Date: Dec 10, 2015 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 4-Happy Birthday to You
wHY wont michael just leave lisa for this girl? By the eay whats her name lol
Date: Dec 10, 2015 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 3- Can't Say No
i really love this!
Date: Dec 10, 2015 03:15 pm Title: Chapter 2-I Should've Known
wow! women do crazy stuff for him lol! so were they together when he got married or did they just break up or something and he moved on fast
[Report This]Date: Dec 10, 2015 03:12 pm Title: Chapter 36-Always Be My Baby
I actually think the convo went better than the damn conference. And Michael wanted that because..........? If they both can sit down like two civilized adults and figure things out themselves then this whole mess shouldn't have happened in the first place. I could seriously slap Mike for this shit, lol. Literally. I mean, you don't need John or Trai to settle down agreements when they just clearly did it themselves.
A waste of time.
As for him telling hos family. That's gonna one hella of an interesting moment. I wonder how everyone is gonna take it. Knowing Katherine and her being a JW, she's gonna be the most disappointed. Joseph, well, he might say Dee is after the Jackson name and money. You know how that all goes.
More soon.
Author's Response:
Right? I thought so too. Sometimes all the dramatics aren't needed. Wish Michael would've figured it out earlier though!
And yesss, telling his family. That will be interesting. While I know his brothers haven't always been faithful, Michael never opened shared his escapades. I can't see him saying it straight up, "I cheated and got another girl pregnant."
And Joseph...he's a non motherfucking factor LOL! But that's a good idea XD
Date: Dec 10, 2015 02:45 pm Title: Chapter 1-Saving All My Love
THIS IS AMAZING SO FARRRRRR!!! LOVE IT!! i was looking for a crazy story and i found it!
Date: Nov 22, 2015 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 1-Saving All My Love
Just want to say this is hands down my favorite mjfic period!! I'm going to bug you until I get an update! Haha <3 Ya Chick!!
Date: Nov 18, 2015 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 35-Doubt..Part II
Hopefully they will move forward now
[Report This]Date: Nov 18, 2015 08:11 am Title: Chapter 1-Saving All My Love
Glad to see these two working things out on their own. And LOL at how childish Michael was being towards Trai when he went to check on Dee. Also, I think it's good that she has the support of Trai since she doesn't have her family helping her.
I think once her and Michael continue to hash everything out, then things will fall into place. Although I'm all for independence, Michael is right...she should sit back and take things easy. He owes it to her and I think she should allow him to help..I'm glad she agreed on moving closer, that way if something ever happened Michael will be close.
I really do think he's trying to prove himself this time.
Thank you for that update!! Will be catching up on your new story next.
[Report This]Date: Nov 18, 2015 07:54 am Title: Chapter 35-Doubt..Part II
I can seriously murder the both of them 😂. Like, you guys are practically working it out yourselves but you need lawyers tho???? 😒. Smdh.
As for the bathroom moment, she had every right to feel that way ig because hiw the way things were going, it juat didnt feel like it was her baby too. It came off as more as a surrogate type thing imo. Questions here, being told to do this and you cant do that. Like she didnt have any say in anything. Barely.
And mike think he slick. Busting in there knowing damn well he was gonna get what he wanted. Just happy Trai didnt go off like he did in that conference room.
Date: Nov 17, 2015 11:29 pm Title: Chapter 35-Doubt..Part II
Awwwww Michael Generally Cares About Dee And The Baby You Can See That And That's so cute , he doesn't want her to work because he can see it taking a toll on her , he just want to be supportive and there for the babies that's so good he's changing I can see
Author's Response:
Yes! I definitely wanted show that Michael isn't just full of empty promises in order to get his way, but that he's growing and changing. For the better of not just the baby, but Dee as well. Thanks for your review!
[Report This]Date: Nov 17, 2015 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 35-Doubt..Part II
Yaaay! I'm your first review!!! lol well, you know what I mean!!!
Anyway, first I'd like to send a huge hug your way, because you are by far one of the sweetest, down, coolest people ever!
there ya go!!
I told you how bad I waited for this update! It was truly starting to worry me, but now you're bringing me back to Dee's world!!! Ha! Can't get any better!
To dah story!! I like how you described her feeling changes in her body! Girl needs to know that her tight shirts and skinny jeans won't be fitting far from now! That's just something she will have to accept, but that's all a part of growing up! And I'm sure Dee will get it together! This meeting should finally place things into place, she now needs to learn that she can indeed make her own decisions and be a grown up. (without a man guiding her and holding her hand all the way)
I'm happy that Trai got the chance to talk with her about the issues during break. I was sitting on the edge hoping he wouldn't crack! I'm glad he actually asked do you want to fight this or not?? Either she will battle for what she really wants, or just had it over to Michael...which I'm praying that she doesn't.
HONEY! When Trai and Michael had their little stand off I could've died!! Just died!! I was expecting Trai to refuse leaving Dee's side, but just like the grown man that he is..he walked.
I'm glad Michael and Dee didn't have any major issues while talking...it could've totally went south as soon as he opened his mouth! I could tell there was tension, but he didn't flub up and she didn't run away into another room! Hahaha so that's progress!
I understand Michael wants the best for his baby! He's wanted a child for awhile, but he can't control everything!
Great chapter, you already know how I feel!
Author's Response:
Aww thank you so much, I really appreciate that and I feel the same way! You're a complete sweetheart. Glad I made an MJ friend <3 It's been years since I had one.
Ahh I'm so sorry for the wait, school drives me crazy and I always get writer's block or discourage with the story as it stands ( you already know my struggle) so that's why it takes so long. I'm really going to try to finish this story. It makes me so happy that people enjoy reading it. :)
I like that you have confidence in Dee! I think that this situation is really going to test her inner strength in more ways that one! She needs to learn to stand on her own for once. Without Michael or Trai holding her hand every step of the way..the baby is going to need it's mommy to be tough. And I think in time, she will be. She's never faced anything like this before.
Ooh Trai he's like that smooth glass of wine..on the surface he looks calm, but on the inside he's fuming. (Like in the gif). I think Dee choosing Michael over him was a bit of a slap in the face. He just doesn't want to loose his cool again.
And yooo I had to do a little something. We could see how territorial they both were over Dee. I think it's safe to say Michael knows that there's something going on..
Whew! Michael and Dee are trying to get it together. I'm glad they didn't fight, they do that all the time. Now, its all about the baby and Michael just doesn't want to fight with the woman he loves. It's not worth it to him. Hopefully he will continue to put the petty things aside..and be an example for Dee.
Like Trai said..Michael is going to have to bend a little..
Thank you love! <3 You always giving me great feedback <333
[Report This]Date: Nov 02, 2015 07:47 am Title: Chapter 34-Doubt..Part I
Now see, i'm gonna sit here and sip my coffee. Child, this is too much for me. Michael sat there like a dumb deer in headlights lusting after Dee while Trai was making him look like a fool. First of all, Michael knows he's asking too damn much for her to quit her job and move near him. My mother always said to never get somewhere in live where you have to depend on a man. So what if she does quit her job, her and Michael have a falling out and no bills get paid? Scratch that from the list. This agreement seems way too controling. Like damn, let the girl breathe! And Michael is such a typical fuckboy. So you're still laid up with Lisa, yet get mad when you see Dee interact with her lawyer. You can produce this agreement, but can't produce them divorce papers. Oh okay... 😒 And i'm curious to know what unavoidable truth Michael realized? Was he finally putting the puzzle together about Dee and Trai? I can't wait for the next chapter! More please :)
[Report This]Date: Oct 29, 2015 05:31 am Title: Chapter 34-Doubt..Part I
Some of the propsoals were reasonable and the others were like wtf? Nope coz I noticed that too. She didn't look thrilled and i didn't really think that she would be. Yeah i think that his figured out that something is going and he doesn't like it whatsoever.Love the gifs. Trai is like nigga pls lmao Loved it! Hmm...maybe she let it be known how she is feeling which mean she might let Mike have a piece of her mind. Just a guess and probably not a good one. Loved it Gabi!
[Report This]Date: Oct 28, 2015 08:05 am Title: Chapter 34-Doubt..Part I
😩😩😩 Girl, After reading this chapter, you got me walking around the office in my feelings. I just had a coworker to ask if I was ok and I told him I was going through some things. 😂😂 lmbo!
Seriously, this chapter had me in my feelings. They both being stubborn when they can just work this out themselves. Dee really needs to stop holding this grudge against him because she's going to have to deal with him whether she likes it or not. If she would just talk to him, then it probably won't have come to this. And Michael, I know he's only doing what he feels is best for Dee and the baby, but he is being a bit controlling...but, she left him no choice.
This was an excellent chapter, Gabi! Can't wait to read the next one.
[Report This]Date: Oct 27, 2015 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 34-Doubt..Part I
Well damn. The proposals the Mike came up with for the meeting, imo, they are right. Some of them are. I think she should agree to some that were given. Now, as for the photographing of the baby, who the Hell will know that Dee baby father his Michael Jackson only if she tells him. Not that one was unnecessary to me. But given the fact the baby last name will and foremost be Jackson I can see where Mike is coming from but the pics being in the wrong hands, but still, no one will know unless Dee opens up her moth about who the father is. Th only people who knows is her friend and Trai.
Now I can see the shade Trai was throwing at Mike. That was funny to me. I ddetected that real quick. Lol. And I'm sure Mike isn't so slow to not have put the dots together. That night qhen Dee screamed out Trai name, he should know that's the exact dude with the exact name. How slow can he be.
I'm so ready for PART two. I'm not sure what's gonna happen next but it might not be good.
More soon. :)
Btw, I had recently updated New Flame.
Author's Response:
Wow, I'm surprised everyone is so chill about the proposal. I'd be pissed if any man tried to tell me when I could/ couldn't work. And I think Dee's anger comes more from Michael even having the audacity to make her quit work as if there is no other option. I think the housing thing is fine as long there are no ulterior motives. I think in Dee and Trai will definitely request some adjustments..
LOL trai was so shady...borderline unprofessional. We will learn how he even ended up in this situation in the next couple chapters.
Ah I know, when I get some chance I have to catch up on all my stories!