Date: Jul 24, 2015 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 26
OMG
This was such a nice read...it flowed together so nicely that I couldn't help but fall in love with it. Mike know he a hot mess and I love em for it....I wonder is lovely one gonna come back. Now Liv is my chick...I really feel her style. All in all I enjoyed reading this and can't wait for the next update
Author's Response:
glad you liked it. Thanks for reviewing it means alot.
[Report This]Date: Jul 23, 2015 12:03 am Title: Chapter 25
Uh oh! Mike's gonna give it to her real good. I hope she's prepared! And it's nice to see that Liv is getting jealous of other women with him. That means that's she obviously falling for him.
Author's Response:
yup she's falling for sure
[Report This]Date: Jul 22, 2015 04:38 pm Title: Chapter 25
such a hot chapter it really looks like olivia is really opening up to michael great chapter looking forward to reading so much more of this very hot amazing story
Author's Response:
thanks for reviewing
Date: Jul 22, 2015 05:44 am Title: Chapter 25
Yeah!!! finally! Won't she be shocked ! I love how they banter back and forth and how she was getting jealous of he dancer
Author's Response:
I couldnt string it along too much longer. Thanks for reviewing
[Report This]Date: Jul 22, 2015 03:36 am Title: Chapter 25
Oooooh you tease ending it at the best part!! :-D it's so lovely to see their relationship develop. Loving that she's getting jealous of other women in his arms on stage! She's definitely falling for him and he's already fallen for her I think xxx can't wait for next instalment.
Author's Response:
I had to leave you hanging so you would come baack for more
Date: Jul 22, 2015 02:36 am Title: Chapter 25
Finally she's beginning to trust him, i don't think it's just physical
Author's Response:
time will tell i guess. thanks for your reviews.
[Report This]Date: Jul 22, 2015 02:34 am Title: Chapter 25
That's a huge breathrough, but I feel that Liv is open to Michael sexually, but not really emotionally on the same page. I think she needs to see more YANA girls to admit that she cannot bear the though of another woman fulfilling Michael's need to feel loved.
Author's Response:
She'll come around shes a tough cookie. thanks for reviewing
[Report This]Date: Jul 21, 2015 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 25
Great job!!!
Author's Response:
thanks
Date: Jul 21, 2015 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 25
I'm glad to see that their relationship is recovering. This game of Truth or Dare is going to be interesting, I'm sure.
Author's Response:
yea i thought it would be a fun twist
[Report This]Date: Jul 20, 2015 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 24
great chapter cant wait to read more
Date: Jul 20, 2015 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 24
Love it! "see" you for the next great update!!;)
[Report This]Date: Jul 20, 2015 10:44 am Title: Chapter 24
Let him in let him in!!!!! :-D I think she should fuck him after the show in his dressing room, him in the gold suit all sweaty haha! Sorry!
Seriously that was great. I'm loving watching their relationship progress!
Date: Jul 20, 2015 06:49 am Title: Chapter 24
I'm sure that eventually she will let him in, by now she should see she can trust him
Poor Nate
Date: Jul 20, 2015 04:56 am Title: Chapter 24
Poor Nate!!!! Innocent and look what happens. Hopefully Blu will let go of her past dating ideas and let Michael in!!!
[Report This]Date: Jul 20, 2015 01:06 am Title: Chapter 24
Ouch! Liv needs to work a bit on her violent streak. Poor Nate! Well, she got her punishment in the end.... and maybe she starts to accept the fact that being wild and untrustful will hurt her more in the long run than opening her heart again...