[Report This]Date: Nov 08, 2015 08:48 am Title: Chapter 10
Lord. Her mom is on my hit list most def. She is so wrong for that crap she pulled at dinner. Why cant she be happy for her daughter??? This is getting crazy.
more soon.
Author's Response:
Her mom is just getting worse and worse as the time goes by, its like she can't get over it.
[Report This]Date: Oct 19, 2015 05:13 am Title: Chapter 9
I'm glad Nessa outed her mom's BS to her dad. Ugh Her mother is a failure at being a human being much less a decent mother.
Kaleb is a piece of work. Too late sucka you made your bed now lay in it!!!
More soon! <333
[Report This]Date: Oct 15, 2015 02:21 pm Title: Chapter 9
KKaleb have some major problems with him I swear. He on that if I can have you no one else can shit. Oh no. He gotta go!!!! ;(
As for Her father showing up, I'm skiddly dee happy because He mother has been nothing but a bitch to her. Her own daughter? Smh.
I'm glad they told her off at the door. She deserved it.
[Report This]Date: Oct 06, 2015 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 8
Awww Nessie got scared about meeting the family but everything turned out good. Michael's family is so sweet and welcoming how could you not fall in love with them the minute you meet them. Especially Katherine.
I'm happy they all took a liking to her and Karina. It put a huge smile on my face knowing that.
Now....wtf is Kaleb doing at the door of vanessa house???? Michael come back. She may need you boy!!!!!
Author's Response:
I know she was panicking so bad but everything worked out perfectly.
Her and Michael are starting to get more comfortable with eachother as you can see, he works perfectly with Karina and Vanessa.
Kaleb on the other hand, I don't know why in the world he felt the need to come back in the picture.
[Report This]Date: Oct 06, 2015 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 8
Hell you want Kaleb?!?! Lol the whole chapter was so cute and chill till he rared his cheating ass head. He better not be up to foolishness.
More soon! <333
Author's Response:
I know right Kaleb always gotta ruin something, but don't worry I got something for that ass next chapter lol. But yeah I wanted to just make a chill chapter and have more time for Michael and Nessa.
[Report This]Date: Oct 06, 2015 03:49 pm Title: Chapter 8
They had such a nice day and the evening was going to end so nicely, until an uninvited person shows up drunk.
Author's Response:
Yeah I wanted them to have a cool day I'm glad you enjoyed it too and Kaleb definitely needs to leave.
[Report This]Date: Sep 03, 2015 10:44 am Title: Chapter 7
Well I guess Kaleb is assed out now. I wonder if she's really going to leave him or will he convince her that he left Nessa for her so he loves her.
Nessa being with Michael their chemistry isn't that strong yet. I can tell the like each other a lot. Can't wait for it to grow more.
More soon! <333
[Report This]Date: Sep 03, 2015 10:31 am Title: Chapter 6
Good grief Kaleb is an ass. How is he going to ball her out for being with some after their marriage is over and he was there with a whole other family and still married?!?! Boy please.
I see he has this girl pregnant again. Why is she introducing herself to Nessa anyway?
I guess I will find out when I read the next chapter lol.
<333
Date: Aug 30, 2015 04:50 am Title: Chapter 7
Wow seems like she was being truthful I but I would still want to knock her tf out😂😂😂
[Report This]Date: Aug 30, 2015 01:30 am Title: Chapter 7
So the girl didn't know a damn thing about Vanessa. Typical mistress, I guess. If I was her, I would have dug a little bit more deeper and found out if he was married or not than be blinding by 'love' he supposedly given her. Smh. And on top of that, she's pregnant again with his child. Kaleb really got it coming at this divorce settlement.
And Adrienne was about to go off on the poor girl not knowing the dealio. I don't blame her though., lol.
And I can't wait for Vanessa and Kaleb to finally get a divorce. I want.it over nooooowww!!!! :(
More soon.
Oh and thanks for the compliment on my story. I be trying girl.
Date: Aug 29, 2015 12:34 pm Title: Chapter 6
- OMGoodness please update another chapter today I need to know how this conversation is going to go
Author's Response:
lol I will make sure that I update today don't worry!
[Report This]Date: Aug 29, 2015 11:49 am Title: Chapter 6
Awww Karina in her little tutu for Her birthday. I see someone is becoming a big girl now. I tell ya, kids now are growing up so fast.
Soooo.... Michael was invited and Kaleb ass just shows up. But Mike and him was right about one thing. Karina is still Kaleb's child and needs to be around her. But damn, he ain't have to call her a hoe like she been fucking around on him during their marriage. If I stand correct, it was he who was and still is a how for fucking around with another woman while married. Smh.
Some men these days.
And finally Michael and Vanessa are official. I hope everything turns out for the best for them and hopefully, later in the future they get married and have a family of their own. Michael needs some mini jackson anyway, lol.
And oh godKaleb's girlfriend is at the door!!!!! :o
Author's Response:
I know right I can't wait to see what happens with those two and with Michael and Vanessa they are going to make with sick with how cute they are lol.
I will make sure to post more today!
and I'm reading your stor riht now Girl it is getting soo good lol
[Report This]Date: Aug 22, 2015 08:57 am Title: Chapter 5
So Michael is more than a rebound huh? He did meet Karina even though Nessa had no choice in the matter.
Their cute together just hope she's not rushing into things with Michael.
Who am I kidding? I'm queen of condoning rushing into things ok with Michael Lmaooo. I just hope he delivers on his whole nice guy persona.
More soon!! <333
Author's Response:
He will always be more than a rebound, don't worry I'm not going to rush them into anything without them getting to be around each other more lol.
And that other part made me laugh, I love your stories so much and I love the relationships you make between them especially Pen and Michael.
Author's Response:
He will always be more than a rebound, don't worry I'm not going to rush them into anything without them getting to be around each other more lol.
And that other part made me laugh, I love your stories so much and I love the relationships you make between them especially Pen and Michael.
[Report This]Date: Aug 21, 2015 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oh shucks. I really do believe Michael is really feeling Vanessa a lot and vice versa. Plus, Karina likes him too so that must means something.
Now she finally tell her girls that she's divorcing Kaleb (thank you lord) and that she might be feeling Michael. Hell, who wouldn't. But I hope something does comes of them in due time. They are the perfect fit in my eyes.
More soon.
Author's Response:
I love them together and yeah she had to tell the girls at some point that she was falling for someone lol
Date: Aug 21, 2015 01:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hey, so I think it helps to let the scene breathe and go on for a while. Don't be hesitant about it.
Think about how it would go in real life or on tv. usually when I'm doing dialouge, I just jot down everything back and forth then go back and add details about the scene, what they're doing. Like for this scene, they would definitely do more getting to knw each other etc.
I'm an introvert as well, but I think of writing as a way to let go of that...just go with it.
Ialso look at what other writers do to help me when I have trouble.
Just throwing this out there! I think your story has alot of potential. <3
Author's Response:
This made me smile so much because you're one of my favorite writers and thank you so much for your advice d84;a039;d84;a039;d84;a039;
And the gifs of Michael are so adorable!!