I knew it!! I knew it was Ted!! I couldn't remember his name, but I knew it was him!! Crazy son-of-a-bitch! I'm so glad Nate found her! Robyn needs a really big wake-up call and she needs to pay for her part in everything. 

Ted is a bastard! I hope him and Robyn catch fire for their fuckery. Thank goodness Nate got to her.

Green is my favourite color too now lol 

Hopefully she stays and if not i have a feeling she'll have Michael with her,  no birth control pills are that good with the night filled with with passionate love making 

I'm still here! That 69 has me blushing. Olivia would be crazy not to stay, but I hope that they catch up with Lovely Once and her accomplice ASAP so that they'll have some true peace. 

very hot sexy chapter definitely met my expectations looking forward to reading another great amazing chapter to this amazing story 

Another great chapter. Hopefully she will stay with him. I'm sure Lovely one and her friend aren't done yet though.  Mike sure is jumping ahead of himself talking about kids...lol....wonder what was in the little box....

Dang , there I was thinking I could just keep on reading more nd more of this story I started just a day or two ago,  and now I got to the last chapter that is finished!   

I am curious who Lovely One is in cahoots with.  The red pepper trick was stupid.  

All along i have been expecting some sneaky trick related to her work for her dad's tabloid paper..   That her dad or an editor would decide they want more dirt and write a lying story to publish in the seriex she is doing but mj may think she did it herself and was just using him after all! 

Now I'm thinking aha maybe Robyn is collaborating with someone from a tabloid to get dirt on him and somehow use it in a way to make Liv look disloyal. 

And what ifit'ss a combination of both ideas: Robyn is plotting with someone from her Daddy newspaper!  And the idea is to find out some juicy facts and publish it under Liv byline or making it look like she gave it to them to sell more papers.   Hey maybe it's that guy she had sex with and he's jealous!   It would be worse if it were her own father plotting but that did occur to me.

Ooooh what if they stole the photos of Michael's body she took and published.  That would really get him upset. Though ironically it would have been better if people had seen proof he really had vitiligo since a lot of people thought he was lying.

Or maybe will blackmail with the pics.... he will know Blu is the one who took those without his knowledge and will be furious and feel betrayed...

You can see you gave me a lot to think about,, lol

There's quite a few people who in real life know  damn well Mike was not asexual and not an angel but I get why you have to say "out of character" since there are a lot of fans who choose to hang on to that Peter Pan image he portrayed. I guess they just don't believe people ( including his ex wife Lisa ) who have said publicly that innocent asexual childlike image wasn't how he was in private.   He did have an ability to connect more than most adults with the side of himself that was able to experience the wonder and joyous fun and silliness of childhood, Which is why he got on so well with children.  But he was far from being one-dimensional.  

 I agree its a lot more interesting to me at include the other dimensions if you're writing a fanfic. You're a good writer but I doubt I would have kept reading if you made him an innocent virgin angel who never curses or gets mad or acts like a jerk.

 I may not agree with everything -- I doubt he would have trusted so much so quickly with someone from a tabloid no matter how hot she is  -- but it doesn't upset me that you write it that way for the sake of the story.

  I have never understood how some fans could watch his dancing and see him as asexual.