Reviewer: mjlifemate58 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jun 30, 2015 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hey mjlifemate58 here! just want 2 say welcome 2 the site, I'm new here myself. Omg! Omg! Omg! that was the cutest most sexiest one shot I have ever read. I love how open mj is and with her being open with him to be thorough about it, just wow is all I can say. She even gave him a step-by-step as to what 2 do. and 2 think all this time I didn't think he knew what he was doing! lol Omg, can't bring myself 2 even function 2 breathe! This is really hot you should most absolutley make another one! I'm a HUGE fan of you and your work, this will be on my mind 4 days. you have just been added 2 my favs list author and story.

Author's Response:

Thank you for the love! It's not my first oneshot- just first on this sie. I am currently in the midst of a series but I might write more oneshots considering the love this one seems to be getting. Thank you again and we'll see if I continue on this pairing or not..

Reviewer: big fan Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 30, 2015 12:43 pm Title: Chapter 1

Well I gotta tell you for your first short story girl that was hot !!!So funny how michael tricked her like that but she definately didn't seem to mind too much LOL.overall i really liked it can't wait to see what else you come up with in future stories ,and i wouldn'mind if you expanded on michael and evelyn's story i think that would be da bomb you've definately earned a fan of your writing.

Author's Response:

Thank you sooo much for the support. I'm glad this story is getting love because it's been awhile since I wrote my last oneshot. Not sure yet if I'll continue stories between these two jsut yet but we'll see....