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Reviewer: femalien Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 02, 2015 12:15 am Title: Chapter 29

From this point on sadly Olivia starts losing her appeal to me as a broken hearted woman and looks more like a major bitch by nature. Okay, you got your heart broken, but that doesn't mean that when a guy wants to be nice to you, you gotta act ballistic and then fix it with a quick fuck. I've had my shares of broken heart (more than once) but I never shut out the next guy like this... I somehow hope that Olivia gets to see what it would feel like being without Michael, to realize that she needs an attitude check.

Reviewer: MJsRockchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 01, 2015 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 29

Brilliant as always. You have me on the edge of my seat with every chapter. Love the hot sex too! Woooooo! *wipes brow* :-D 

Reviewer: SweetAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 01, 2015 06:43 pm Title: Chapter 29

Can mike get even more cute! Gosh I hope for this interview the Liv doesn't screw Mike over...I kinda don't want Liv to interview Mike at all.

Reviewer: MissMichelleJackson Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 01, 2015 06:15 pm Title: Chapter 29

I am driving on vacation right now...thanks for updating! :) You are the best.

Reviewer: BluJayWay Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2015 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 28

I am blushing bright red after reading this. For a reference, I'm black-do you know how hard it is to get us to blush?!?! You nailed this chapter big time (no pun intended)

Reviewer: MJfreak23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2015 02:03 pm Title: Chapter 28

Whew!! That was HAWT!! At one point I seriously wished that I was in liv's place! 



Author's Response:

Who doesn't...lol. Glad you liked it.  Thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: MJsRockchick Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2015 02:02 pm Title: Chapter 28

Haha Love it! Amazing read as always. Keep up the great writing. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the kind words.  Glad you love it.  It's fun writing this one for sure.

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2015 08:47 am Title: Chapter 28

I know you're not judging,  and even if you did you're free to do so, it's a free country 

I personally get annoyed with those people who say things like he was like a sexual,  i don't even waste my time on those people anymore 

Agree with you 

Lol yes it does

 

Reviewer: MissMichelleJackson Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2015 07:51 am Title: Chapter 28

That was hoooooooot ;)



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Thanks for reviewing.  Glad you liked it

Reviewer: shellymjbean1989 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2015 05:47 am Title: Chapter 28

this was a very naughty fun chapter i cant wait to read the next amazing chapter to this amazing story



Author's Response:

Hopefully you won't have to wait too long.  

Reviewer: MommaE Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2015 04:56 am Title: Chapter 28

Loved it!! As always...great job writing!

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2015 03:11 am Title: Chapter 28

Agree with the fact Europeans are more open about it but sometimes they go to far here,  just my opinion

The chapter sounded really realistic by the way,  been to Amsterdam once,  (Not the red light district of course since i was little back then) 

Who says it's so a out of character Michael?  I seen worse lol

Hmm what she bought him? Probably something to match her outfit lol 



Author's Response:

I'm not judging Europeans it's just how everyone is brought up.  In some ways I think they have a better comfort level then we do here in the states.   Different strokes for different folks.  I agree with you that it may not be out of charecter for the real mj but had to say it was because I've gotten into arguments with those who think that he was some divine a sexual male who never had a sexual desire in his cell and to write anything different would be a disrespect to him.   They want to believe only what they were led to believe in him.   Certainly a story like what we actually know about him would be boring as hell because he was so private( rightly so) the image printed is far from the one I have depicted here.  I personally love this spicy version of him.  It's more interesting and let's face it sex sells.  Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: SweetAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2015 12:32 am Title: Chapter 28

Lol Mike I'm not mad at you!  Great chapter....and I don't mind mike being out of character. 



Author's Response:

I think a majority of people like the rougher side.  I personally think it makes him more attractive and at least makes a more interesting story in my opinion.  Thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: janina1974 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2015 12:25 am Title: Chapter 28

Great chapter. It is a long time when I was in Amsterdam, but I remember this Red Light District - we visited it, so I saw the windows with women, Moulin Rouge etc. From outside only :-) but it was very interesting anyway.

 



Author's Response:

Having never been I hope I painted a somewhat accurate description. But who knows ..li was kinda just winging it...I definitely made up the moulin rouge part with the private room...just thought it made it more interesting and an opportunity to show more of Michael's spicy side.  Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: femalien Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 28, 2015 11:41 pm Title: Chapter 28

My, my, my! I think I need to book a flight to Amsterdam soon... Seriously, I get the angle of this chapter and being an European myself. I do wonder why Americans are so prudish about sex. (Btw, who is to say Michael is really out of character in this chapter? I don't think he is...)



Author's Response:

Different strokes for different folks so they say...by out of charecter I mean there's this whole bs on this site that if you write something out of charecter then people get all in a tailspin because in some ppl minds all Michael Jackson did was have water balloon fights and didn't have sex.  I would like to think of him in this way.  A real red blooded man who loves sex and curses etc.  it's way more interesting to write him this way then writing a story based on what we were led to believe...so yes I totally agree with you 100% but just had to put it in there so people aren't offended.  I've got into arguments with people who Michael wouldn't do that Michael wouldn't do that...I'm like who decided that you are the the Michael autobiographer. Of the world?  It's fiction folks...lol...but thanks.   I completely agree with you on all points.  Thanks for reviewing.

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