




Date: Aug 19, 2015 11:32 pm Title: Chapter 24-Alone, yet Together
Well why is she worrying about childcare costs. Michaelbhas to help raise that baby. He can be involved in the baby's life without being with Dee. She shouldn't feel the need to go back to him because of financial constraints. Taking care of his child should be a give. She's not technically going to be a single mom. I didn't see that happening.
As much as Michael wants this child he's not going to let Dee have sole custody and not be involved. So really he's not out of the way.
If she's still in love with him it's going to be tough.
I just need to see him make the right moves to set things straight. I certainly don't want him with The Chin.
Min the flashback he did acknowledge his part in her being fired so there's hope yet for him.
More soon <333
Author's Response:
Maybe Dee wants to be independent? It's not so much that he's out of the way, but that she's trying to figure it out herself. Which I give her props for.
Michael obviously still loves and cares for her, but everything right now is so up in the air!
We'll see more into her plans for the future soon!
HA, the Chin lol.
Thanks for your review!
Date: Aug 16, 2015 06:33 am Title: Chapter 23-This
Aw my gaaaaaahd that happened.
Date: Aug 16, 2015 06:32 am Title: Chapter 22-Why Her?
I don't think Dee actually understands him. Has she read the tabloids? It's obvious he's sad girl.
Date: Aug 16, 2015 12:19 am Title: Chapter 23-This
She should be sick and tired of crying. That takes up so much energy. Just be done with Michael and stand firm in it. She says it's over, so she needs to really stick on that. Every time she has a flashback, all it does is cause more pain because she realizes how dumb and naive she was. Time to stop being his fool. No more dates, no more seeing him, and they don't even need to talk unless it's about the baby. They keep having the same argument and it keeps rendering the same results. Enough is enough already, damn. Michael's lies, bullshit and manipulations are PAST old. Dee needs to leave all that shit behind and start getting herself together for real. Set some damn boundaries and STICK with them! I don't see what good it's doing to keep rehashing the same shit over and over. She's gonna stress herself out and endanger that baby. If she had any good sense, she would start to get herself together and surround herself with people that actually matter and do care for her. I hope Trai makes an appearance in the next chapter, I miss his sexy self.
Date: Aug 15, 2015 08:35 pm Title: Chapter 23-This
Good for Dee. I'm glad she's not letting Michael control things. But she will still have to deal with him for the baby. If Michael really wants this to work, he needs to prove himself to her.
Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Yes!He definitely will need to prove himself for her and this child. Let's hope he doesnt scrêw it up!
and thank you!





Date: Aug 15, 2015 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 23-This
He's so damn handsome I can't stand him!!!!!! Lol that gif threw me of for a minute. Got me like "damn Michael you right boo you ain't never did no wrong you hear me!"
But we know his ass ain't right at all. Man I felt every nuance in this chapter. Dee is right. She's hurting herself and in turn the baby. I can't honestly say I have an inkling about what's going to happen but I know the heavens and earth have to be moved along with some of them divorce papers for any of the wrongs that happened here to be righted. Will he see his messy ways? I damn sure hope so with his fine ass.
Why u put that gif? Lmaooooo. (Stared for longer than I will ever let be known)
More soon!! <333
Author's Response:
Ikr. Gif's are my life. Especially one's of him. Looking at that face for too long would make any woman weak in the knees!
Yes, there were little things dropped in this chapter that will come back around later. There's no way Dee can have a healthy pregnancy going on like this. The ups and downs, the drama is so not good for her.
And you right! Michael will have to move mountains for anything to work out between them. That's if it's not too late!
I put that gif cause he looks delectable in it. And girl! I couldn't stop staring either! Prepare to be assaulted by sexy/cute MJ gifs at the end of my chapters!
More will be cming soon. <3





Date: Aug 15, 2015 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 23-This
Lord for Mike ask when did he ever lied..... uh, plenty of times my nigga. PLENTY!!!!! Reading flashback, Dee should have left the moment she had the chance. But damn, 'love' can really keep you from doing something you really want to do.
All I can say is, I'm proud that she's letting go of him for good for the sake of herself. She needs to cause she's in pain, her heart is broken and alot more villainy Michael caused her to feel. I'm glad it's over.
Dee, you're doing the right thing girl. Let his ass go. But I know Mike is not gonna give up on her. I can feel it, lol. He's just selfish. He needs to let her go too so she can be stressed free. But he is not gonna let her go that easily I know for sure. Watch.
Btw, I updated RBIY.
Author's Response:
Girl! Michael triiiieeeed it asking that dumbass question.
And Dee wanted to go, she knew what was happening wasn't healthy.
And we know very well that Michael is not letting her go that easily.
And I know, I read it and reviewed :D





Date: Aug 15, 2015 06:28 pm Title: Chapter 23-This
I'm not surprised that she did that and I cant say that I'm sorry for Michael coz I'm not. It sounds harsh maybe but I don't pity him. His should have done the right thing from the beginning imo loved it always girl and congrats on your nomination and I hope that you win. Can't wait for more :)
Author's Response:
Right? It's may just be a little too late.
And thank you very much darling <3





Date: Aug 15, 2015 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 23-This
Yassss honey! Finally!!!!
Leave his doggin ass behind. Sorry, Michael, but you can't treat a woman that way and expect her to stay! I'm just saying.
Anyway, great chapter! Looking forward to the next!
Author's Response:
Awww yay, finally its time for her to do the right thing for her.
Thank you so much love! And I just binge read your stories. You're amazing <3





Date: Aug 15, 2015 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 23-This
Oh my heart, I have a lump in my throat. Girl is is incredible and I know it too a lot of thinking and balls for Dee to say that to Michael but its true they needed to break up so that she wouldn't have so much stress on the baby. I felt like crying with her lol.
Author's Response:
Aww thank you so much hun. <3 That means alot. And yes, she's been struggling with whether to stay or go for so long. And yeah I don't know how much longer she could go through this kinda stress with the baby. Somethings got to give. About time she put herself first.
Date: Aug 15, 2015 03:50 pm Title: Chapter 23-This
- I see that she is hurt but she's not even giving him a chance to prove himself , she's not even looking what will happen in the future , what about the baby ? Doesn't the baby deserve to have is parents together , I feel Michael needs to shower her but how can he if she's pushing him away ? And she knows she can't handle a baby alone and she needs to realize her world is about to change ! Keep pushing him away and you'll be more alone then ever
Author's Response:
This is a tough one. If you look at from Dee's side, he's had so many chances to prove himself and do the right thing. I think she's honestly tired of it. That kinda stress cannot be good for her or her baby.
And Michael...he deserves to be pushed away and hopefully this is wakeup call for him too.
And that poor baby, they will have no choice but to eventually pull it together for the sake of the child.





Date: Aug 15, 2015 05:47 am Title: Chapter 22-Why Her?
Loved it girl and I'm all caught up. This update was awesome. And Mike bruh your going to have to work harder to convince Dee that's you really want her and not coz she's pregnant. Coz bruh she's not buying anything that your saying...
Author's Response:
He's going to have to put it that work.





Date: Aug 15, 2015 05:34 am Title: Chapter 21-Seven
I love this story. Dee is just trying to look out for the baby I think. And I believe that Mike is trying to protect Dee but at the same time his worried about what will happen once the news breaks that he and Lisa are getting a divorce. Almost caught up :)
Author's Response:
Right, there are just so many factors in this.





Date: Aug 15, 2015 05:22 am Title: Chapter 20-Actions and Reactions
Nope she's doing what any mother would do. Protect their child. Mike is looking so shady and suspect. Bit I think that his won't take the baby. I think that Dee is getting a lawyer in case it does turn into a custody battle and she needs the support from a friend
Author's Response:
He is shady as hell!!!!!!





Date: Aug 15, 2015 05:12 am Title: Chapter 19-The Worst
I love Living Single. It's a shame that it got canceled. It's really hard to believe Mike. His can be saying anything to get what he wants. But then again he could be straight up. Wait a minute John Branca is calling her? Hmmm..wonder what that is all about. Still hooked on this :)
Author's Response:
I love that damn show! Who knows with Mike these days?