[Report This]Date: Oct 14, 2015 05:29 am Title: Chapter 29 - It's Your Bed
They are so cute together, lol. And that sex scene was just the cherry on top ;)
Author's Response:
Aren't they just 😊 Thank you!
[Report This]Date: Oct 13, 2015 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 29 - It's Your Bed
Bwahahahahaha I loved it!
Author's Response:
😂 thank you <3
Date: Oct 13, 2015 01:46 pm Title: Chapter 29 - It's Your Bed
Nooooo! How are they going to wriggle out of this one?!?! Love the story! Your love for Michael really shines through <3
Author's Response:
Thank you so much <3 I love him so much that this story kind of writes itself. :)
[Report This]Date: Oct 13, 2015 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 29 - It's Your Bed
Ooops! That's gonna be an interesting introduction. "This is a Jackson family engagement ritual" :D
Author's Response:
Hahaha! There's an idea XD
[Report This]Date: Oct 07, 2015 10:17 am Title: Chapter 28 - Seems Like There's Never a Dull Moment
You don't know what you've got till it's (nearly) gone. I had an inkling Michael would pop the question (well, the ring) after all the shit going down backstage. I hope the bitch will have a permanent hole in her head from that heel, that no weave will properly cover.
Author's Response:
Well, I know one thing - Starr isn't going to help her with her hair extensions, that's for sure.
Michael figures it would be really rotten to let her go through all that for him, just to be disowned by her angry Catholic family. He still has the same valid misgivings about it.
Date: Oct 07, 2015 08:24 am Title: Chapter 28 - Seems Like There's Never a Dull Moment
:D :D :D keep it going! Love it!
Author's Response:
I totally will! Thank you so much!!! <3
[Report This]Date: Oct 07, 2015 07:16 am Title: Chapter 28 - Seems Like There's Never a Dull Moment
*New reader alert!! Lol* I just read this chapter and the previous ones and damn ! ! Your writing is awesome! ! Great story!!!
Author's Response:
Hey new reader :) Thank you so much! You read the whole thing? I'm totally flattered! Thank you <3 <3 <3
[Report This]Date: Oct 06, 2015 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 28 - Seems Like There's Never a Dull Moment
Great! And congrats to them :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much pj, much appreciated <3
[Report This]Date: Oct 04, 2015 01:10 am Title: Chapter 1 - Obsessed
I need u 2 understand that even though I don't know u I love u!!! Idk how many times I have 2 tell u that u have gotten me thru some tough times these past few weeks girl and I'm so thankful 4 dat ur my sanity if that makes any sense but I want u 2 know u matter 2 me. U have never judged me even in my darkest times when I had nothing but mj and God as the only thing 2 keep me going. U and a few other ppl r the reason I come 2 this site and 2 write my stories and give ppl who need love and 2 hear encouraging words and need a smile 2 brighten their day and try 2 make them feel better. I truly hope i have changed some ppl's minds and opinions about not only myself but about love in general. I love 2 give ppl love it makes me feel better as a person. Y have u been feeling alone? U better not b crying and feeling down bc I have the cure 4 dat and it's unconditional love. u have no reason 2 feel that way but mj said u can feel alone in a room full of ppl so I know how u feel. Smile baby girl someone loves u somewhere and ur loved and cherished by me!! Its so important 2 know love and 2 know how 2 properly give love. Once u know love and u feel it and hear it on a daily basis u will know what it feels like and be able 2 share it with others the way mj did. I hope my words make u cry tears of joy and happiness cuz u deserve it honey. Of course someone like me can know and love someone like u!! Like mj said "I'm only human". Take these words with u and hold them close 2 ur heart and u will feel me right there with u!! remember: love ur enemies!! Hope 2 hear from u soon!
Author's Response:
It's hard to explain why, honey. It seems that no matter what I say or do, I always end up pissing people off, weirding them out or just generally rubbing them the wrong way. I am mostly ignored in my family, work and social environment. Sometimes I know why I'm being avoided - I can be an ass - I'll be the first to admit that. But no more than anyone else I know. Most of the time, I am that loyal, understanding person who will go out of her way for other people, but people don't care. I don't reach out anymore - AT ALL. So now at least my isolation can be on my own terms, and my own fault. I appreciate you taking the time to make me feel appreciated and included here. It helps me more than you know <3
Date: Oct 03, 2015 12:59 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Obsessed
Aww thank honey!! I'm glad u thought about me and my personal addiction 2 mj and my wild side 4 him. I love reading stories that have bold scenes in them like urs do. I love authors who or not afraid 2 b bold yet sassy and set at the same time and u know how 2 do it all in one. Hope 2 hear from u soon!
Author's Response:
Thank you, honey. I truly appreciate it. I have been feeling alone, even on this site, surprisingly. It often feels like people just want to ignore me until I FO. I'm really grateful that a talented, insightful writer such as yourself hears what I'm saying and loves my work <3
[Report This]Date: Oct 02, 2015 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Obsessed
U know how 2 get me and keep me girl!! Will u plz update cuz I'm going insane here just thinking about what is going 2 happen next!! Girl Idk how many times I read that scene on the velvet couch?! OMG I had a heart attack just reading! U know u did dat and u need 2 do it again with the next chapter. Ur the #1 author I love if I could I would give u an award myself. Hope 2 hear from u soon!
Author's Response:
This just made my whole week. Thank you so much, beautiful girl <3 Red couch scene was much loved. I'll make a note of that ;) Compliments like these make every hour I spend writing worth it. I'll try to think of something even wilder than red couch and belt - for u
[Report This]Date: Oct 02, 2015 10:56 am Title: Chapter 27 - How Do You Like the Belt
Omg!! I love how u did this chapter! U literally had me on the edge of my seat screaming "oh my god!" This chapter is what's up honey u did this and the steamy scene with them on the velvet couch, is 2 sexy!! Its about time he tried something new! It gets bored doing the same thing over and over, have a lil fun once in a while, like seriously! (I pictured myself there 4 a minute, yeah i admit im jealous) lol. I hope she doesn't die!! I have got my fingers crossed hoping and praying she makes it or michael or someone stops her. Plz hurry and update when u can! I love it and I'm addicted! Hope 2 hear from u soon!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! <3 I'm very flattered. I try my best. I like to create crazy, obsurd scenarios sometimes like that Kill Bill- is fight scene. . .and I like to live out other fantasies with him that I only get to imagine irl, like the scene before that. Lol!
[Report This]Date: Oct 02, 2015 01:20 am Title: Chapter 27 - How Do You Like the Belt
No, Starr, you and the baby can't die! There must be a bodyguard around in all the damned arena!
Author's Response:
Must be :)
[Report This]Date: Sep 28, 2015 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Obsessed
I loved reading this chapter, it had me gone in more ways than one. I just read ur response back and u made me feel good. U and a few other ppl get me, I mean really and truly understand some one like me and I love u 4 that. 2 answer ur question about mj, idk what it is about him, I'm still trying 2 figure it out lol. I love that he gave back and he never 4 got where he came from and I love that about him. The fact that he loved kids is sexy 2 me, I don't worry about what other ppl say like mj said "ppl always always have something 2 say" y can't other men b more like mj? He was the perfect gentleman and there won't b another. U actually could c myself being with mj, I think if I was with another man I would b miserable, (sigh) I rest mg case...hope 2 hear from u soon
Author's Response:
Thanks :) Sometimes it's hard to tell how people are feeling about the direction of the story. Gotta follow my vision though lol. Yes, he was really something else. "People will always have a judgement," he said. It's so true. What can you do?
Of course some of us wanted to actually be with him. If by some crazy accident of fate, I had a chance to get in front of him, I probably would have asked him to call me sometime. Worth a try anyway, lol. This is why fiction is so much fun. You can try on a different personality, or a different life in your mind for a while. It breaks up some of the misery of reality.
[Report This]Date: Sep 22, 2015 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 26 - It's Going to Be a Terrible Disaster
But then, he is right...something terrible is going to happen, just in a few days. I believe that some people have the power to foresee these disasters. I do. I had an experience of sorts and I know how it feels...
Author's Response:
I believe that too. I know there have been many examples. I mean there was Nostradamus :)
And she just thinks he's completely lost it. Crazy huh?