¸
[Report This]Date: Sep 14, 2017 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 34
I honestly think mae is being rude to Michael and it isn't fair on her part. She doesn't even give him to explain his side of the story. She shouldn't butt in and tell Michael to leave gabby alone. It's their relationship I understand family is important but sometimes family needs to step back and let it be. But Andrew's reaction to Michael had me laughing. If I were in his shoes I would have done the same thing lol.
Author's Response:
Lorry, I love that you are the first one to comment on my chapter â¤ï¸ It means a lot and I love seeing/reading your review!!
I agree, Mae is doing wayyy too much and is very overprotective. Let's hope she doesn't ruin things between her and Gabby. She will learn soon how wrong she is.
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: Aug 31, 2017 07:43 am Title: Chapter 1
Amazing. I love this story.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Hope you continue to enjoy, working to get a chapter out this weekend.
[Report This]Date: Aug 23, 2017 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 33
Lol that was funny that right micheal get what your drew is something else
[Report This]Date: Aug 20, 2017 09:35 am Title: Chapter 10
Michael & Gabby got a knack for the married folk, aye? Lawwwwwwd Jeanine is about to get on my damn nerves I already know!
I'm so glad the truth is out about Michael's identity. I wonder how this is going to continue to play out!
Author's Response:
Lol, girl, don't they? lol and yes, this is just the beginning of Jeanine's messy ass.
And I'm glad the truth is out too. Girl I could not imagine how I would react knowing that the guy that's been coming around me was actually Michael Jackson. 😂 I would probably react the same way she did.
Thank you for reading and reviewing!!
Oh and I'm waiting on Michael and Nicole 😜
[Report This]Date: Aug 20, 2017 08:58 am Title: Chapter 8
I'm screamin' picturing this wig in her hands, LMAO!!! OMGosh!!! Michael better explain this thang real good because the cat is out of the bag.
And jumping to the chapter before, who is this Janine?!
Date: Aug 18, 2017 12:42 am Title: Chapter 33
I am in tears laughing at her sister's reaction to them sexing. But I'm glad they are back together.
Author's Response:
😂😂😂 I loved writing that scene..
Date: Aug 15, 2017 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 33
Just like Michael to come and find Gabby! I could only imagine the look on MAEs face when she sees who the "real" Michael is!
They are are truly in love. I certain that there will be some drama ahead that Michael and some $$ will take care of Levi an Jeanine for good!
great update!
[Report This]Date: Aug 15, 2017 03:31 am Title: Chapter 33
Loved it! (As usual ☺) Glad they were able to talk and work it out. Now Gabby just has to explain exactly who Michael is. And her feelings will come out directly, sooner rather than later; I'm sure Michael can tell their feelings are mutual by now. As far as Mae not wanting her to leave, I understand. From the way things sound she's not very satisfied with how their family is divided. Maybe she and Andrew need to discuss a change of scenery... 😉😊
I don't think that Jeanine was serious about what she said, for the simple fact that she went over there with the intention to intimidate Gabby and get under her skin, which can be brought up in court. Second, any judge would have a hard time believing that after all this time and with everything that's taken place, Levi would all of a sudden want something to do with his son...
Anyways, love the chapter; looking forward to the next. â¤
(Excuse any typos)
[Report This]Date: Aug 14, 2017 09:28 pm Title: Chapter 33
I missed Michael. But I wasn't expecting him to fly out to see her. I thought Gabby would head to LA first
Great update!
Date: Aug 13, 2017 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 33
"Biddie Jean" aww that was so cute!
Michael went looking for them! YES! Oh my god, he showed up at the door with bloodshot eyeees! He loves them so much!!
Michael is gonna be staying for a few days?! I think he's gonna encounter that douchebag Anthony guy... I sense drama! Maybe Michael's gonna get jealous.
Yo when Michael said he's moving them into the compound with such possesiveness I was SHOOK! I like that side of him. It really shows how passionate and protective he is about Gabby and the baby.
AND YOU'VE BLESSED US WITH A LOVE SCENE!! Thank you lol
Great chapter! I'm excited for what's to come :)
[Report This]Date: Aug 13, 2017 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 33
Oh man i love this story!! <3