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Reviewer: janina1974 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 28, 2015 03:44 am Title: Chapter 37

OK, so Lovely One is on the scene. I guess she wants Michael back. But the question is what is she able and willing to do?

 

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 28, 2015 02:42 am Title: Chapter 37

Lovely one is the stalker?  Was she also In Italy at the Villa?  

Poor Cole

Stefan and Michael in one room?  Hmmm not sure how that will go

Reviewer: MJsRockchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 28, 2015 01:06 am Title: Chapter 37

Eeeee what's going on ???? What's she still doing here?! This is great writing Hun. On the edge of my seat :-D

poor Cole :( 

Reviewer: femalien Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2015 12:59 am Title: Chapter 36

Oh goodie, so I'm not the only one separating M&Ms by colour! I do this and then I arrange them in patterns on the table and try to eat them in a certain order. I guess I'm even more weird than Olivia :D



Author's Response:

I never would have guessed writing about mm's would be such a hit..lol.  I'm even weirder...I don't like them .

Reviewer: janina1974 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2015 12:23 am Title: Chapter 36

Great chapter. I love the scene with M&M´s, it is hilarious :-) I always eat the red one´s first....

 

 



Author's Response:

When I was a kid they did away with red ones because they thought the dye caused cancer...

Reviewer: shellymjbean1989 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2015 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 36

lol poor mike did something so sweet and she cant even enjoy it without sneezing her head off lol i think she was a little ocd with those M&Ms lol great chapter really looking very much forward to another amazing chapter to this truly amazing story keep your amazing writing coming 



Author's Response:

I know the poor guy can't win sometimes.

Reviewer: MommaE Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2015 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 36

Wow! cool way to count down the days til Aunt Flo is gone....too funny!  I am sure Cole will hear lots more. Hopefully Lovely One understands that Michael is taken



Author's Response:

Poor cole. He's got an interesting on the job training for sure.

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2015 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 36

Lol the candy logica

I don't speak French but that sounded sexy, also love the french version of 'i just can stop loving you' 

Lol poor Cole,  it'll take a while for him to get used to Michael and Liv and their openly talking about sex 

I'm sure it's not the last we've seen of Lovely One 

 

 



Author's Response:

Sometimes it amazes me where my mind takes me...that wasn't the direction I planned it just fell into my lap with the five colors and five days. Minus the green ones.

Reviewer: Crazyme55 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2015 05:25 pm Title: Chapter 36

Terrific chapter. 

5 days and no sex Liv is going to win this one unless some cheats.

Im still laughing at Liv's statement "I'll have dinner with Goldie Pants and the three stud

mares"



Author's Response:

She will definitely have it easier given her state..will mike survive?

Reviewer: BluJayWay Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2015 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 36

The period humor literally made me laugh aloud. This was such a cute chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks..I try to mix in the humor with the sex and the drama.  Glad you liked it.  Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: KilljoyMaiden Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2015 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh my gosh! I LOVE this story!!! Holy cow, please keep writing! You are wonderfully talented. :D

 

-M



Author's Response:

Thanks if you like my stories take a moment and vote in the fan fiction awards.  Thanks for reviewing...I'm glad you like it.

Reviewer: glitterpix Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 22, 2015 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 1

Good job on the spanking scene!! I loved this chapter. Hot hot sex and I'm gonna give my lover some tips from what I learned in this story lmao! You have amazing ideas girly 



Author's Response:

I git from reading books that I get for free on amazon

Reviewer: MJsRockchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 22, 2015 04:57 am Title: Chapter 35

Ahhh lovely one! Glad he sent her packing!! Wonder who sent her the tickets?! Hmmm! Amazing update as always. Love the hot sex between them. 

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 22, 2015 02:31 am Title: Chapter 35

Hopefully she won't doubt his love for her anymore 

Wonder how lovely one got there,  maybe Ted send those tickets?  As a sort of revenge be case he got fired?  

Hopefully Cole can find out what happened

Reviewer: BluJayWay Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 21, 2015 09:20 pm Title: Chapter 35

I figured Lovely One would make an appearance soon enough. I can't wait to hear how THAT happened. 

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