[Report This]Date: Jul 16, 2015 10:44 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Suffering
Wow... Very cool, as well as very well-written, too. I like it... :)
Keep up your super-neat, very brilliant and phenomenally creative writing... :)
Author's Response:
Nice to see you, MJFan and thank you so much! I've always been an obsessive compulsive writer, lol. It's my dream to write for a living. Maybe someday, who knows?
Your compliments mean a great deal to me. Thank you for readwreading and reviewing. :)
[Report This]Date: Jul 10, 2015 01:10 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Damaged
Some truths hurt because hit too close to home. Michael was spot on in guessing Amber's issues. She just has a hard time accepting that she is so transparent to him and he can see her issues, because they are a mirror of his issues. From now on, they can either help each other or lead each other deeper down the path to destruction....
Author's Response:
That's exactly right fem, I love your insight. They are like mirrors to each other in some ways. Things can definitely go either way.
[Report This]Date: Jul 09, 2015 01:02 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Damaged
Wow... very awesome, as well as very inspiring too. I like it. :)
Plus, I am glad that Michael survived the overdose. Deep down, Amber realized that he was right when he told her he could see her inner self (which got beatings instead of hugs, abuse instead of guidance and emotional manipulation instead of love), but she didn't want to admit it. I just hope she doesn't do something that isn't very smart, and that she will see sense and hopefully see the truth in Michael's words...
Anyway, keep up your super-cool, beautifully phenomenal and uniquely creative writing... :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Yeah, she's going to do something stupid, but that's how we humans learn our most important lessons :)
Date: Jul 05, 2015 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Obsessed
Frank Cascio mentioned the You Rock My World problem in his book my friend Michael. Here's the wiki page on it. Frank tells the whole story. He was a close friend and assistant to Michael. http://michaeljackson.wikia.com/wiki/You_Rock_My_World I honestly think despite the annoying ass reviews on Remember the Time, the body guards book is probably the most honest unbiased account there is of Michael. There isn't any exaggerated facts added for entertainment etc. that's why I won't read J Randy's book it's extremely exaggerated and Michael is made to look like an autistic, emotionally immature, and overall a spoiled brat. it's hard for us to understand how easily people can write him off as a fucking weirdo, freak, pedophile as it's so obvious he's none of those things. Doing a little research easily clears up those misconceptions. We don't see his ugliness outside or otherwise because one he's such an amazing, extraordinary kind man who is extremely caring and selfless especially to his fans despite how crazy some of them can be, and 2 because he's just not. I never liked that word anyway, ugly that is, in terms of appearance it should only be applied in terms of character. As far as ugly goes in appearance he doesn't look awful like at all. What I hated & what really pissed me off is how a lot of people criticized, bullied and picked on him while he was alive and after he passed they went on about how amazing he is and how tragic it was. I heard that about untouchable that's why I asked what you thought. I saw the author interviewed he was fair in being unbiased and more prone to thinking that Michael was innocent of the charges brought on him in 2003. I want to read Aphrodite Jones' book on him she worked on it with Tom, michaels lawyer.
Author's Response:
Ah, I see. Seems like that's a different breakdown from the one that is referred to in Untouchable, but it's the same problem. For some reason people were obsessed with his nose and skin color. I could never understand that - it's like big fucking deal, you know? He was still hot. Oh well, people suck. I'll try to get around to reading Casico's book and the Aphrodisiac Jones book. I don't like Taraborelli either lol.
I have flipped out on more than one occasion about the world not thinking I'm pretty enough. I have acted paranoid, irrational and immature plenty of times. And if someone were to write a book about me, highlighting only those qualities and mentioning only those times, I would look like an emotionally stunted freak too. Some authors clearly have an agenda (besides money of course).
I'm grateful that R. Sullivan at least takes the time to debunk the Chandlers' and the Arvizos' bullshit and exposes them for the extortionists that they are. There are a lot of stories in that huge 900+ page book that just seem like filthy rumors from murky sources.
In my fiction, Michael is not a typical drug store romance novel, ideal male. That exceedingly masculine, dick swinging hero who is also somehow as caring, sensitive and nurturing as any woman is not only nonexistent, but also boring as hell to me. I love Michael’s realness. That’s what I'm into. To me, his real character was beautiful and wonderful enough, even with the imperfections and issues. I feel no need to airbrush him or idealize him, you know what I mean?
Date: Jul 04, 2015 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Obsessed
Is that a good book? I'm reading the one by the bodyguards right now and it's pretty good and unbiased. They're honest and frank about Michael not being perfect but trying to do his best despite his crazy life and circumstances as a father etc. so was it the you rock my world video shoot that that happened at, I mean that was mentioned in the book? I remember hearing how he locked himself in the bathroom and starting cutting his hair crying hysterically and kept saying they called me a freak, something like maybe they're right I'm a freak, or I'm a monster. Yea it was heartbreaking:/ I so after! Anyone who makes him cry is on my shit list. He's like one of those people you never want to see cry.
Author's Response:
I'm working on reading the book the bodyguards wrote too lol. Haven't finished it yet. I like those guys, that's why they're in the story even though I know they weren't around yet during the Invincible era. Untouchable is okay, it's got a lot of information in it, but some of the stories I just don't believe at all. I think the author is all about sensationalism and not so much about checking facts, but that's just my opinion. It didn’t say anything about this happening on the YRMW set, I don’t think. I'm trying to google it but I can't find anything about that particular Michael meltdown, but I'll keep looking. I don't doubt that it happened though. Looks were an excruciatingly sensitive subject fot him and people tortured him about it. Even people I know say all kinds of mean shit and that they can't see what I find so attractive about him. He wasn't flawless, but I don’t understand how anyone can think he wasn't beautiful, though. It's wierd how subjective that is, lol.
Date: Jul 04, 2015 11:15 am Title: Chapter 8 - Needed
Whoa. That was intense. I'm assuming this happened at the you rock my world short film set? that's a sad story he had to wear a bandana and keep his fedora down because of what happened. Except it was the director who suggested that putty be put on his nose. Definitely look that up. Hell I would've fired that fucking bitch Trudy and the director for saying that. That's so unprofessional and down right rude. Grace does have a point about Sneddon finding out but he needs to go to a hospital and get immediate medical attention. It seems no one there knows how to put him on an iv drip and flush the drugs out of his system. Yea fuck that dude that just walked in. Maybe one of the bodyguards or someone knows someone who works at a hospital who can keep mj's presence there a secret. Idk great story I love it
Author's Response:
Hey Fire! Nice to see you, and thanks for the review. The story I was actually referring to in this chapter is from the book Untouchable by Randall Sullivan. There is a story in there about his Manager Trudy Green who said exactly that after trying to have someone make a mold of his face and when Michael found out what she said he cried and was heartbroken. I hot so upset when I read that and yes, I totally hated her too! I hate anyone who makes Michael cry. The man who walks in is a surprise cameo! You'll see :)
[Report This]Date: Jul 02, 2015 12:32 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Needed
This is really neat so far, as well as very well-written, too. I like it... :)
Keep up your super-neat, very unique and creatively beautiful writing! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, it means a lot. <3 Thanks for the pic too. I just never get tired of looking at him lol
Date: Jun 25, 2015 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Paid
Oh wow. It's hard not to have a sex fantasy being alone in a bathroom with him with a bath running. He needs to stop using ASAP unless he wants to hurt his relationship with his kids. Wait she's not giving MJ a bath right? Jk no seriously update soon like now
Author's Response:
Lol, not exactly. And yes her mind is buzzing with all kinds of thoughts :) There's a really explicit flash foward scene coming next. I already flashed forward in a previous chapter to June 25 2001, which I'm calling Michael’s "little death" day.
As far as using, he's not being too bad with that yet, but things do get serious.
[Report This]Date: Jun 24, 2015 01:53 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Paid
NOW you got me curious! Bathroom scene - SOON! Upload next chapter soon!
Author's Response:
I just had a thought - how about this: the more reviews and favs I get, the more sex scenes I'll write? LOL just kidding, I'm glad you like the story, that makes me happy :)
Stay tuned, things do get intense ;)
[Report This]Date: May 24, 2015 07:58 am Title: Chapter 1 - Obsessed
Sigh, this story seems to be written for me, after my life. I suffered untold misery at the hands of my own mother during the Chandlers mess. To the day, I cannot forgive her for what she did and said to me during those days.
Author's Response:
I totally understand femalien <3 This a really personal story, but I figured it would steike a chord with others.
Date: May 05, 2015 02:37 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Dangerous
Nice and interesting story; Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Thank you :)