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Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 31, 2015 08:15 am Title: Chapter 19-The Worst

Michael still ain't shit, will never be shit. Like Mimi said, Dee needs to prepare for the worst, and that includes potentially raising this child alone. Michael is not reliable, and he is still a married man. And now that she's pregnant, he thinks he truly does own her and have a right to constantly invade her and her life. Which is why he had his damn lawyer call. I truly wouldn't be surprised if he tries some fuck shit like trying to file full custody for this baby, or try to make some kinda rigid schedule legally that she must adhere to. I don't trust him at all, and I think he's pressed as all hell that she only wants to keep it about the baby and no more them. He has some bullshit up his sleeve, I'm telling you. He may even have a gag order out so she can't go to the media or something to prevent his tired ass wife from finding out. Dee just needs to stick to her guns. Do NOT fuck with him at all unless it has something to do with the child. PERIOD.'



Author's Response:

It's crazy how you're reading my mind in regards to Mimi's words of advice and Michael's need to control Dee's life now. 

Now, I'm hoping the meeting isn't too crazy, but we never know what can happen.

And i agree that since she said keep it about the baby, Michael was probably pissed. This is the first time she's ever done that. And i think it's a sign that she's trying to do the right thing and what's best for her.

I just hope she sticks to her guns.

Thanks for the review, love! ;3

 

Reviewer: Fire-in-her-veins Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 31, 2015 12:08 am Title: Chapter 19-The Worst

Hes still being a fucking dick. Oh i love you more now that you're having my kid. Just wow. He doesnt love her. He just wants his cake and eat it too. He just sees her as a means to an end. He already has a lawyer lined up so he can probably get 100% rights over making decisions for the kid and for full custody. Even if they did get together whats stopping him from cheating on her? And he has the balls to say oh i dont know why you doubt my love. Maybe it's cuz he hasnt given her a reason to. Boo fuckin ya. 



Author's Response:

I don't know if that's what the lawyer's mean by a meeting...maybe it won't be so bad.

and you have a point!

let's see what happens!

Reviewer: Dreamer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 30, 2015 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 19-The Worst

John Branca?! He's gonna try and take that baby away from her?!

Isn't he?

*faints*

 



Author's Response:

omg no fainting!  D;

and who knows what this meeting is about, we'll just have to wait and see!

<3

Reviewer: Briannasamuels Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 30, 2015 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 19-The Worst

- I think that situation could of been handled better Dee could have at least get all her feelings and and give a good answer on why they should just focus on the baby and I think Michael generally loves her but there whole relationship was based on him always running to her when his whole world was going downhill or becoming to much and she never put her foot down and now it's to lately there in to deep , the relationship could have been way different and I figured Michael would call his lawyer , I mean she did say she just wanted to focus on the baby and that's what he's  probably doing making sure that the baby will be token care of and everything , he just need to drop that Lisa Marie bitch and get his priorities in check and I can't stand that Mimi chick 



Author's Response:

I think its hard for Dee to get out everything. Especially when Michael acts the way he acts..

She should have put her foot down a long time ago so now it's too late.

And I hope michael has good intentions..

lol why can't u stand mimi? Dee needs friends lol.

Reviewer: Crazyme55 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 30, 2015 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 19-The Worst

Michael might want to take the baby from Dee and raise him or her himself.

 



Author's Response:

Let's hope not!

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 30, 2015 10:44 pm Title: Chapter 19-The Worst

He was there to get some punani plain and simple. He showed and proved that much. What the hell is up with his lawyer calling. He's such an asshole. So she says let's make this about the baby and This is how he handles that shit? Nah fam!! It just shows me he was blowing smoke up her ass this whole time with the 'I love yous' 

if I could reach his nuts right now to kick him in them!!!

He's being shady af!!!

More soon!!!



Author's Response:

Michael is really being Mr. Shadyboots! Lawdy!

And yes, he obviously wanted to get some and when she turned him down, maybe he got upset.

But calling the lawyer is really extreme, especially with no warning! Can't help but think this is some revenge type shit.

And I think he needs a swift kick... 

we'll see what he's up to!

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 30, 2015 12:32 pm Title: Chapter 18-If We

Chile BYE! While it's nice that his trifling ass knows that she's pregnant, I foresee her falling back into her usual bird ass ways with him again. All this woe is me, you hurt me and crying bullshit. Girl grow up. Michael is not captain save a ho, nor is he a knight in shining armor. His ass is happy that he's essentially trapped her. Of course I know he wants kids, but this permanently cements her position as side chick. Smh. I do hope Trai lands a good woman, he deserves one. He seems to be a good man who has his shit together. He certainly doesn't need to be tangled in Dominique's bullshit and bird play. Trai handled the news of her pregnancy very gentlemanly, I really have respect for him. I'm just shaking my head because not only is Dee forever the side ho, but now Michael gets a child without having to even need a surrogate. He gets the cake and can eat it too. Yet again, Dominique STAYS holding L's. SMH



Author's Response:

It does seem like a trap, doesn't it?

And now there's no way for her to get out of it.

Let's hope she makes the right choices,

Really love reading your reviews, so funny.

Maybe one day she will drop some L's? lol 

Reviewer: DirtyKayKay Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2015 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 18-If We

Michael bye! I'm not fooled by his reaction. Yeah there's some genuine joy there, I'll give him that, but that doesn't make up for the fact that he's still married and will probably remain married. Stressed? No stressed is having to carry a child that you're not even sure you want. Stressed is being yelled at over the phone by the lover who broke your heart. He wasn't stressed. He was just being a selfish jerk. Now Trai is going to fight for her. He cares about her alot and I can see that she's falling for him too. I just feel like Michael will set her back so far. He's going to slither his way in and hurt her again. I can't wait to see what happens next. What is he going to tell Lisa? The media? This baby ain't just falling from the sky. I wonder what his excuse will be then. 



Author's Response:

We'll see if Dee is! And yes, the fact remains that he is still married and has an outside baby on his wife. And stressed is such a copout compared to what Dee is going through, which you so perfectly said. Dee has alot to think about. At this point, she's doubting Michael's word. The future is totally unclear, where will they be in 7 months? Michael will still be married? Will she be doing most of the work on her own? Just so many questions.. and I do think that maybe Dee isn't completely sure about the baby. She's young and its alot of pressure, but that options gone now that Michael knows.

Trai...my boy! He's real man and  that's just what Dee needs. Its great that he's going to stay down for her. She's going to need that support to deal with the fuckery.

And yes, there's alot to think about!Will he tell Lisa? His family? He's going to have alot of explaining to do and that "stress" will be real and he better not take it out on Dee.

love your reviews<3 thank you

Reviewer: Fire-in-her-veins Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2015 10:13 am Title: Chapter 18-If We

MJ is being a fucking asshole. He thinks that apologies, pretty words and empty promises will get her to agree to fuck him again and now the only reason why he wants her in his life is because she's pregnant. That won't fix any of their issues. She should have gotten an abortion i hated how the doctor and Mimi kept pressuring and guilt tripping her out of it. It's her body her choice. What if he decides to get full custody of the kid just because he's pissed at her? I really don't think she should go through with it. It won't fix anything. If they are going to be together he needs to get his priorities straight and get one hell of a reality check. She deserves better than to be fucked around with by some immature, arrogant rich dick.



Author's Response:

You pulled Mike's card! lol. 

It's really complicated for these two and i'm hoping Dee will get her shit together. It seems that she wants to keep this baby but it won't be easy by any means.

She does deserve better.

Thanks for your review :)

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2015 04:30 am Title: Chapter 18-If We

First off Trai is a sweetheart. A very stand up guy. I think it's best they leave it as friends for now because there's still the little matter of not only Dee being preggers but the fact she's still in love with Michael and I don't see that changing at all.  I'll be shocked as hell if she does. 

Michael's reaction was pretty much expected. He kinda predicted this happening in a way. Foreshadowing and such. He wanted her to have his babies. Granted the premise of it was fucked up. Why you gotta be fucked up Michael?!?

I'm questioning just how much he's being sincere about his love for Dee. Boi you better come correct for my girl!!! He's got shit to prove to me. Lol. 

I cabbaged patched a little when I saw the update. Once I get started reviewing, you won't get rid of me. I'm consumed!

More soon <333



Author's Response:

Isn't he such a good guy? And yes, I agree. The last thing on Dee's mind should be a relationship due to that slight issue of being pregnant! And yes that's going to take alot of time. While it first it seemed like they were just having fun, we can see how much he truly cares for her.

Yup, there goes Michael speaking stuff into existence. He wanted this. So he's ecstatic that everything he wanted is coming to pass. He wanted her pregnant and now he has her back with him. All this while he is still married! He is fucked up! ;L

Right? Again, I hope those i love you's are sincere and I think her telling him, might be the push he needs ....hopefully

And lmfao I love it.  And of course not, I'm enjoying your reviews and I'm happy you love this story so much !

More is coming!

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 28, 2015 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 18-If We

Awww, why Dee?? Why girl??? Why break up with Trai. He was too good to you to let go. Nooooo!!!!! But I guess I can take being just friends. I know she doesn't want.to burden him with her problems and thongs but I think he was going to stay with her regardless her pregnancy. You don't find too many men who would do that. By I wish she gave him a chance.

Now....wtf is Michael back???? Lawd, I can see it now. He's gonna.use that baby against her damn will forHer to come running back into his married man arms.

Now, I do believe him when he said he is going to take care of everything. He loves children so much.

But Dee deserves happiness and.I'll be rammed if she go back running to his no good ass...most of the time, but still. Mike is dirty when he wanna be but she cant blame nobody else for Her actions. You chose him and you dealt with his drama. That's all I can say.

More soon.



Author's Response:

Oh no! Yeah it was tough to end it with Trai. they were on a good path and I think Dee needed that. But yes, it will be good to have him as a friend. And never say never! And Trai is a great man, he's not going anywhere.

And of course Michael is back. He knew shit was getting raggedy with Dee so he had to come thru. And yeah I can definitely see him doing that.

Hopefully, he really will make it all right. 

-Sigh- Let's hope she stands strong. I know Michael will definitely have some tricks up his sleeve to keep her close to him.

more is soon !

Reviewer: Dreamer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 28, 2015 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 18-If We

Trai's a good guy. Forreal, forreal. I'm digging him, but I gotta say that I'm not with Michael right now. And Dee, she's tripping. I couldn't be that cool after a man I've been screwing around with just treats me like whatever. I wouldn't be able to decipher his true emotions, ya know. Yes, he's excited about the child but what about her? Know what I mean? Dee better take her heart off her sleeve, because I feel like Michael's gonna hurt even more. 



Author's Response:

Isn't he wonderful? Stark contrast to Michael and maybe that is because he's a married man >.>

And you know it might look like Dee is being cool with it, but I think deep inside she's super angry and hurt. She has issues expressing herself to Michael. Considering how he usually acts...hopefully as time goes on she will get better with that.

And right, its hard to tell where his head is at. 

And yes! Dee's really got to toughen up and prepare for the worst, cause Michael definitely can bring the worst

Thanks so much for your review!

Reviewer: Briannasamuels Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 28, 2015 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 18-If We

Finally !! He knows and he reacted just as I expected but I hope that he stays true to his words and makes things right before the baby come and I'm glad trai is being supportive even thought I'm not for anything romantic with him and dee it's just good that she has support and now that Michael knows I bet there will be a lot of changes , such a great update keep up the good writing and update sooner pleaseeee 



Author's Response:

All we can do is hope that he does right by Dee.

For right now, Trai and Dee are just friends which is great for both of them. Cause no one can do this alone.

Thank you so much and I will do my best! this update came out pretty fast!

 

Reviewer: MikeyIsKing Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 28, 2015 05:17 pm Title: Chapter 17-Remember the Time

Mom, I didn't read this.

Just Kidding.

 

I wish that Michael would just make up his god damn mind.



Author's Response:

me toooo!

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 28, 2015 09:07 am Title: Chapter 17-Remember the Time

OMG. New reader!!! I'm about to drop out of school to read this story full time!! It's Amazing. I'm kidding about school I've graduated like twice already. lol. You're a great writer and very good at evoking emotions. It's a beautiful gift!  I read this whole story today at the edge of my seat the whole time!!

Looking forward to more soon. <333



Author's Response:

Oh my gosh, yay a new reader! I love your story Cradle to the Grave so hearing that from you means alot!

And thank you so much, I worked really hard to make this story exciting and interesting in every chapter.

This is a very emotion driven story so I strive to make sure the reader can feel Dee's hurt, confusion, pain, fear,etc.

More coming soon!

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