[Report This]Date: Sep 08, 2015 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 21-Seven
Trai is such a good man. One part of me wants Dom and him together but the other remembers he doesn't need this type of mess in his life. At least she has her support!
A family, Michael?
How does it work if it's supposed to be a secret, if he's still married, won't divorce and won't tell Lisa? Michael, you don't make any sense!
And look at him forcing his way into Dom's panties again. They can talk about it over the phone, no need to take her to a fancy restaurant. This is a trap, run girl!
"In seven months, I'll be divorced." LOL.
Even if he does get a divorce, Dom needs to think it through.
Simply because he is not married anymore, doesn't mean she has to get back with him. He has been an asshole and he is only trying to work it out because she is having his baby.
Then if they get together (lawd have mercy), what makes her sure he wont cheat on her? I mean, she's cute and everything but you lose them the way you get them.
[Report This]Date: Sep 08, 2015 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 20-Actions and Reactions
She is not paranoid, her pregnancy is making her things how they are. Michael ain't shit, I don't know what he has in mind but what is sure is that he TRAPPED Dom. Now, he has a valid reason to invade her personal space.
He's going to throw a bitchfit once he hears about Trai.
I'm still rooting for Dom because she seems to detach herself from her bird tendencies. Good for her.
[Report This]Date: Sep 08, 2015 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 19-The Worst
How would Michael know her cousin is not sleeping over. Is he spying on her? He sounds creepy as fuck.
No means no. I want to jump kick him so bad lol.
“So, what about him still being married to Elvis, I mean Lisa.” 
I HATE YOU MIMI lmaoo!
I predicta bitch made move from Michael. Maybe I'm wrong but this is why he is used to lmao.
[Report This]Date: Sep 08, 2015 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 18-If We
TRAIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII 
This is so unfair! Dee won't get to kiss his sexy mouth, his sexy lips and stare at his sexy cake, cake, cake, cake :(
But...
"Nah, Daddy I'm just fine."
YYYYAAASSSSS. He told she would call him like this ^^
I was dancing on my bed until Michael's call. Talk about a cock block lmao.
The nerve of him to ask her to join him at her car? Then he is honking her? He is treating her like a cheap hoe.
I'm still rooting for Dom but I have the feeling that Michael is going to smooth talk his way into her panties again. She's weak with bird tendencies.
I hope the following chapters prove me wrong.
[Report This]Date: Sep 08, 2015 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 17-Remember the Time
My heart breaks for Dom because from the flashback it seems like she wanted to be loved so bad. Unfortunately, she found it at the wrong place.
"if he had told me to jump of a cliff with him I would've done it." Dick too bomb, I guess
This chapter is well written but you know how I feel about Michael so while reading it, even if I was swooning, I was also like
Author's Response:
That's I felt too.
Like does he really mean or does he really just want her for sex?
It was a sweet scene but with knowing what's happening currently, you can't help but wonder if there were signs...
So glad you're marathon reading <3
[Report This]Date: Sep 08, 2015 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 16-Share My World
I hope Dom is happy with the decision she took. I hope she won't regret it.
Now that she decided to keep the baby, she has to tell Michael.
"See, the baby is already working wonders and you're gonna get boobs too!"
Ok, I like Mimi again! She is my guilty pleasure lmao
Aww, Michael used to be cute <3. What happened? He got the cookies and concluded he did have to try anymore? That's a shame.
Author's Response:
Mimi definitely has her moments. <3
And ikr. Maybe that Michael can return because that's obviously what sucked her in, in the first place :L
[Report This]Date: Sep 08, 2015 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 15- Signs
Side-eyeing the fuck out of Mimi.
I thought I liked Mimi, but idk now. She is Dee's friend, so why not support her in her decision to abort the baby? What makes her think the baby will be better being Michael's lovechild?
And her logic is backwards: she is not grown now but a baby will make of her a more mature person? Dee should begins with loving herself.
I see Michael is still a fuck boy. Why call if it's to hung up on her when she wants to have a discussion? Can you imagine having a child with a man that acts like one. Woow, this couldn't be me.
Author's Response:
See..Good advice is hard to come by these days!
[Report This]Date: Sep 08, 2015 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 14-Start Over
Well, she still has a week to decide. Whatever her choice is, I hope she seek helps. Hopefully it will help her understand that her relationship with Michael was unhealthy and she deserves better. Like Trai :)
If Michael ever come back, I know he will, I hope he will fix his attitude.
If this story is like real life, he'll divorced by 1996 so there is still two years to go lol
Author's Response:
Damn...lol you right about them two years. We'll see what happens!
[Report This]Date: Sep 08, 2015 09:38 pm Title: Chapter 13-Good Advice is Hard to Come By
"Dee, don't tell me you were messing around with some low budget rapper. You're way better than that."
I AM SCREAMING @ MIMI TALKING ABOUT THE BABY AS A FORTUNE. She is a mess lmao. I don't want to sound greedy but Mimi is right: with a baby, Dom is set for life.
'Baby fava' that reminds me of the way Erica Dixon says it on LHHATL.
Wow! Dom's mom is not the one! I hope she went Angela Basset in Waiting to Exhale on Dom's father.
I'm conflicted about Mama Harris. While I agree with her when she reminds Dom that Michael is married, that he is using her and that she is dumb to think he loves her. But I wanted to get in the story and slap her for calling Dom's unborn child 'bastard child'. Doesn't she know this is her grandchild?
Abortion should be a personal choice. If decides to keep it, great. If she wants to aborts it, great. But it should be Dom's choice!
Her mother is foul. She biased because of what her ex-husband did to her.
Seriously, the mother should get laid and release some of that anger.
I think Dom is going to keep the baby because she is in love with Michael and she thinks he loves her as much as she does. I think she is wrong
Author's Response:
Dee's family history definitely has ALOT to do with how she is. Not having that love from your mother and father? No doubt you go looking for it whenever you can find it.
Her mom ain't shit.
[Report This]Date: Sep 08, 2015 09:21 pm Title: Chapter 12-Lie to Me
"You know after Vegas, Michael begged me to take him back. He got down on his knees…and…begged.”
I can believe that....
But then Lisa is a scorned woman so I would put lying past her. She wants Dominique out of her life, so she will do what it takes.
But then she used the word 'whore' so....... Hmmm.
I still think Dom should call Michael before she takes a decision. After all, it's Michael's baby too. Knowing him, his fuckboy ass would want her to keep it.
And Trai omg, poor baby. I wonder how he is going to react :(
Author's Response:
Yep....poor Trai. Damn.
[Report This]Date: Sep 08, 2015 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 11-A Bad Case of Crabs
“Damnit, me and my big mouth.” He laughed.
“Yeah, you and that mouth.”
Yes Trai, you and this mouth
“Don’t act like you ain’t like it. In a couple of months, I’ll have you calling me Daddy.”
*clears throat*
Anywayssss, Dominique and Trai make a cute couple but too bad she's pregnant. I know you haven't said it and maybe I'm wrong........ I'll see :)
Author's Response:
LOL I loved writing that bit. Trai has some sexy lips. Lawdy. Glad you caught it.
Haha @ too bad she's pregnant
[Report This]Date: Sep 08, 2015 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 10- Delete.
First of all, I love Mimi. I need her in every chapters lol. And I hope that if Michael ever comes back and Dominique give into him, Mimi will be there to tell her the truth.
And Trai from Empire, hmmmmmm. I watch this show so that I can cath a view of his cake, cake, cake, cake
Lol at Michael calling to apologize. Lisa probably refused to give him some so he comes back to see if he can have Dominique's cookies. And she deleted the message??
Yes! I am rooting for you Dominique. Don't fail me and don't make me scream at you like Tyra did with Tiffany on ANTM!
Author's Response:
Yes I think Dee needs that blunt friend to tell her like it is.
And yesss I'm happy dee is trying to get her life together!
[Report This]Date: Sep 08, 2015 08:37 pm Title: Chapter 9- The Way You Put it Down
“I told her everything.”
[...]
“As soon as I got back, she asked me if there was someone else. Of course I said no. But then she said she called Frank, to see when I’d be done with meetings and he knew nothing about it. Then she saw the television and I had no choice.”
No boo boo, Lisa caught you. There is a difference.
First of all, you are a great writer and I love the way you write sex scenes. I was half swooning, half side eyeing (because of Michael's character) the whole thing but I loved it :D
*prays Dominique is not pregnant*
Author's Response:
Awww thank you so much <3 LOL i feel like it's easy to feel torn when it comes to Mike.
[Report This]Date: Sep 08, 2015 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 8- the W word
Wow.
I hate Michael in this story.
It's funny how he didn't cross his mind that Dom might feel like a whore because of the way he acted, but the first thing he asked was if it had to do with Andrew.
Then he proceeded to take her without her consent. I want to punch this Michael in the face so bad.
I hope Lisa and Dom team up and trap his ass like Brandy and Monica in 'The Boy Is Mine' video. He is an asshole
Author's Response:
Michael is just...a hot mess.
He really shouldn't have done that and totally ended up proving Dee's point.
Maybe not calling her a whore takes a way from the shittiness of the situation...hmmm nope!
[Report This]Date: Sep 08, 2015 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 7-Speedy,Neverfull,and Artsy
I'm going to blame her thoughts about Lisa on the alcohol but she knows the person she should be mad at, is Michael.
Lmao at her mantra! It reminds me of this episode of My Wife And Kids where Michael gave Claire his card and spent his money like there is no tomorrow lmao.
Well, do your thing Domi. Michael might be playing with you but at least you can spend his money and look cute while he uses you.
Ah, everybody has ever been in Domi's situation. When you're at the desk and it turns out to be WAY more expensive than you thought but you still buy it cause you don't wanna look cheap lmao.
“Would you consider having my children?”
Now I know Dominique is not dumb enough to say yes.
Author's Response:
LOL I peeped that subtle shade!