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Reviewer: Annie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 08, 2015 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 6-Hot Date

I haven't said it in my previous reviews but I will say that Dominique is not a bad girl. She always think about how Lisa would feel. Some other women wouldn't think about it, especially with the gifts that comes with being involved with Michael.

“I love you more,” he kissed me hard one last time. “Oh and take this.” He reached into his back pocket and pulled his credit card from his wallet.

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I can't be the only one who found this mad disrespectful lmao



Author's Response:

Yes! Michael ain't shit for that. I'd like to think he had good intentions with that gesture but considering her position as the side chick...I'm just like damn Mike!!

Reviewer: Annie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 08, 2015 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 5- Fire We Make

Please MJFiction Ameriie, listen to real life Ameriie's songs and takes notes lol.

I am side-eyeing the fuck out of Michael.

http://i.imgur.com/KMo05jZ.gif

The nerve of him to scold her because she told him to leave his wife (which I expect every side chick to ask at some point lmao) and then tell her she has to make it up to him. I wish a man would!

He is totally taking advantage of her lack of self esteem and confidence.



Author's Response:

This chapter just shows how much power he has over her. And she doesn't even know it.

 

Reviewer: Annie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 08, 2015 07:37 pm Title: Chapter 4-Happy Birthday to You

"Does that still count? He says it more than counts, but I have my doubts."

Ofc Michael is not going to tell her she is too good to be the other woman and she should look for someone who will make of her the one and only.

Babygirl needs to find herself a bottle of self esteem. I don't think it's a matter of Michael loving Lisa more. I think he is stuck in his marriage and too coward to get a divorce. And why would he since he can have Ameriie (is her name Ameriie in this story?) anyways?



Author's Response:

Of course not! Michael wants to keep her safely under his thumb. 

And yep she needs it badlly. And her name is Dominique :) It was obscure for a while.

Reviewer: Annie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 08, 2015 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 3- Can't Say No

Even though I dont usually root for the other woman, I think she is being entirely too hard on herself. She shouldn't left her parents mistakes affect the her this way. And from what we can read, Michael is the one coming back so he has to be blamed too. To me it's 50/50 because she doesn't say no either.



Author's Response:

See that's what I love about this story is that you see it from her pow only and you do start to root for her..glad you're enjoying it and getting to know more about the other woman ;)

Reviewer: Annie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 08, 2015 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 2-I Should've Known

Argh, homegirl fell for the oldest trick in the book.

I like that you chose Ameriie for the story. She is so damn beautiful and I wanted to use her pictures for a story I'm working on.

I like the story so far :)



Author's Response:

I love her and her music. I thought she'd be different than the usual Beyonce or Rihanna. 

And yay thank you <3

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 07, 2015 11:34 pm Title: Chapter 27- All I Want is U

Nah I'm not here for his ass. He's been singing this same tired ass song since the beginning and will continue to sing it. Again, the only thing that is tying them together is this baby. Period point blank. Dee was the side chick and second choice and sadly that's what she will always remain. This child was conceived from an illicit affair. Not love. Dee is only playing herself per usual if she allows herself to fall for Michael's bullshit. But she's naive and still a bit immature so.. I really wouldn't be surprised at this point. Dee is trying to keep it focused on the baby as a means to not think about her feelings. Chile... A mess lol smh. Michael will continue to disgust me only because now he tryna make moves because she's pregnant. We all know damn well he wouldn't be "divorcing" Lisa if it weren't for that. That's what I can't get outta my head. If Dee wasn't pregnant... He wouldn't give a shit about her feelings or trying to be with her in the right way. I just can't respect Michael. 



Author's Response:

Everyone who reviews can see thru the bullshit. Let's hope Dee sees the light!

Love your reviews always <3

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 07, 2015 12:23 pm Title: Chapter 27- All I Want is U

For me to miss this update. Shame on me, lol.

Lord, Michael is really really trying to get Dee back. Look, I'm all for it unless she is. It's her final say, her decision on if she wants to take  him back. And for him to say they will always be an 'us' just because she's having his baby. That shit don't mean anything. Just because my parents had me doesn't mean shit. They're divorced so there is for damn sure not a 'them' anymore. They're co-parenting just like he and Dee needs to do. I can't believe he said that. Lol.

That man is a trip foreal. We'll see if Dee is all he wants. We'll see.

More soon.



Author's Response:

We will just have to see. Michael won't be easy to get rid of .



Author's Response:

We will just have to see. Michael won't be easy to get rid of .

Reviewer: DirtyKayKay Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 07, 2015 10:08 am Title: Chapter 27- All I Want is U

I'm immune to Michael's begging by now. 😒  I'm completely Ray Charles to his bullsh*t. He's been singing the same tune since the story began and he hasn't changed a damn thing yet. I'm not even sure a divorce would be enough to justify that his love for Dee is actually real. I guess I'll just have to be patient. He's taking too long to make his decisions final. He says he'll do anything to have her and the baby and live some dream life, but I don't see that happening. We'll see if he proves he wrong though.



Author's Response:

LOL I think everyone is! We will see how Dee responds.

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 07, 2015 08:24 am Title: Chapter 27- All I Want is U

Lmao. I'm laughing because my the last chapter of my story BEB ends with those exact same words. "All I want is you."

Lets see Michael. I hope to god that those where his nephews for real because if that's how he talks to Chin that's terrible. 

I want to believe him so bad you don't even know. I had so much faith in him in the begining now all his words seem like contrived half truths and manipulations. They need to have a mature face to face sit down and lay every thing on the table. EVERYTHING. Dee needs to have some deep self reflection before hand so she's coming to the table not only with her weakness for him but maturity. Her trying to play "the big girl" role is clouding her judgment if that makes any sense at all. Lol. I hope it does. 

More soon!! <333



Author's Response:

Hahahahhaha that would be sad if he talks to Lisa like that. smh

And I think everyone wants to believe him but he's done this in the past and nothing has changed at all! D;

Yes, they should have a heart to heart but for some reason everytime these two sit down, shit always goes left! We will see what happens!

 

Reviewer: oblivion Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 07, 2015 07:01 am Title: Chapter 27- All I Want is U

if he can change then she should give him a chance but can he change??? will he actually leave lisa?? 



Author's Response:

Who Knows!?

Reviewer: Gabby7 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 07, 2015 06:44 am Title: Chapter 27- All I Want is U

Despite what has already happened, I can see that this baby is changing Michael for the better. I can see him actually going through with his divorce to actually be a family with Dee and the baby, which is a good thing...but again actions speak louder than words. I do think she should allow him another chance, but I definitely understand how she feels throughout this situation and she does not deserve to be hurt anymore. She has the baby to think about...they both do. But if he really do change and go through with everything, and then she accepts hin back, Im ok with that. I would love too see how they would be as a family and to see her happy like she deserves. 

Great chapter!



Author's Response:

I hope he is changing cause boy Dee is in for a long ride if not.

Reviewer: tnoelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 07, 2015 06:25 am Title: Chapter 27- All I Want is U

Great chapter as always...LOVE the new banner by the way!



Author's Response:

thank you so much <3 

Reviewer: mjsbadbabygirl Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 07, 2015 05:39 am Title: Chapter 27- All I Want is U

Oh my gosh oh my gosh lol Michael tryna get back in there, but I have a feeling he's not gonna be the only one for some reason. She's gonna be in a pickle isn't she? But I hope she makes the right decision for her and her child, being a single mom is hard, I know because of my mom and I'm only 17 we haven't even started college funds lol. But I loved this chapter and I also updated ITE



Author's Response:

Yep! Mike definitely has some competition coming his way and fast!

 

Reviewer: eazybreezy2015 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 07, 2015 03:47 am Title: Chapter 27- All I Want is U

Dee's walls are up and she's not sure whether she should believe him or not. But she still loves him and yet she's trying to protect herself. She wants to focus on the baby and not think about them. I think that she's afraid to get her hopes up only to get them dashed. I think that his is trying. But talk is cheap and his need to prove it. Lol the gif of him dancing is too cute and funny. Loved this update girl. It was awesome b25;b25;



Author's Response:

It's so hard to believe anything he says because she's heard similar before and we know how that worked out..

We will see what happens <3

Reviewer: m0ni_89 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 05, 2015 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 26-Truth Is..Part II

Girl I know how busy things can get when school is going too! I missed you, but I completly understand. :)

First! I can understand why Trai walked out. He's hurting. He knows that if Dee tells him that she loves him then it will be a lie! I can understand why he got out of there when he could. But I know he's a good guy..so hopefully he will call her later once he gets his head on straight.

OMG!! Hahaha! I liiive! I've been waiting for Dee to call Michael by Trai since the begining of time!! Call me sadistic, but thats what his ass gets! lmao!

I'm glad Michael didn't try anything crazy this time around! I'm still in love with the idea of them making it work! He just needs to act right! Dammn what I need to know is, what will Lisa do once she finds out! Because his ass seems pretty care free right now! lol Michael honey, you may keep Dee a secret but you can't hide a baby. Lisa needs to gooo..

As always, the wait was well worth it! Thanks for updating! I'm leaving you a second review later! Check it out then!



Author's Response:

Trai walking out was definitely a defense mechanism..he knew he couldn't stay there a second longer. His will is only so strong and then to hear that Dee doesn't feel the same? yeah it hurts and of course he will call her.

And haha of course I had to slip that in for good measure, get the wheels turning in michael's head.

I want them to work too!

<3 thanks for the review

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