Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2015 03:14 am Title: Chapter 39

Lovely One is evil, wonder what else she did,  if she did more 

Lol rip her face off and wear it as a Halloween mask 

Yay more m&m's lol, sweet how each color meant something

Author's Response:

Let there be mm's    look for them to make a return soon.lol. Thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: MommaE Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 02, 2015 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 39

Man .. Lovely one was mean!! The Halloween mask was priceless!!!! Lol! He sure can make up

Author's Response:

I'm quite proud of the Halloween mask line and couldn't stop laughing when I thought of it.   Thanks for reviewing 

Reviewer: Fire-in-her-veins Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 31, 2015 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 38

I absolutely love your interpretation of Michael. Its realistic not perfect a bit cocky but altogethet really caring, kind, compassionate empathetic and basically not a controlling douchebag or dick or just overall childish and emotionally immature. After reading pharells comment on how mike was the king of catching you off guard i can totally see your michael being a lot like the michael we all know and love. Just the fact that he wants her to be happy and lets her have her own space doesnt hold her back makes him one of my favorite interpretations of michael. So bravo to you! Loved the public sex in the red light district! I love that hes always making sure shes ok and feels loved. Its really refreshing to read him being portayed as human and not a 'god' or perfect really. I love how fun and sexy their relationship is. Couldve done without the spanking scene though just because of his comment about this is what ur daddy should've done to you. No just no. Youre really intuitive with people i think you write great inner dialogues though i hav yet to hear more of michaels. Its nice that this isnt switching from pov to pov. As with robyn she shouldve understood it was just sex and not anything more as thats what was agreed on. Now if michael had lead her on to think it couldve been more i would get why shes pissed. I dont love that he bashed Lisa, first off just because theyre married does NOT mean she owes him kids, or should just do it because he wants to. I love Lisa i think shes awesome but i do understand for the sake of this story it just made more sense to portray her as being the awful ex. Even though thats not the reality. Ok with the interviews at the orphanage in paris i think that it should be partially a him being videoed in an informal setting like this with kids around him to show how much they like him, and also some of the kids could be asked about him and such. I did think his comment about them being innocent and saving the future was really OUT there. They do become adults eventually so.. I think he couldve put that better.

Author's Response:

Hey there.  I was wondering where you were and missed your insiteful reviews.  Glad you like my Mike.  I get sick of peter pan mr wonderful and like the edgerier, imperfect Mike.  I'm trying to balance the sensitive romance with the heated passion between the two afterall they are two strong personalities and cant let that go by the wayside because they fall in love.  It's a hard balance to maintain.

 

As for LMP, I like her and am in the minority to say I like her too because though they had their troubles I do feel they loved each other and for even a small moment in time he was happy and knew what it was like to be in a "normal" relationship.  However someone needs to be the evil ex so she takes the sword so to speak.  Their having babies are reported to be true so I have read and based it off of that.

 

The comment about the children being the future is an actual quote from him and I didnt make it up.  I have a whole list of quotes that I trhow in every once in awhile to make it more realist.

Lovely One...true he didnt lead her along but undofortunately over years she has grown a fondness and maybe was in denial that they were just FWB.  SHe's older and has supported him mentally at times and maybe has some claim to him in her own head.  More will probably be revieled but I needed someone for what I have planned and LO is a prime suspect. 

Thanks for the awesome review and loyal following.  I truely do appreciate it.

Reviewer: shellymjbean1989 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 31, 2015 06:39 am Title: Chapter 38

great chapter 

Author's Response:

thanks

 

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Reviewer: MJsRockchick Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 31, 2015 12:11 am Title: Chapter 38

Mike is gonna freak when he sees her on the CCTV video! He'll feel bad for doubting Blu too! Wonder who lovely one is with.... Maybe the security guard they let go. Amazing update as always :) 

Author's Response:

Mike will have some humble pie to eat for doubting Liv's perspective for sure.  You'll just have to wait and see who it is she's working with.  Thanks for your review.  I appreciate it.

 

If you like my stories feel free to vote in the fan fiction awards.  There's a tie and I'm one of the finalists so I would appreciate the vote if you feel so inclined.

Reviewer: MommaE Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 30, 2015 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 38

Mike is gonna FLIP when he sees Robyn on the video tapes!! Some one besides her is out for revenge.  Love the post! Thanks for updating

Author's Response:

should be an interesting realization for sure.  thanks for reviewing my friend!

Reviewer: BluJayWay Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 28, 2015 10:51 am Title: Chapter 37

This is not good for Lovely One. When Liv gets ahold of her, there's gonna be some MAJOR trouble. I love the suspense!