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Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 25, 2016 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 40-Old Habits

I'm glad to see you back. I've been MIA myself so no need to apolgize. And I'm graduating too. May 12th is my day but you're right about school, it's drives you nuts.

 

Michael is a tripod swear. Getting a lil buzzed before going to Dee's place telling her what happened then kisses her and tries to sex her up too. I'm just glad she told him what was up and how she truly felt about everything that has happened between them.

I wonder what's gonna happen next.

Reviewer: Gabby7 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 25, 2016 07:03 am Title: Chapter 40-Old Habits

Loved every bit of this chapter. I felt bad for Michael, but to be honest, he bought it upon himself. She's a woman scorn and the moment he tried kissing her and told her he wanted to be inside of her, I knew she was going to respond that way. Michael has the opportunity to redeem himself with Dee, I just hope he doesn't mess it up. Great chapter and can't wait to see what's next to follow.

 

Missed you and this story tons... And congrats on graduation... I'm right behind you.  



Author's Response:

I hope he doesn't either. Hopefully this was another wakeup call for him!

 

Thanks for reading <3

Reviewer: CarleyMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 25, 2016 04:11 am Title: Chapter 3- Can't Say No

How can you not say to Michael :)

Reviewer: CarleyMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 25, 2016 04:10 am Title: Chapter 2-I Should've Known

Lisa seems to be not fair about having Kids with Michael. Can't believe he even Married Lisa.

Reviewer: CarleyMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 25, 2016 04:06 am Title: Chapter 1-Saving All My Love

New Reader here. Loved it great chapter. Dangerous Mike I love.

Reviewer: justdoitbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 31, 2016 11:59 am Title: Chapter 39-Skeletons

Are you going to post the next chapter soon ?

Reviewer: justdoitbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 17, 2016 06:45 am Title: Chapter 39-Skeletons

When are you gonna post the next chapter ? I hope soon, goodness !



Author's Response:

have to get it written first! lol hopefully before the month is up :) Thanks for loving the story so much 

Reviewer: justdoitbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 06, 2016 05:52 am Title: Chapter 39-Skeletons

I love it so so so so so so MUCH !

God bless you "MichaelBeMine", you are amazing !

Reviewer: oblivion Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 04, 2016 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 39-Skeletons

ohhhh i knew it was a matter of time! he deserved that slap though. hopefully lisa dont tell the tabloids  :0

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 03, 2016 10:51 am Title: Chapter 39-Skeletons

LAWD GIRL!!!!! Shoot Michael's balls took a trip on him. Why the hell was he still trying to play this farse up?!?!? Like shit you care for her but you know damn well you want Dee. You can not have both Michael. That would probably be his ideal too. After all what's the use of having cake and not eating it too right?  Lmao. 

Now he knows what Lisa's been holding in the back of her mind this whole time. It's not just what her mother thought she thought those things on some level too. If she had to fight to believe otherwise what she says she was doing is just as shady as what Michael was doing. She never planned on giving him any children. That's fucked up. 

I hope Michael's balls came back from that vacay with that last slap to the face and now he'll serve her those damn papers like a man. 

What did he expect would happen? He would spout his sorry ass apologies and Lisa would be "oh okay Michael lets work this out amicably so you can still see the kids ok? Ok!" Nah son. This bout to be messy af!!

I know the shit hasn't finished hitting the fan yet. It's just the beginning. *Inserts Mochael eating popcorn gif*

More soon! <333



Author's Response:

Michael needs to just let it go.lol No point in holding out these false feelings of love towards Lisa...

And yes! Some of Lisa's innermost thoughts came to light. I know that hurt Michael deep. So I think that on top of her calling him a shitty father just was too much. She knows that's all he wants.

And yes, it's just the beginning!

Stay tuned <3

Reviewer: Gabby7 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 02, 2016 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 39-Skeletons

And the bitch is gone! Though I'm sure that's no where near what he had planned, I'm glad she's out the picture. I couldn't even hold my smile in once he told her Dee was pregnant. My only concern is if Lisa will go to the media. 

 

Please se keep it coming. Love this story. 



Author's Response:

lmao I love your review. How you don't give a fuck about Lisa.  And yes, he will have no problems getting the divorce he wanted.

 

And shit its like you read my mind, you know I love messy situations XD

Thank you so much <3

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 02, 2016 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 39-Skeletons

Lisa had me cracking up in this chapter. When she read what was written in the back of the pics, I let out this big laugh. Kinda like what the old folks make. It's more like a yelp, kml. Anyway, Mike couldn't take the heat So he got drove and told her to stop. So intense.

A little bit of the blame card was being played here but all I can say is, whether or not Lisa did wrong and whatever she did with Danny at the time, hers will never match up to Michael's being that his mess up was 1,000 Times worst than hers. He got another woman pregnant and all this crap. Just a mess right now. Yeah, I would have slapped the piss outta him too so I don't blame her for that even though I laughed at that too.

The divorce settlement needs to hurry up on here cause that just confirmed the end of Michael and Lisa Marie Presley-Jackson. 

 

Reviewer: BluJayWay Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 02, 2016 07:35 pm Title: Chapter 39-Skeletons

Whelp, looks like that divorce will come faster than expected. The press is gonna have a field day. Here we go!!!

Reviewer: DirtyKayKay Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 02, 2016 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 39-Skeletons

Mmmohmygod. *sighs* I swear I had to put my phone down halfway through this chapter so I could collect myself. Okay, so the last two chapters were amazing. I got alittle taste of holiday sex and I was pleased. I'll go back and reread to reminisce. Anyway, the next chapter Michael got on my nerves as always. I really hope Trai doesn't get hurt with all the bullsh*t Michael and Dee are going through. He's a good man and I hope Dee lets him know that they can only be platonic. She's hurting, which is why she is so jaded towards Michael. That's understandable, however she needs to make her mind up on if she wants to pursue him or just keep it platonic as well. Anyway, moving onto this chapter. Lord....okay, so I just want to punch Michael dead in his throat. Just make his adam's apple touch the back of his neck. Okay so, I'm on Lisa's side all the way. Michael has taken it too far. Blaming Lisa? Yeah, she had her faults but Michael was hoing throughout their entire marriage. Like why tf did you marry Lisa in the first place? I'm still lost in the dark on that one. And he's childish. Like he's REALLY childish. Why is she going through his stuff? That's besides the point. Why are YOU hiding nudes in the library. Of all places. Not a shoe box. Not in an envelope and stuffed in his sock drawer. No, the library. In a damn book. Did he not realize that people go into the library to read? Anyway, he's not remorseful enough for me. He's more mad at the fact that she found the damn pictures than he is at what's actually on the pictures. I don't know anymore. I just don't know if I want Michael anywhere near Dee. He's likely to do the same sh*t to her when the baby comes along. She'd be at home and he'd be making goo-goo eyes at the next hot piece of tail that sashays his way. This is too much for my heart. And on that note, i'm going to go sip on some wine and call it a night. Excellent chapter my dear. More please! 



Author's Response:

Kay!

Aww I love reading your reviews, they make me so happy. Ha, I'm glad you could have that reaction to this chapter cause shit got real! And honestly you inspired the holiday chapter, especially since they won't be getting it on anytime soon during the current time frame. loool. And yeah Trai just needs to focus on work and not Dee cause she doesn't have her shit together, you can definitely see feelings are involved. It can only be platonic. And speaking of platonoic, I feel like Dee knows its probably for the best to stay away from Michael, but she's so in love with him, I don't think she'll be able to just co-parent, despite what she says.

lmao, Michael tried it. He was super defensive. Lisa got him all the way together and I think everyone was waiting on it. Michael was dumb for hiding the pictures there smh.

And good point, he could do the same thing to Dee. I mean let's hope he truly means it when he says he loves her and wants t obe with her, not just keep her under his thumb.

Enjoy ze wine for me <3 thank you darling 

Reviewer: mjsbadbabygirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 02, 2016 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 39-Skeletons

Oh my goodness girl you better fuck it up lmao, this chapter was soo good! Yes Michael tell her off, I need him to be more agressive and just tell her he wants a divorce already because she is just trying to push all of the problems she caused onto him. 



Author's Response:

Aw thank you so much. He should be careful being aggressive before he gets slapped again lol.

 

 

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