Date: Aug 06, 2015 02:25 pm Title: Chapter 21-Seven
- wow that was unexpected Michael seems to really be changing for dee and the baby and the fact that he's taking her out to dinner and by trying to sleep with her is a good sign , I think the planes has something to do with moving Lisa Marie out and moving dee and the baby in and trai has a point telling her not to work herself up she needs to stay calm and go with the flow
Author's Response:
Aww, I know. Look at Michael trying to do the right thing.
Let's see where this goes!
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2015 12:26 am Title: Chapter 20-Actions and Reactions
This story is really incredible please keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
wow, thank you so much <3333333 that means a lot to me!
[Report This]Date: Aug 03, 2015 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 9- The Way You Put it Down
I love "Last time" By Trey and while I was reading it I kept on saying "This sounds like Last time" especially the spread those lovely legs part lol. I know my music lol, I loved this chapter though, Dee really doesn't deserve that at all.
Author's Response:
Haha I listened to that like 20 times. And I figured i throw in some key lyrics to it :P
This is one of my favorite chapters. And you're right. Michael totally did a horrible job ending their relationship.
[Report This]Date: Aug 03, 2015 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 4-Happy Birthday to You
I can't believe I'm just now reading this story and wow am I happy I did, this is amazing. She feels so torn and heart broken, she's so lost and looking for love in the wrong places and Michael he knows better than to string her along like that. Keep up the good work girl!
Author's Response:
thank you so much <3 that means alot to me. and i love how everything is coming together about the characters. You totally get it!
Michael has his flaws, but so does Dee.
[Report This]Date: Aug 03, 2015 01:59 pm Title: Chapter 20-Actions and Reactions
Trai to the rescue!!! She needs that man. Leave Michael in the dust. So, he knew Dominique before Lisa? Or did Michael mess around with them both at the same time then ran off to marry Lisa? That still isn't clear to me, unless I missed it.
Can we get some more Michael? ;)
Author's Response:
He definitely was seeing both of them at the same time. I'm using about the same timeline in reality. There will be more deets on that later.
And of course you can <3 He's coming back next chapter <3
Date: Aug 03, 2015 10:37 am Title: Chapter 20-Actions and Reactions
I don't think she's being paranoid. Michael is a manipulate piece of shit who's used to getting what he wants, when he wants. His lawyer calling could literally mean ANYTHING, and she needs to be prepared. She's been a blind dumb bird for too long so it's time for her to wake up. Michael is not who she fooled herself into thinking he was so she needs to start getting real about this situation. She's about to bring a child into this world as a side ho for a married man. The most famous one in the world, at that! That flashback is the same as others, pure bs. Honestly if Dee had any damn sense she would not wanna be with a man who would come sleep with her right after he got married! That shit is trifling as hell!!! He would do the SAME thing to Dee given the chance. If he will cheat with you, he will damn sure cheat ON you. There really are no words to stress how trifling Michael is. Lastly, I'm sure she's calling Trai for support. Maybe even to get back together.
Author's Response:
Girl, I love your reviews! Always on point and you never hold back on our girl Dee. You're right, she'd be an idiot to not prepare for that meeting. Like you said, it could be about anything. From custody to gag orders to anything literally! Dee is not dealing with your average joe, she's dealing with Michael fucking Jackson lol.
<3
Date: Aug 03, 2015 05:45 am Title: Chapter 20-Actions and Reactions
Also to add on Michael isn't that heartless her might be a whole lot of things " in this story " but he would never take the baby away from her and trai need to go be corrupting my baby from being with Michael , they belong together if he could get it shit together properly and what's going out with Michael and Lisa Marie ? There hasn't been a chapter that focused on them maybe that would help us see why he acts a certain way towards dee and hopefully the next chapter is longer pleaseeee but anyways love the writing it up boo
Author's Response:
It's not about being heartless, it's about him wanting what he wants and Dee denying him of what he wants:her. She's never done that before so Michael has to switch up the game a little and maybe this lawyer thing is really nothing and he just wants to clean up his mess.
and as far as Trai goes, I think he is good for her, in a friend way. We'll see if Dee and Michael truly belong together. No doubt Dee is still in love with him.
This story is from the perspective of the other woman only so when things like this happen, it shows the confusion and lost that she feels. She only knows what Michael chooses to tell her.
I will try to make it longer next time, thanks for the review !
Date: Aug 03, 2015 05:32 am Title: Chapter 20-Actions and Reactions
- I think she is jumping to conclusions and the lawyer could have been calling for any reason and why call trai ? Doesn't It make more sense to call back the lawyer to see what is going on ? But noo she wants to run to a man and that's exactly why she's on the situation she is in now running to a man to save her or some shit smh , I feel for her but she will never learn , the smart decision would have been to call the lawyer
Author's Response:
I think she will call Michael's lawyer, she won't put it off too long. Probably waiting till the next business day.
She calls Trai cause aside from Mimi, that's the only person she's got. And you're right maybe she does have this thing about running to a man for help. But also Trai can actually help her, cause what would she know about her rights or what to expect at this meeting? She'd be a fool not to get prepared.
[Report This]Date: Aug 03, 2015 03:12 am Title: Chapter 20-Actions and Reactions
Well, to a certain extinct she is over reacting. I don't think he would try to keep her baby from her. I just think he got his lawyer to call her up to sign some confidentiality agreement papers because he's married to Lisa and have and have an unknown woman the world knows nothing about pregnant. I really think that's what that is.
Now, for Mike to go MIA now after their talk and not hit her up asap, I'm starting to feel some type of way now. Idk.
So he marries Lisa in their past and tell Dee he loves her and she has his heart and blah blah. Fuck yourself Mike, lol.
I think she's calling tray since he is some type of lawyer or something So that he can help her in case she may need a lawyer. A free one at that.
But all I can say is, Mike better not be trying to take her baby away. Ian kill him.
Author's Response:
Let's hope you're right! All of that makes sense btw.
I think Michael not callling and letting her know is also contributing to her thought process.
Haha yeah fuck you Mike.
A good, free lawyer.
Oh boy, let's hope not :)
[Report This]Date: Aug 03, 2015 12:41 am Title: Chapter 20-Actions and Reactions
Omg. So intense. The build up got me and I don't know what to think. Lol. I don't think however he wants to take the baby but that could just be my naivety toying with my heart cause I expect better of Michael. He's so bullshit tho. Lawwwwwwwdd!!!! She may just be a little paronoid because of his power.
Calling Trai for legal advise for what she's not even sure is going to happen is a bit of a jump. What can she tell him really? Hopefully it's just for support and a hand to hold other than Mimi's.
You have me at the edge of my seat girl!!!
more soon!!<333
Author's Response:
See, I do think Dee is overreacting a bit, but its not unwarranted. Lately, she's been doubting Michael in more ways than one and she never knows what she's going to get.
And I think his power and money are making her think the worst.
They say an active imagination can be a dangerous thing.
We'll see what she wants from Trai soon enough!
Thanks for reading <3
Date: Aug 01, 2015 08:45 pm Title: Chapter 1-Saving All My Love
I loved how you didn't cut any corners and just got right into it, very creative!
Author's Response:
Aww thank you so much, I appreciate it!
Date: Aug 01, 2015 07:53 pm Title: Chapter 19-The Worst
Awwww sheeit. I'm ready to see what happens next!
Author's Response:
I know right! Thanks for your review!
[Report This]Date: Aug 01, 2015 01:56 pm Title: Chapter 19-The Worst
This story is good!! Can't wait to see for next update and Michael is all talk he gonna mess up again.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! <3
Date: Jul 31, 2015 07:35 pm Title: Chapter 1-Saving All My Love
I forgot to mention in my review I had updated New Flame.
[Report This]Date: Jul 31, 2015 12:15 pm Title: Chapter 19-The Worst
You go Dee. I am so proud of her for standing her ground and not giving into his nonsense and promises that he don't even fulfill. Wat to go girl. All they need to do is focus on that baby and that's it.
Now, in a way I feel she is ready but in a way not because of the father being Michael. That's understandable. Knowing him, his ass could just take her child away just cause he is who he is. But I'm not gonna jinx her with that. He better not tho.
And why the hell is his lawyer on the phone???? And not him???? Wtf is going on??? I feel like something is going to go down now.
More soon.
Author's Response:
Aren't we all so proud of her for standing her ground despite Michael's tricks. Shes getting better!
yes having michael as the father will definitely be tough and I do think she has alot of growing up to do
and yes shit's getting real!