[Report This]Date: Aug 21, 2015 07:46 am Title: Chapter 5
Hey! So it would've taken all of my inner strenth to stop from jumping Michael's bones right at that table with him looking so good! And I love little Karina.
I'd love to have a chapter with just Nessa and Michael so I can see how they bond,etc. Cause whenever there's some good Mike/Nessa going, it always ends so quickly ...
But keep up the good work, and TOW has been updated ;3
Author's Response:
Lol I know right he just always looks so yummy!! I always try to make them talk but then I don't know it's like I run out of words for some reason and it's hard for me to keep a conversation because I'm such an introvert 😂. I will try to update and make them more social to the best of my ability, and I will be heading over to TOW right now!!
[Report This]Date: Aug 20, 2015 03:34 am Title: Chapter 4
Awww, Michael asked her out for drinks. Finally!!!! I really think they're gonna hit off well as I can see already.
But.... her mother is a mess. A bad mess. How are you gonna treat your daughter like shit when she aint even do shit but the right thing then Kaleb who cheated a conceived another child with another woman?!?!??? I don't get that an It's pudding me off. SHE'S pissing me off. Lol.
More soon.
Author's Response:
We will be finding that out very soon lol but she's still in the wrong for doing that to Nessa.
And Michael is coming up now and be the man for her I will be typing more soon too.
Date: Aug 19, 2015 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 4
Is that fool for real he needs to take several seats and so does her trifling mother,that's just so freakin disrespectful first her mom need to get her ass off her shoulders being so nasty to your own daughter.Having that no good dog in your home after what he did to your daughter and on top of that did this fool hit his damn head on the way down from the stupid tree.How the heck you gonna act surprised she divorcing your butt then talkin bout you want your daughter around that skank and your other kid he must be bipolar whew makes me wanna jump through this laptop screen and smack the mess outta him and her momma LOL but all in all glad that her and michael went out he is so sweet with her they have great chemistry.
Author's Response:
I know right both him and her mother are really making me pissed off, just typing it really made me want to punch them. He's really acting as though what he did wasn't on the level of divorice.
But yeah Michael and Nessa are starting to have better time and I'm hoping that it leads ro much more.
[Report This]Date: Aug 19, 2015 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 4
Her mother is an idiot. How is she going to act like Nessa is the problem. They all deserve each other. I wouldn't be surprised if the mother has a thing for that piece of shit.
Way to go Michael asking Nessa out. They're both so shy with each other. Looking forward to seeing how this thing developes between those two.
More soon. <333
Author's Response:
Her mom is gonna get what she deserves and so will Kaleb its just gonna take a while. Both of them are extremely shy and its the cutest thing ever lol.
Date: Aug 19, 2015 07:56 pm Title: Chapter 4
This trifling as bitch smh got some nerve and her mom is ridiculous like that's your daughter smh, good chapter it could have been longer though updat soon :)
Author's Response:
Aww don't worry, I'll try to write more just for you lol
Date: Aug 15, 2015 06:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
Love where this is going. Gosh, her mother is being a difficult for no reason. What kinda grandmother refuses to watch their own grandchild? Is she fuckin ole dude? SMH.
And I'm loving Michael as a lawyer. Hopefully he can help them out somehow.
Yay. More soooon
Author's Response:
She really is and its all because she wants her daughter to be stable when Vanessa makes her money already. And I wanted to try something other than the superstar, I'm glad ou like it!
Date: Aug 12, 2015 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
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[Report This]Date: Aug 12, 2015 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
Her mom is the problem ..
Can't wait for the next chapter XD
Author's Response:
lol yeah her mom really is a huge problem now.
I be make sure to post within a few days!
[Report This]Date: Aug 12, 2015 04:09 pm Title: Chapter 3
Her so called mom.is missing me off. Who does shit like that. How are you gonna tell your own daughter that you're not gonna baby sit your grandchild all because of a smart ass decision your daughter is making??? That's just wrong. Her mom it's too much pro Kaleb. Smh. It's.going to take Kaleb to tell vanessa mom what he did cause apparently she don't believe her own daughter if she's mad about her wanting a divorce.
I really think everything is going to do out just fine for Vanessa and Michael. She really needs the help from a lawyer.
Author's Response:
She's such a bitch and she made me mad just writing the chapter, it really is wrong how pro kaleb she is too. Michael is going to be something like her safe haven I guess.
Date: Aug 12, 2015 12:02 pm Title: Chapter 3
The mom is something else quite obviously she has some much deeper issues goin on other than her daughter or maybe shes just a stone cold bitch i'm sure that'll come to light later.But i love the rapport between her and michael starting off can't wait to see them build a deeper connection,he's already getting off the ground by being so gentlemanly that's what i'm talkin about she's gonna fall for him in no time.
Author's Response:
lol yeah we have to see whagt happens between them, but her mom is something else she's crazy.
[Report This]Date: Aug 12, 2015 05:51 am Title: Chapter 3
Her mom is a grade A piece of hefty horse manure. How at you going I shut out your grandchild over your cheating even bigger piece of shit son in law. Man that's for the birds.
On the other hand Mr Jackson seems sweet. Lol.
More soon!! <333
Author's Response:
lol this review made me laugh the most, he really is a big piece of shit and so is her mom. But don't worry they'll get and hard.
Michael really is going to be her safe haven.
I'll make sure to post soon.
[Report This]Date: Aug 05, 2015 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 2
Awe I remember reading this story from you. Is it the one where Michael lived in her Building and called Karina his girlfriend?
I like where this is going so far it will be awesome to see when she meets Mr Michael Jackson Esq!!
More soon! <333
Author's Response:
Yeah thats the story, and thank you so much. I felt like I needed to change it up because I wasn't getting the response I wanted. But thanks again and I will make sure to add more.
[Report This]Date: Aug 05, 2015 04:58 pm Title: Chapter 2
That was so sweet of Adrienne to stay after what all went down. Poor Nessa. But her mom though. I could slap her silly and put some sense into her. Kaleb aint no good.
And somebody is about to meet Michael for the first time. Cabt wait to see how that goes.
More soon 😁👍
Author's Response:
I'll make sure to Post and I know she needs to get slapped so hard she gets sent to Antarctica.
Date: Aug 05, 2015 04:58 pm Title: Chapter 2
I would love if you were to post pics! As for her mother she seems to be all about money and only concerned with how this will affect her.She needs to be in her daughters corner and support her what a shame basically tellin her it's ok to stay with a man cheatin on you as long as the money is there be a good little obedient wife,and keep your mouth shut what kind of message is that? The meeting between her and michael should be interesting i'm sure sparks are going to fly LOL.And loved the fact that you made michael her divorce lawyer instead of him always being MICHAEL JACKSON (THE SUPERSTAR)can't wait to see what happens next !!!
Author's Response:
I wanted to try something different from him being a superstar so I was like why not put a twist in this and make him the divorce lawyer. You understand exactly what the messgae is of that chapter, her mother is crazy and you'll understand later on in the story.
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2015 08:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, I love this. This is great girl. Keep up the good work.
But... poor Vanessa. She didn't deserve that From Kaleb. He's nothing but a manwhore. Gonna have an affair out his marriage then bring another child into this world. Just low down and dirty. Vanessa baby all you need to do is get those divorce papers ready and be on your way. You don't need him cause apparently he didn't need you or Karina. Let him play family with that skeezer.
More soon:)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much you too and I nominated you for the awards, for best reviewer and I just remembered I have to nominate you for best writer too girl!