[Report This]Date: Jul 28, 2015 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 27
They really are the most adorable couple, right up there with Meg and Michael! I loved her reaction when Michael told her to turn around and was standing right behind her. She acted like they were boyfriend and girlfriend and she hadn't seen him in weeks. It was too cute!
Author's Response:
She was very excited because it was her first day of freedom I. A way and she wanted to share the emotion. Ur right they were like a couple. Thanks for reviewing.
[Report This]Date: Jul 28, 2015 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 14
I'm really liking this, it's extremely well written. I know I'm not caught up yet, but there's just one thing . . .and I'm not criticizing, just wondering. Why is Olivia so caustic? Is it really all because of her fiancé, or is it just her personality?
Author's Response:
I'm not sure if I would call her caustic and more a combo of insecurities with men since her fiancé, her sarcasm, and general unhappiness in what her life has turned out to be... She hates working for the tabloid but is doing so out of obligation. It also depends where you are in the story...they are both very rough around the edges and aggressive or short with each other. They are also both very strong with their sex drives. Thanks for reading and I welcome your comments anytime. Usually my leading ladies are all strong and sometimes people don't warm up to them until I soften them up a bit. Thanks again. Enjoy
Date: Jul 27, 2015 02:41 pm Title: Chapter 27
I'm finally all caught up. Liv and Michael are perfection as a couple. I truly hope the last of her walls come down soon!
Author's Response:
glad you're all caught up. hopefully you enjoyed what you read. Thanks for reading and reviewing
Date: Jul 27, 2015 05:33 am Title: Chapter 27
Amazing!! Can't wait to read more! She's falling for him big time!
Author's Response:
it eventually had to happen...but there's always going to be some sort of drama to keep it interesting.
[Report This]Date: Jul 27, 2015 05:05 am Title: Chapter 27
There will be romance but with Michael....it will be NAUGH....TY!!!!!!!!! Loving this story. I about died about the prostitute ... Ha!!
Author's Response:
LOL...naughty Michael...never...ya right.
Date: Jul 27, 2015 04:10 am Title: Chapter 27
Love it how close they are, they really begin to become a couple, even though they won't admit it (yet)
Glad Liv had a great time in the city
I think he has something romantic planned to (completely) win her heart, she might not admit it but it's what she needs, who doesn't?
Author's Response:
time will tell what he has up his sleeve but it will be interesting. Thanks for reviewing.
[Report This]Date: Jul 26, 2015 09:34 pm Title: Chapter 27
great chaapter looking forward to reading the next great chapter to this amazing story
[Report This]Date: Jul 26, 2015 03:28 pm Title: Chapter 26
Whew! Damn! Mike and Liv got it on! Bri is right. Michael changed her for the better, and she's obviously happy with him.
Date: Jul 25, 2015 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really love this hot love story. please keep updating sooner. you are really good in writng sex scenes OMG!!! I cant wait to know what happen next. I hope lovely one will come back and makes trouble in paradise . hihihi
[Report This]Date: Jul 25, 2015 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 26
Something involving no panties in public again?
[Report This]Date: Jul 25, 2015 10:33 am Title: Chapter 26
i wonder what the dare was lol looking forward to the next amazing chapter to this hot amazing story
[Report This]Date: Jul 25, 2015 05:27 am Title: Chapter 26
I love the truth or dare bit. And man ...did he prove to her that he was fully loaded!! HOT!!! I just love this story and love how you keep it updated! More writers should follow your lead on writing.... You always keep it interesting
[Report This]Date: Jul 25, 2015 02:33 am Title: Chapter 26
So great and so hot!! Just loving everything about this story.... I hope the is a happy ever after but I feel there is gonna be trouble along the way..... So excited to read more!!
P.s HOT sex scenes!!!!!
Date: Jul 25, 2015 12:27 am Title: Chapter 26
Looks like they're meant to be together
Hmmm not sure what the dare is
[Report This]Date: Jul 24, 2015 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 26
I read the last couple of chapters & forgot to comment. But, I am glad that Liv was finally able to open up to Michael about her feelings. And even thought she doesn't want to admit it, she already has deeper feelings for Michael. Why else would she say not to make any professions of love between the two of them? I love that they played truth or dare, really gives Liv an idea of how closed in Michael has been all his life & help her better understand the traits about him that the media claims to be odd. And also why he needed to be reminded of his beauty inside & out. And I called it on the head about Michael. Now he can really show her his love & affection.
I know this is alot, but keep up the good work. Much L.O.V.E. 💟