[Report This]Date: Aug 15, 2015 01:23 pm Title: Chapter 33
Ahh fab as always! Love the interaction between them! I am a bit concerned about him taking intimate pics of her.... Considering there was a possible intruder. Can't wait for the next update!!!! I have to say I've been off work 7 weeks following surgery and I have loved reading this story. Thanks for the great writing!!!
Author's Response:
thank you for your loyal following and reviews. I appreciate them..hope you are doing well from your surgery.
Date: Aug 11, 2015 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 32
He finally broke down those walls!!!! They are great together. Nate better take extra precautions with Blu... I smell TROUBLE! Too many things aren't adding up
Date: Aug 11, 2015 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 5
The Munkey joke was reeeally funny!!! That was a really funny thing to picture angry munkies tossing shit out of the cage!!
Date: Aug 11, 2015 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 4
Hahahahahahaha!!!! Some of this humer was very in fact very much like what was in Fear Of Flying!!
Author's Response:
hopefully thats a good thing?
Date: Aug 11, 2015 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 3
Before I write about how much I Freakin' looove Michael I have this question to ask.
Why is it that Michael's fans don't have a name for themselves but in this earra? (YANA Girls)
I know it's because of him singing the song on tour and that a girl would get picked to go onstage for that song, but I wonder why no other earra has a song title for his fans? I hope this question makes sence?
Now, on to the response to the add!!
To whom it may Concern,
Though I am writing to you from the states, I feel that my reply is still relavent. I first saw Michael Jackson on his Bad tour. I had gotten tickets to every show on that tour. Every show was different in it's own way. With each show he'd would never do the same thing twice. Each show had given me another chance to take away something different that the last show. To a avrige person, they may see two shows and think that they're the same thing. But as I have been following him much more closely, I can tell things that nobody else would catch.
Michael has dance styles, never before seen out fits, and short films. No other artists can do the things he has done. Heck, most artists can't even break the records that he's broken. Also, most artists can't even win the amount of awards he's won!!
Michael Jackson has changed the music seen with his dancing, his music and the way a music videos in popularity.
I would very much would love to tell more of my story!!
Respectfully,
Lacey: USA NYC
[Report This]Date: Aug 11, 2015 03:32 pm Title: Chapter 32
im always here im just not that good on writing reviews i hope it was just the owner forgot to lock back up the villa im glad olivia finally opened her heart to michael great chapter looking very much forward to the next amazing chapter to this amazingly beautiful story keep up the amazing writing
Author's Response:
You're doing fine :)
Date: Aug 11, 2015 02:09 pm Title: Chapter 32
YYeeeeees !!! :) I love you too Tinker ! :*
Author's Response:
And why is that
Date: Aug 11, 2015 01:06 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wow, I never know what kind of get up Michael's gonna come up with!!!!!
Is Michael going to have his kids in this story at some point?
I wish I could be Michael's "Lovely One"!!!
Author's Response:
Hey there you are. No kids. Hey did you ever finish blinded by love?
Date: Aug 11, 2015 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hey, I like this story but I have to say this first chapters been a little slow.
Also, Olivia's dislike of Michael has me really mad!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: Aug 11, 2015 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 32
Awwwww :)
Author's Response:
Never thought she'd say it first
Date: Aug 11, 2015 07:25 am Title: Chapter 32
Ahhh, it finally happened! I'm so happy for Liv and Michael 🎉💃💃💃
Author's Response:
Took her long enough right?
[Report This]Date: Aug 11, 2015 03:59 am Title: Chapter 32
I'm still here honey! Loving every chapter. So happy they have said they love each other. I feel uneasy about the villa though.... Definitely think someone was in there and it's not gonna end well :(
Author's Response:
Time will tell girl. Thanks for reviewing
Date: Aug 11, 2015 01:14 am Title: Chapter 32
Lol loved there going back and forth, and those lines from thriller lol
So happy he finally broke her walls
I think there's a stalker instead of the owner forgetting to lock the place
Author's Response:
I need to put more bantering back and forth. I stepped awa for a few chapters. As always thanks for your loyalty
Author's Response:
I need to put more bantering back and forth. I stepped awa for a few chapters. As always thanks for your loyalty
Date: Aug 08, 2015 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 31
Did you send it at: justmeawriter@hotmail.com ? (Should be able to receive it there)
Author's Response:
whatever the site links to
[Report This]Date: Aug 08, 2015 11:11 am Title: Chapter 31
OMG! I hope Liv is Ok?
I can't wait until the next chapter