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Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 05, 2015 12:45 pm Title: Chapter 26-Truth Is..Part II

I rolled my eyes so hard lol. For all that mess that followed, trai might as well got some before he left. Even though I'm not a fan of Dee, I can agree with you cant just drop a bomb like that and expect to not inquire or talk about it. I think Trai is genuine but he's not a fool. He knows Dee isn't in love with him and I think he kept cutting her off in order to not face that reality and rejection. Poor man is just tryna shield himself. Can't say I completely blame him for leaving either. But Dee is wrong for trying to compare him to Michael. They ain't shit alike. And speaking of his trifling ass, he would call. I'm sure Lisa wasn't too far away. Probably in another part of the house smh. Him asking who is Trai ain't none of his damn business and if Dee is not a complete and utter fool which is hard to believe at this point, she won't even engage him. Let his mind wander. If she had her shit together, Trai would be her man. He's calling to only talk about the baby would be cute if it wasn't for his ulterior motives. Which he so conveniently slid in at the very end there. He's gonna forever use this child as a means to either guilt her into being with him and try to force his way into her personal life. A mess. 



Author's Response:

Trai was definitely throwing up his walls to protect himself. He knew the conversation was never going to go in his favor so he left before he could get hurt.

And yesss of course Michael calls, that's what he does lol.  And yep he definitely was being slick at the end. I wonder will Dee end up taking his offer?

Reviewer: eazybreezy2015 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 04, 2015 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 26-Truth Is..Part II

I think that Trai is right and she doesn't love him. I think that she still wants Mike but she's too stubborn to admit it. And I don't blame her really coz Mike put her thru a lot of shit. Ermm...I think that he is not going to let it go. but we see wat happens. Loved it girl and it's understandable coz i'm back in school too so I know how busy that you can get :)



Author's Response:

Yep...she's between a rock and a hardplace. She loves him so much yet she knows he's no good for her..and it doesn't help now that she's tied to him for life :l

Reviewer: Dreamer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 04, 2015 04:59 am Title: Chapter 26-Truth Is..Part II

C'mon Mike, no one wants you homie. Okay, wait, that's a lie. We all want Michael. Haha, but seriously Dee shouldn't allow Michael to just do as he pleases. I know he's the father of her child, but still. He's done to Dee and he's still hurting her, calling her when he's beside his wife. Has it not gotten through his head yet? Seriously. And Trai...Dee's gon mess around and push him away. Forreal forreal. 



Author's Response:

Michael really needs to get it together and let's hope he doesn't plan on using the baby as a bargining chip to get Dee right back under his thumb!

Reviewer: m0ni_89 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2015 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 26-Truth Is..Part II

OMG! I'm flipping out of my seat! I was wondering when you would update! Thanks for making my next better! I'll be back!



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YAY!!!

Reviewer: DirtyKayKay Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2015 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 26-Truth Is..Part II

I think Trai and Dee were both childish in a way. Trai brushed off what he said like it was no big deal and automatically assumed she doesn't feel the same way he does. First of all, he hasn't known her long enough or spent time with her long enough to be falling in love. I'm all for love at first sight, but just two chapters ago he was adament on being friends and only friends, now suddenly he's in love? You can't just throw those words at someobody and expect it to not be a big deal. And Dee wouldn't know love it it bit her in the ass. She's still busy (excuse my french) riding Michael's dick that she can't hop off long enough to let somebody else ride. She won't allow anyone to love her until she makes the decision to drop Michael all together or leave Trai alone for good. And what's with her wanting to hop in the bed with the man? I can't help but feel some type of way. Is she only using him as a courtesy fuck? Does she need something to get her mind off of Michael? Go read a damn book! And the nerve of her catching an attitiude when he said he wasn't DTF. Bye Felicia! Dee can exit stage left with that foolishness. I'm kind of glad she slipped up and mentioned Trai on the phone, on the other hand, Michael has a whole wife -- a WHOLE WIFE in bed with him. Why is he calling his preggo side boo while his wife in asleep? How low down can you get? When is he going to grow a pair and tell his wife his side piece is pregnant? I'm still waiting on this divorce announcement, but until then i'll just be sipping my tea. 



Author's Response:

I'll admit this was not Dee's best moment. And then on top of that, Trai's actually a good guy. So she just looks bad here.

And we shall see what transpires in the next few chapters, hang tight and hold on to that mug of Lipton! I'm brewing up another batch <3

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2015 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 26-Truth Is..Part II

Dee was about to lie her ass off if she thought of giving any other answer than the one she gave. She doesn't love Trai. It would have been bullshit if she did that to him and had him believe her. Thank God he didn't. I'm not even sure what she wanted him to say beyond that. 

Trai was trying to save face and possibly the friendship. Honestly what could he have told her? What was there to talk about after that really other than where they stood with the friendship?

I hope Michael felt that pinch of jealousy that another man could be calling for her at that time of the night. You ain't exclusive my dude. He's going to bring it up again. If he was there in bed with The Chin he can really catch these hands. Yuck!

The baby talk was cute but that's expected. It did have a strained feeling about the conversation. Almost awkward. But maybe that's just me. 

More soon  when you can! <333

 



Author's Response:

LOL. Dee should be glad Trai kept cutting her off. He must've know she was only going to spew more lies. smh

And yep Trai was trying to protect himself and go back before he confessed how he was feeling. He opted to leave before he said or did too much.

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2015 04:56 pm Title: Chapter 26-Truth Is..Part II

Whoo! I didn't expect for that to go down between her and Trai, especially Trai to just up and walk out. He really didnt give her a chance to speak so he can't get mad at that.

Now, that baby talk between Dee and Michael was cute. I'm not gonna lie, had me cheesing and everything. :)

But we all know Mike is not gonna let that Trai thing go. He's gonna wanna know all about him and bleh bleh as if it's his business. Lol.

More soon :) Btw, had recently updated RBIY and NF. 

 



Author's Response:

 yes it was! I want more baby talk between Michael and Dee. It's a nice change of pace from all the fuckery that usually ensues between these two. ;)

Reviewer: mjsbadbabygirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2015 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 26-Truth Is..Part II

I this Trai needs to listen to her, just take a breather and sit down and talk it out with Dee. As for Michael, I think he's starting to step up more but he needs to get away from Lisa and be a man that Dee and the baby can both love. I know he's trying to get divorced but at the same time you shouldn't still be in the same bed as her. 



Author's Response:

The definition of trifling...

Reviewer: Briannasamuels Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2015 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 26-Truth Is..Part II

Wow surprisingly Michael isn't trying anything on her and that's good that he's focused on the baby

Reviewer: Gabby7 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2015 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 26-Truth Is..Part II

Love it! I'm glad she said Trai's name so Michael will know that he CAN be easily replaced. Dee has every right to be shocked by what Trai told her, however I don't think he should have responded the way he did. Like really, who tells someone you love them, then tell them to forget about it? I should have evaluated the whole situation feisty before telling her that's. Also,  I am happy that her and Michael were able to talk about the baby without getting into it...and it warms my heart to see how excited he is. Love love love this story. Can't wait to read the next chapter! 



Author's Response:

Yep Dee let him know that he wasn't irreplacable and I can definitely see him asking more questions.

Trai definitely let his heart get ahead of his mind in this instance.

And yes their baby talk was adorable!

Reviewer: Thunder Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 02, 2015 01:46 pm Title: Chapter 25-Truth Is..

I stayed up far too late reading this. I managed some sleep, woke up, and just finished all 24 chapters. I am really enjoying your story and am going to try to wait patiently for the next chapter. Do you have an idea as to how many chapters there will be in total? It seems like you have barely scratched the surface. Normally I would frown with disgust at a woman who is after another woman's man, but Dee was there first. I can see her point of thinking he should be her man because he actually was at first. But when he up and married without telling her, and it hit her out of the blue, that should have been a wakeup call. What possible excuse could he have given for her to not kick his two timing ass out of her life? But she is in really deep and I feel for her plight. Looking forward to the rest of you story.



Author's Response:

Hmm I'm not sure.. maybe 50 chapters? I have alot of ideas brewing so who knows! So glad you're loving this story <3

Reviewer: mjsbadbabygirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2015 11:12 am Title: Chapter 25-Truth Is..

Aww I feel like Trai would be perfect for Dee, after everything she's beem through he's always there for her and its adorable. Dee, you need to get the hormones under control before you ended jumping on him worst than you already have lol. I'm sorry I didn't rreview last time I was babysitting from Friday all the way to Monday blehh. But I love this story so much, please update soon.

Reviewer: eazybreezy2015 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2015 01:08 am Title: Chapter 25-Truth Is..

Lol pregnant women and their hormones. Now I never thought that his would fall in love with her. I don't think that Dee is over Mike. Lol ummm that is a good question can I see another pic of Trai again?   I think that his will never be able to compare with Mike. Loved it girl. Can't wait for the next update :)

Reviewer: eazybreezy2015 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2015 12:57 am Title: Chapter 24-Alone, yet Together

Being a single mom is like the hardest job ever. Dee has a lot of decisions to make b4 the baby comes. And if Mike wants her back, his better prove it. I think that they both need to get it together b4 the baby comes. Going to read more :)

Reviewer: mjlifemate58 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2015 12:22 am Title: Chapter 1-Saving All My Love

Omg!! How could he be in love with her?! Trai being in love with her will only complicates things! now what's she going 2 do? u have 2 continue writing this story gets better and better. I love the gif of mj he looks 2 cute/sexy. I simply love it๐Ÿ˜€

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