[Report This]Date: Oct 19, 2015 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 51
I love the teasing between Liv and Michael! He is just too sexy! I love Mattie, he's so adorable! They have to keep him!! Don't change anything, I love it!!
Author's Response:
he's certainly confident and sexy. they are quite the pair. I'm glad you like it please take the time to review when you can It means alot to me. Thanks for reviewing.
[Report This]Date: Oct 18, 2015 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
AH-mazing story! I enjoyed every chapter and I hope to read many more. I love the characters you've created!! Please keep writing because this story is so perfect!! :)
-M
[Report This]Date: Oct 18, 2015 08:59 am Title: Chapter 51
Sorry I've been slacking on the reviewing, girl! It has nothing to do with the story. It's still awesome! Mattie is adorable. Liv and Michael can't give him back now. They already love him so much. I can't wait to see more!
Author's Response:
Slacker. thanks for taking the time to review. I certainly appreciate every single review.
Date: Oct 18, 2015 03:49 am Title: Chapter 51
I'm in it for the long haul! Yes, a lot weby on in this chapter and all of it was fantastic. Again, you wrote Mattie'should part so accurately in terms of a child's personality and reasoning. I'm rooting for Michael and Liv to adopt him; he's such a refreshing part of this story!
Author's Response:
I think about your reviews when I write Mattie's parts and hope I get it right. I put a lot of thought and try to get into a 3 year olds head. It's been awhile since I've been around that age. Any suggestions are welcome especially seeing you know first hand. Thanks for the support.
[Report This]Date: Oct 18, 2015 03:03 am Title: Chapter 51
Great chapter, as always.
I don´t think Mike and Liv are moving too fast, it is a fiction so you can write what you want and that´t the beauty of it. Nobody of us knew the real Michael Jackson and without any drama it would be boring. In almost every book you can find a sort of drama, while reading you use your imagination and you can dream about it. That´s why I love so much reading - I prefer books than movies.
Anyway pls don´t stop with this story yet, you know, Fear of Flying was the first MJfiction I read, ever. Well it was also first story or book I´ve read in English and thanks it I found the courage to read books in English - it is not my mother language and I always though it is too difficult for me. Well, it isn´t :-) So pls keep writing.
Jana
Author's Response:
Sometimes love is fast and has no timeframe. Like you said it's fiction. I'm glad you like the story thanks for reviewing. It really means a lot.
you should re read fear of flying. I've re written 1/2 of it ...it was one of my first stories and so poorly written I've been editing it so now it's a much better read.
thanks again.
[Report This]Date: Oct 18, 2015 02:58 am Title: Chapter 51
Hey girl. Just wanted to say I really love your stories and writing style. Don't put yourself down & out just because your readers aren't reviewing as much, but I do understand your concern. It is your writing & it is clear to me that you really do enjoy it because I see the passion in your writing. So again continue your story & hell make new ones, I support you 100%.
Now on to the story, I still love it & its direction. I think its sweet how Mattie just came in & grouped everyone together like a big happy family. Its sad realizing how traumatized he is & at such a young age. I hope that Michael & Liv will be able to take him. I highly doubt that the orphanage will disagree. I really do believe that Michael & Liv will adopt him & also strengthen their relationship. I really do wish that Liv could open her mind up to the thought of marrying Michael. I think she knows it is inevitable & that is what scares her.
I also thought of something when I read the last chapter. Michael's family has been completely absent through his relationship with Liv. Release the Jacksons!! I don't want it to be alot of drama. I just think it would be akward if he returned home with his German-American girlfriend & their adopted son who is French, with no explaination. Lol. I would like to see Janet be the first to pop up. a86; I think the entire family would accept Michael & Liv's relationship though, except for Joseph maybe. I can see him & Stefan going at it now.
Anyways, I hope you enjoy this review & that it, along with others, will brighten your day & inspire you to continue the amazing work that you do. I also hope you take my suggestion into consideration. Keep your head up! Much love. d84;d84;d84;
Author's Response:
Now that Mattie is in their lives I was planning on bringing in Katherine to visit and give parenting tips same with livs mother.
Thanks for for the support its just frustrating that people don't take the time to review unless I threaten to quit. It shouldn't be that way. Btw watch for my next story. I'm working on it now. I'll put it out and see if I get any bites to continue.
thanks again
Date: Oct 18, 2015 01:27 am Title: Chapter 51
First of all, please do continue i love this story
Hope they can keep Mattie, poor thing needs some loving people in his life after all he's been trough
Hmm will Liv ever say I do? She should know by now Michael loves her more than anyone and is not going to leave her
Author's Response:
Thanks I'm glad you like it. It's nice to hear that especially when readers go silent on me. Thanks for reviewing
[Report This]Date: Oct 18, 2015 01:15 am Title: Chapter 51
i would love to see this story continue it will make me sad when i know it will end eventually this was a awesome chapter im glad mattie had so much fun im glad liv and mike will keep mattie if they can i am looking very much forward to the next amazing chapter
Author's Response:
The little guy enjoyed most of it. Hopefully he will be ok. Thanks for taking the time to review
Date: Oct 17, 2015 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 51
I loveeee this story! You should know I'm a big fan of your work haha
Author's Response:
Well then you need to review more...lol. Thanks for the support I do appreciate it
[Report This]Date: Oct 17, 2015 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 51
Definitely continue! Very worth reading. I hope they get to keep Mattie. That poor bit has been through enough. Michael definitely met his match with Blu!!
Author's Response:
Thought you would like the additional sparring. Keeping it real.
Date: Oct 17, 2015 07:14 pm Title: Chapter 48
Uhhhh. I think its wayyy too soon for them to be having a kid i mean they literally havent dated that long, they havent lived together really, its moving wayy too fast. I get that they're serious about each other but this is too big of a step. Its whatever they want I guess this is just really sudden. Then shes wanting to leave the tour to go home and take care of kid she just met if michael doesnt let her keep him with them on the tour. Ya thats just not ok.
Author's Response:
Love sometimes has no time limits. If they keep him then it can't legally happen overnight so it will take time or at least that's the way I see it. Thanks for taking the time to review. I do appreciate it.
Date: Oct 17, 2015 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 47
Her getting attacked was.. Uhmm. I get you want to make your story more interesting it just seemed random. Ya i do love how devoted nate was to helping olivia its not just a job to him. Thats very commendable and rare. He reminds me of Bill Whittfield a bit, who im sure you know was one of Michael's bodyguards up until you know. The book he and Javon wrote is astounding, it really is. No they didnt have as friendly of a relationship with michael as nate & mj do in your story. It was strictly professional. Which is sad in a way because you didnt get to see much of Michael but more michael jackson and how he was towards his employees. Im sure had this story been set wayy before the bashir docu and the trial it wouldve been different, hed be less guarded and closed off and beaten down. My point is i like that you write about who you think michael is not michael jackson. I think no that is bullshit about what nate said about robyns motivations for this, she didnt respect the boundaries thats it. She knew that it was sex only. Cant remember if she was paid or not. Its not becaues of some bullshit biologically theory that women are wired to be more emotional and connect sex with emotion. Women can have sex without getting attached. And obviously Ted convinced her and played on her feelings to get her to help him carry out his plan. You definitely should read that book because as they said in an interview no one in his circle defends him. Or tries to set the record straight. The whole oh theyre violating some non disclosure wall of silence is bullshit. Michael isnt here to defend himself. If they didnt say anything no one would know what hes really like from an unbiased view. They stayed at that job despite not getting paid because they were dedicated to it. Anyway keep this up its good. But dont put unnecessary drama in to make it interesting.
Author's Response:
its hard to keep it interesting and not all about water ballon and swuirt gun fights so I try to be different. I didn't want to go the lovely one preggers and coming back route so I took a chance on the crazy lover route. No she was never paid they were just friends with benefits but she wanted more. Jealousy got the best of her and liv took the brunt of all of it. The attack wasn't jus thrown in there it was built up subtly with little things here and there happening at the villa, the hotel etc. I thought the catacombs were a great setting seeing they were in France. After reading about that.
nate and Mike are closer because of the age that Nate came along and was saved by Michael. I have read the bodyguard book when it came out. It's good but sad. I actually based lovely one off of the story of flower and friend in the book. But I also have talked to people who knew him back then and have different perspectives of things. Who do you believe. The only person who knows the truth is no longer here so I take liberties to try and make him more human and less Peter Pan like. I personally like the real person who's a edgier mans man but that's just me. At least in my story he could find love.
thanks as always for reviewing.
Date: Oct 17, 2015 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 51
Hi!
That was a great chapter ! Keep writing! :)
I love how protective they are of Mattie but still keeping things hot between them^^
But why Liv doesnt want to marry Michael?
I am waiting for next chapter! :)
Thank You
Author's Response:
She will always be afraid of commitment. look how long it took for her to admit she loved him. afraid of being hurt. Thanks for reviewing
[Report This]Date: Oct 15, 2015 06:06 pm Title: Chapter 50
Man! Stefan sure has changed his tune. Selling the paper is for the best before he dies and can't enjoy some of his life. Hey, maybe he can get back with his ex wife!!! blu would be happy. Glad that Michael is able to enjoy good fatherly love from Stefan. Hopefully Mattie will be able to stay. Keep up the good work
Author's Response:
thanks for reviewing.
[Report This]Date: Oct 15, 2015 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 50
great chapter
Author's Response:
thank you and thanks for always taking the time to review.