[Report This]Date: Oct 18, 2015 03:18 pm Title: Chapter 33-Threatened
Michael dude are you for real? Your still with Lisa and sleeping in the same bed and room as her??!!! Wow just wow. Ok is not the way to get Dominique back at all. Why do men always say that getting a divorce is hard? I apologies but I gotta go on 1. Firstly saying that it's hard to get a divorce is a huge cop out and Michael looks like his the biggest liar ever. Secondly why is he still with Lisa when he doesn't even love or want her? Thirdly regardless of popular belief it's not cheaper to keep her. Mike you are still fucking up and you need to get your priorities right coz you can't have your cake and eat too. Much props to Dee for getting Trai to represent her. I can just imagine the look on Mike's face when his walked in the room. Your awesome girl! Keep doing wat you do :)
[Report This]Date: Oct 18, 2015 01:11 pm Title: Chapter 33-Threatened
OMG!!!! That's what Michael ass get! I'm not gone lie, I was expecting for them to talk and somehow confess how they missed each other and then everything goes back to normal. SMH...does this mean Trai is just helping her out as a friend or are they back to being "friends?" ...can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response:
I'm so glad I caught you by surprise! Haha who knows! We'll have to see what went down between Trai and Dee.
And if only it was that simple to go back to the way things were...not for a while!
Thanks for your review!
[Report This]Date: Oct 16, 2015 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 32-She's Just A Lover (Michael's POV)
he was usng her sadly great chapter
Date: Oct 16, 2015 10:16 am Title: Chapter 32-She's Just A Lover (Michael's POV)
Smh Michael is just.. I have no words. His sorry ass is loving HIMSELF and that only. He gets to have his cake and eat it too. Dominique really played herself with this man and getting involved with him. Even more so STAYING involved with him after he married Elvis face. There really aren't any other words to give for his trifling ass that haven't been given already. I don't think he loved Dominique at all. He is a fucking mess.
Date: Oct 15, 2015 08:19 am Title: Chapter 32-She's Just A Lover (Michael's POV)
Ugh he cared for her but yet we he was aroused that's all he cared about. I don't know. But he didn't have to do my girl like that. Leave her in the middle of the night going back to his wife. He could've been ended it but being who he is he thinks he can get everything. They both need to do better
[Report This]Date: Oct 14, 2015 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 32-She's Just A Lover (Michael's POV)
I don't really know how to feel with this whole situation. More than anything, he seems so selfish. Why drag someone in a situation like that? Ya know. It's just, wrong. It's partially Dee's fault too but still...be the bigger person and stop it. Instead he continued it knowing we're Dee was heading emotionally.
At this point, I honestly can't tell if he's feeling are genuine.
Author's Response:
Dreamer! Long time no see! Thanks for your review and I agree that he should've done the right thing and end it, even if it was hard.
And back then, it was definitely hard to tell if he was being honest
[Report This]Date: Oct 14, 2015 04:02 pm Title: Chapter 32-She's Just A Lover (Michael's POV)
I think that his was selfish as he was thinking about himself. And maybe he did love her in his own way. Or he loved her the best that he could. But even back then his wanted to have his cake and eat it too. Yay! Can't wait for the next update :) PS the gift is yummy :)
Author's Response:
Yes he definitely wanted it both ways. Have his wife and have Dee right there waiting for him. He knew exactly what to do and what to say.
and haha I love the gif too <3
Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: Oct 14, 2015 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 32-She's Just A Lover (Michael's POV)
This is a hard debate for me. Mane when he said he loved her it was convincing and sincere but idk about then in the past but I know for a fact it's true now that he's realize it. Anyway, I strongly agree he was using Dee for his own good. When thing got rough on the other end in his other life, he comes running to Dee for comfort which of course turns into full blown sex or 'making love' I guess.
It's right there. All the evidence ence he spilled let's me know that he basically used her. And she was just so damn clingy and in love but hey, you can't really blame her cause they were talking or filling around way back when before Lisa ass came along soI'ma blame Mike for letting it get too far.... And partially her too. Hell both of em. Lol.
I wish you can do a flashback of how they first met. I would love to read about that as well.
More soon girl.
Author's Response:
It definitely is a little confusing. Because without a doubt I can say that Michael loves her in the present, but with this flashback you can tell it was more of a physical attraction for him. She loved him from the very beginning and we can see how she gave him everything and he just took and took it from her.
Both of them are to blame for how far it got.
And I've already been thinking about writing it. It will definitely be coming soon.
<3
[Report This]Date: Oct 14, 2015 12:46 pm Title: Chapter 32-She's Just A Lover (Michael's POV)
I think Michael did love Dee and Lisa Mara in his own way. He was still using Dee and she kept allowing it. Dee would be available when he has the time to see her.
Dee knew Michael was married and yet she stayed with him as the other woman.
Mchael used Dee-Dee used Michael-Michael used Lisa-Lisa used Danny- Danny used Lisa. A horrible circle where someone will get hurt.
Author's Response:
Yeah I think he did love Dee for what she gave him. Everythin was so simple with her.
But Dee's not innocent either, like you said, she knew what she was doing.
And right? A circle where someone will definitely get hurt.
Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: Oct 13, 2015 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 31: Making Plans [Michael's POV]
great story so far cant wait to read so much more of this story
Date: Oct 12, 2015 09:02 pm Title: Chapter 31: Making Plans [Michael's POV]
It's good seeing his POV. It's honestly everything I expected it to be. Exactly how I picture he sees Dee and what their "relationship" is to him. He's using her as much as she was using him, only difference is she's young and naive. Michael had free reign to take full advantage. Man.. This is crazy. That agreement is going to send Dee right over the edge, as if she's not already damn near there. Smh
Date: Oct 12, 2015 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 31: Making Plans [Michael's POV]
Michael just wants to be in control. Let the woman breath without you always being on her ass! He's so annoying! Like maybe if you divorced that dumb bitch you would be with Dee! He's so annoying Lmaooo but I love him trying to get involved and helping her with the baby. <333 he's still an ass tho. 😩😩😩
[Report This]Date: Oct 12, 2015 12:17 am Title: Chapter 31: Making Plans [Michael's POV]
I think I like Michael's POV. It gives more of an insight to what is exactly on his mind more than Dee's interpretation of it.
It seems like Michael while he might really love Dee used her just as much as a crutch as she did him. There needs to be a lot less using and a little more communication with them.
I'm not sure either way how this agreement is going to come off. I know that he wants to protect her and the baby but I see where John is coming from where the language of it my come off a bit off putting.
He need not see himself as a father figure to her. Lol. That's a little ahhhhh...
I'm looking forward to seeing how Dee reacts or if she'll sign. Things that make you go hmmmmm.
More soon! <333
[Report This]Date: Oct 11, 2015 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 31: Making Plans [Michael's POV]
I enjoyed his pov. It was nice to see how his felt about thing. And I think that you should continue to do his pov. Ok now it's time for me to dive into this review. I get that Michael is trying to protect and look out for Dee. But I think that even after he warns her about this meeting; she is going to be angry with him. One thing that I do know about pregnant women is that they are very hormonal and emotional at time. Sometimes they can be really bitchy and you wanna strangle them. (Speaking from personal experience lol) I get that Mike felt sorry for Dee and he wanted to support her coz of her past, not having her dad around, and the fact that her mother is unsupportive. But one thing his got to realize is that he cannot have his cake and eat it too. And eventually his got to decide who is more important, Lisa or Dominique? Loved it girl I'm still working on my updates and I took a break to read this chapter. Keep the amazing updates coming when you can luv :)
[Report This]Date: Oct 11, 2015 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 31: Making Plans [Michael's POV]
Yay update !!! :):):)
I personally think you should do more Michael povs now. I like to see what's rearing in that head of his instead of Dee's. We all know her struggle and what she thinks and feels now let's get to Mike Mike here for a change.
As for Why he kept her around, yes she's as beauty I get that but why not be in a committed relationship with her instead of Lisa Marie? I mean, he met Dee first and all and feelings got involved but whatever I guess. Imo, he was using her in the beginning stages of he and Lisa's relationship and to the point shit got too deep. Deeper than the red sea.
He was supposedly unhappy with Lisa and went to Dee instead to ease the stress. What a scum bag he was/is. If he changed any yet.
Now this meeting, I am looking forward to it. I really think Dee ahould consider what Mike.is trying to do for Her and their child cause no one else doesn't seem to care aboit their safety but him. Plus, she's to a point of breaking down as well. She should at least give it some thought time come.the meeting.
Btw, updated New Flame :)
More soon girl.