[Report This]Date: May 01, 2016 09:42 am Title: Introducing: The Main Characters of New Flame
This character introduction made me excited to read more -- your descriptions are comical, I love it!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I put my heart and soul into that small introduction, lol. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: Feb 24, 2016 07:24 am Title: Chapter 20. Break Up...Break Down
Well, Porsche reacted better than I expected her to.
Rocco was the usual dumbass, no surprise.
Finally Michael and Umika can enjoy each other's company freely <3
I'm glad you're back, girl :3
Author's Response:
Lol, right. Porshe just didn't have any room to talk so of course she wasn't gonna blow up as.much as everyone expected. And Rocco is just an asshole on so many levels but is it really the last of.him? ;) Mike and Umika can finally be together now. I'm evwn happy for them myself.
And thank you.
Date: Feb 23, 2016 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 20. Break Up...Break Down
I'm loving this
Author's Response:
Thank you so much.
[Report This]Date: Feb 23, 2016 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 14. Confessions
I freakin' love this ^_^
Author's Response:
Thank you so much.
[Report This]Date: Jan 02, 2016 08:55 pm Title: Chapter 19. No Promises...No Guarantees
Yes. Porsche want to be messy and got caught out there with her next man. How you gon go to somebody job to confront them about going to lunch with YOUR man and you bring your side peice with you? LAME!!!
and what the hell Roc gone say in person that he couldn't say over the phone. He's sorry all round. She needs to tell him she's benching his ass. Better yet she kicking his ass of the team. End of story.
I'm so mad Michael trying to make threats while taking that ride. He couldn't even think straight. Lmao.
I can't wait for him to hem Roc's ass up though.
Let the mess BEGIN!!!!
More soon <333
Author's Response:
Porshe is just dumb. Call herself trying to confront Umi when her 'secret dude' was in the car. If it wasn't for him blowing the horn, India wouldn't have noticed who it was but even if it wasn't the case, Porshe should have never brought him along. Still stupid. But India gots the tea on her ass and might spill it.
Roc, is everybody's enemy and on Michael's beat up list. Yeah, what he needed to say he could have said it over the phone but maybe meeting him at his dance studio will be something interesting for you all.
All you could do was laugh at Mike in this chapter. The poon and the beginning of the ride was so good he could even get his words out but he finally did why he trying to make threats.
Roc vs. Mike will be soon. So stay tuned.
Date: Jan 01, 2016 05:24 am Title: Chapter 19. No Promises...No Guarantees
Umi no! She shouldn't give Rocco any opportunity to meet with her whatsoever. What he did is way over the line. I hope Michael doesn't do something stupid. I feel like things are gonna get dangerous.
Author's Response:
I knoww. She should have let him say what he needed to say over the phone but let's just see what he gotta say in person. After all, they still together just as Michael and Porshe are too. But Rocco did do some foul shit that morning for putting his hands on her.
From the way Michael is talking about hurting Roc, don't take it strongly.Although they're threats he's just gonna give him a taste of his own medicine that he So happened to have given to Umika that morning.
Nothing won't be dangerous but we'll just have to see and find out.
Date: Dec 26, 2015 07:53 am Title: Introducing: The Main Characters of New Flame
Girrrrrl, I been waiting for this update! I love this story. But hold up, Roc really is doing the most haha. Sleeping with all these other women, not to mention a baby with one of them. When Mimi finds out about that, it's gonna be hell.
Mike out here tryna take people out over Mimi's ass that's right MJ, protect your love.,he so fine. Haha continue this please, I'm ready for the next chap. :)
Author's Response:
Lol, I know. Sorry for the long wait. And thank you so much. I love your stories as well.
Roc is a hoe. A big ass hoe. Regardless of being that, he is a good father to his daughter but he's still a hoe. Drama is what it's gonna be when Mimi finds out. And hell too.
Michael is so protective over Mimi to the point it's so cute but loving and caring. He's ready to kick some ass over her.
[Report This]Date: Dec 23, 2015 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 18. B.A.N.
Lmao. I died at the end with the Clink Clink Pow. Let me find out Michael strapped.
That nigga Roc is triflin af. I mean he need to just stay his ass over Dye house and hide because Michael is not having his foolishness. Not today Satan.
Michael is really loving his baby girl that was sweet how he just held her while she cried. Take care of your baby Michael!!! Make that love!!!
More soon! <333
Author's Response:
Lmao, yass. You never know what Michael got packing. He probably stashed somewhere in his house.
Being the author of this story and writing Roc's character, I be dogging his ass out too girl. I mean, he have whole harem of bitches everywhere. Like, why is he even with Umika if fucking around is all he wanna do.
Michael is so sweet. He really loves Umika and will hurt anybody over her. We all know Roc is gonna get it.
Date: Dec 08, 2015 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 17. Drama And Lies
What. the. fuck.
First of all, LaPorsche finally got up and leave. Bye Felicia!
I hope Michael's straight about his feelings though.
Rocco though?! What the fuck? He slaps Umika then goes full cheater on her? Double checked on my hit list.
Author's Response:
Haha yes. Alot of drama and lies. Well, just a few for right now but there's more to come later. Finally, Porshe left and Mike told her like it was. She ain't squeaky clean herself.
Oh trust me, Mike is 100% straight about his feelings no doubt. He wants Umika back badly.
As for Roc, he ain't no good. He better hope Michael doesn't find out what he's done... ;)
[Report This]Date: Dec 07, 2015 05:46 am Title: Chapter 17. Drama And Lies
Yeah, I can smell Modern Life getting the stew kicked outta him by Mike. I can just see it now you can't tell me he's not gonna want to do that. He's crazy about MiMi and I know he'd be ready to let that hood outta him.
Do it Mike
and again, Modern got other chicks and he has the NERVE to act like this?!?
Bye, sir. BYE
Ain't nobody giving a damn right now just leave
Author's Response:
Oh, he better pray to the almighty God that Michael doesn't hear what happen From Umi because shit is gonna go down foreal. The drama just doesn't stop there at all. Michael is crazy about Umika which is obviously shown and would hurt anyone over her (excluding females) lol. He'd probably use Janet for that.
Yes, Dyemond is another chick of his sideline collection. Roc is seriously sticking it in everywhere he knows where.
Yeah,it's about time that he gtfo somewhere now.
[Report This]Date: Dec 07, 2015 05:12 am Title: Chapter 16. A New Flame
Ugh the review count messed me up and I lost where I was before I left.
I need for these two to be together and get shit right. They're not happy with their current relationships. Modern Life ol stank ass running around here ugh
I can't stand him or the car
Author's Response:
I hope the admin. fix the review counts. I was scared at first when I found out my reviews were 'missing'.
Don't worry. It looks like that may be happening sometime very soon. Sooner than soon actually. Michael wants out with Car as Umika and Modern Life, she didn't say. But we'll see what's to happen.'
[Report This]Date: Dec 07, 2015 02:11 am Title: Chapter 13. A Place Of Memories
I'm sayin. Is her attitude gonna fuck it up for her?! Lmaoo You know damn well Mike is the happiest of all. This dude is excited as hell. Ready to enjoy him some MiMi
Modern Life is still trippin wtf? NOW YOU WANNA ACT UP
Take your ass somewhere please
You were "fine" before so now you're acting different about it. Ugh he pisses me off. You're out here doin what you want but got the nerve to come at her sideways? Bye, sir, bye
Loved the flashback. It was so cute and they were so happy!
Author's Response:
Girl, let's hope it won't so she can stay gone for those two weeks in Cali. Mike is the happiest guy right now and it's giving him a home run to be with his real baby Umi, lol. He's about to ctfu now.
Roc is just too much now. One minute he doesn't care then he switches up and starts complaining. But yet, you have other hoes on the side though....
Lol, thanks. You know I had to make the flashback worth something cute to make ya smile. Lol.
Date: Dec 05, 2015 02:27 pm Title: Chapter 12. The Answer Is Yes
Damn Michael is such an irresistible asshole!
Author's Response:
Lol, is he. He got the answer he wanted and now he's going to take Umi out to her fav place. Umi knew she was gonna say yes anyway.
Date: Dec 05, 2015 11:35 am Title: Chapter 6. An Invite To Old Feelings
Yaaas! Umika got Michael's hanging from her lips. You go girl!
Author's Response:
Michael is so in a trance he can't stop looking at her. He's realizing what he messed over.
[Report This]Date: Dec 04, 2015 06:06 pm Title: Chapter 1. Once A Cheater...Always A Cheater
Whoops, here's another douchey Michael! This time he's already going full force! I like the characters and the plot, I'll keep reading!
Author's Response:
Lol, yes another douche Michael who is in fact going full force.
And thank you so much for reviewing.