Date: Sep 05, 2015 12:04 am Title: The Switches Went Off
wow, update
Author's Response:
I will, hopefully by today. I'm writing the next chapther right now :)
Date: Sep 01, 2015 03:50 am Title: Dream Blues
Loving it so far, keep it coming! xx
Author's Response:
I can hopefully have an update either tomorrow or Thursday. I'm going out on one of those days soI'm not sure but I'll definitely update this week.
Thank you for reading and reviewing :)
Date: Aug 30, 2015 03:25 pm Title: The Switches Went Off
OMG!! Like what the hell just happened i can not believe her dad did that i am in utter shock first off how disgusting that's your daughter man! who does that i mean he just went straight to ten on that like where's the trust talkin bout did he stick it in and then stickin his nasty ass hands inside her i can't.Since i've been reading your amazing story i've been feelin some type of way about her dad on the real he acts more like a jealous lover than a father WOW!!! And that jealous bitch karenfaye knew she was shady you don't own michael and again i say he don't want yo flat pancake havin ass please.But i love the connection between mike and daya theres just a sereness and sweetness between them that i love its not lustful or rushed its just the way it should be,and girl you almost had me about to do a happy dance when mike was like since we've been together for awhile now theres something i wannna ask you? i was like omg he's gonna ask her to be his girl yes but i guess i'm rushin just a lil just know you got me all in with this story can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Lol! Thanks again for making me laugh with your review! And I love their chemistry too. They're not rushing into anything and they are just talking. And Ikr I wanted to cry after writing that. He was nasty to do that, even though she wasn't doing anything with Michael. And I can hopefully update tomorrow.
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: Aug 29, 2015 11:27 pm Title: Dream Blues
Ok will do can't wait 2 talk 2 u keep moonwalk in and loving mj!
Author's Response:
I sure will and you can email me now if you like :)
Date: Aug 29, 2015 07:18 pm Title: Replay
AWWWW !!!!YAY Their fist kiss bout time LOL their chemistry is so cute i thought it was sweet how she kept asking them what did michael think or what did michael say about this or that.And that hug she gave him when he showed up at the studio that girl is hooked,but not happy bout that bitch karen faye trying to throw shade at zendaya talk about rude.I know she gonna start some drama michael don't want yo pasty white ass!! but so glad everythings comin together for them in the studio and heatin up with them personally they really are so cute together GOOD JOB your doing great and yes i love your new banner.
Author's Response:
LOL!!! ''Michael don't want your pasty white ass!!!' LMAO! That was funny and I like that line. Thanks for making me laugh from a horrible night I had. I'll try my best to update tomorrow if I start writing tonight. I'm glad that you're enjoying this story and that you like my new banner. Thank you so much love!
Thank you for reading and reviewing
Date: Aug 27, 2015 04:31 pm Title: The Surprise Part Two
Awesome chapter!!!How freakin cute and adorable are mike and zen and yes mike was gonna plant one on her LOLbut of course her dad had to start blockin again he's startin to get on my nerves LOL but yeah so glad she was excited about the news.Her and michael are gonna make beautiful music together in more ways than one I just think their going to be so great together good job girly more to come oh and by the way i totally think zendaya should have won Dancing with the Stars she is a great dancer so talented but whateva on to bigger and betta things i say.
Author's Response:
Ikr he's getting on my nerves too lol. Zendaya is old enough to be around guys but I guess who's overprotective. And I love Zendaya's dance moves. I wanted to cry when she lost to Kellie Parker. I thought she did better than her in my opinion. I'll try to update tomorrow. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: Aug 26, 2015 02:08 pm Title: Dream Blues
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Author's Response:
It was changed. I didn't ignore your warning. I tried to change it but you keep removing it
Date: Aug 26, 2015 12:10 pm Title: The Surprise Part One
I also love your banner for your story michael and zendaya are stunning and look so good together girl!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
OH my God! I would've loved them if they dated each other in real life. They have a lot in common and do similar things as well. And aww thanks. I don't really like it but thanks
Date: Aug 26, 2015 11:58 am Title: The Surprise Part One
Wow that was huge michael saying he wants to help with zenadya 's career path and possibly going on tour so funny her eyes got big again as michael came through the door i'm surprised she hasn't fainted yet probably will when she finds out the news.And loved that her father is so protective of her imagine warning MICHAEL JACKSON off your daughter LOL but my guess is he kinda already can see some potential sparks that will lead to them growing closer but wow this is a wonderful opprtunity for her and who can get to say that michael jackson wants to nuture your career i wonder how she's gonna react can't wait to find out great chapter once again.
Author's Response:
Ikr I would've fainted before I could say a word lol. And I will hopefully update pretty soon because I haven't started the next chapter yet. But once I do, I will defiantly update on it thank you for reading and reviewing
Date: Aug 25, 2015 06:00 pm Title: Dream Blues
aww that's cute! Great 2 hear from u as always my friend...ur story is great btw. If u don't finish the other story I understand...maybe I could help u with some ideas? My 1st encounter with mj was life-changing. I saw him 4 the 1st time wen I was 10, and u haven't been the same since. Hope 2 hear from u soon 😊
Author's Response:
That's so kind of you to help. Thanks a lot! And hopefully I can update pretty soon. I wrote chapter 4 and it's up right now
Date: Aug 23, 2015 05:24 pm Title: She's The One
I really like your story and the direction your taking it very detailed and very well written.I love how michael is so drawn to zendaya and she in turn is so shy and in awe of him can't wait to see what comes next keep going girly!!!!!
Author's Response:
Aww thank you for the postive comment. I will try my best to update tomorrow because I'm not done with the thrid chapter. Thank you for reading and reviewing
[Report This]Date: Aug 23, 2015 01:38 pm Title: She's The One
i like it alot keep it coming
Author's Response:
Hopefully I can update again tomorrow or pretty soon. Thank you for reading and reveiwing
Author's Response:
Hopefully I can update again tomorrow or pretty soon. Thank you for reading and reveiwing
[Report This]Date: Aug 22, 2015 07:09 pm Title: Dream Blues
She reminds me of aaliyah 2 and I love her. I think she's a talented person. Aaliyah is 1 of my favorite artists. What happened 2 ur other story u were writing? I love that story, it's 1 of my favorites u have 2 finish it lol. How did u decide 2 come back anyway? I didn't think u were coming back 4 a long time but I'm glad u did. Nice 2 have u back honey a86;
Author's Response:
Well. it's a pretty long story for me on why I stopped writing the other story but hopefully when I get the chance to, I can update on it but thank you for the support
Date: Aug 18, 2015 11:07 am Title: Dream Blues
please continue
Author's Response:
Hopefully I will. Thanks for reading andd reviewing