Date: May 16, 2015 05:48 pm Title: Chapter 3. Running Back Into You...
I'm glad Dawn just let out all her hurt. She's a beautiful woman and deserves a man who's gonna treat her right. Cree is not that man, and I think deep down he knows that, that's why his ass is crying and full of regret. Idk about them being friends.. Maybe at some point. I don't think she needs that right now though. As for Michael, as I said before, he's a dumb ass. Now he's alone when he coulda had the woman of his dreams and a child too, being a good father and family. But he messed that up cuz he's a COWARD. Janet is right in calling him a hypocrite, I woulda probably said something worse. Lol. Geena still ain't shit though for using him for fame and money. That's trifling as hell. But Michael had it coming when he let love, REAL love walk out his life. I honestly don't think he loved Geena like that, definitely not enough to marry her. He just did that to probably prove to himself that he's not in love with Dawn, which was a lie. I guess I just don't see what's so bad about loving Dawn? He didn't wanna ruin their friendship but was content enough to keep having sex with her? BYE Michael!
I hope there's an update soon cuz I cannot wait to see what happens when they see each other after all these years.
Author's Response:
Yess, Dawnette has those feelings bottled up inside and she just needed to release them. And Cree finally came to an understanding that he wasn't the right guy for our girl. At least he knew that much, right. As for them being friends, I can seen it happening, but at some point along the beat in the story. Now, everybody ans they mama knows that Michael was dumb as a door knob. To choose a woman who gave no fucks about you than the woman who did was beyond me. Just stupid. Girl, you're 100% right about Mike. He could have had the woman of his dreams and family but he let that slip away.
Date: May 10, 2015 10:25 am Title: Chapter 2. Running Back Into You...
Yassssss I am loving this! Dawn needs to let Cree or whatever his name is say what he needs to say and let his ass go on about his business. No woman deserves a man who constantly cheats on them. She can and will do better. As for Michael, you reap what you sow! His ass is lonely and suffering due to his own fault and selfishness. Let a real good woman go who loved him for him, for a damn gold digger! BYE! I have no sympathy for his ass. Only thing I want to happen ASAP is to know he has a son. I can't wait to see his reaction on that. But he will def have to earn Dawn back. For damn sure. Can't wait till the next update.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you loving it girl. And yes, girl. Cree trying to win Dawn back and stuff saying he is a "changed" man. Hmmm. Is he really now. But you right thought. Dawn needs to go on head and let him say what he gotta say then throw up the deuces. Ain't nobody got timw for that! And as for Mike, you do reap what you sow. That is very true. He knew that Dawnette was falling in love with him but he kept his feelings hidden away and married another who pretty much dug in his pockets for some damn cash. Just stupid , I tell ya. Now, all that needs to be really done, is Dawnette telling Michael about Kyan. It's time, whether or not she isn't prepared to see him or don't want to talk to him.
[Report This]Date: May 10, 2015 07:14 am Title: Chapter 2. Running Back Into You...
Oh man I was so heartbroken when Trouble T Roy died. He was my favorite one of the Boys. I remembered when that song came out. It was the jam!!! Got me reminiscing and stuff lol.
Michael doesn't have a right to be mad Janet's been talking to Dawn. He should be mad if Janet knows Kyan is Michael's son and didn't tell him. He should be down right pissed at that.
As for Cree I'm dubious if his intentions. Why all of a sudden now he's a changed man?
More soon! <333
Author's Response:
Girl yess. They shown it on Unsung on Tv One and I heard about it. It was very sad. And that song is the jam too. Reppin 90s.
Of course Mike doesn't have the right to be mad at Janet for talking to Dawn after all that time. Yes, Janet knows about Kyan but Michael can't get mad at her for not telling him cause it isn't her place to do that. That's all Dawnette's doing. Janet isn't the one who kept a child away from him for dour years. Dawnette did.
Lucree...it's obvious he trying to get Dawn back. But the way she feeling towards him, I don't think he stands a chance. Maybe he has changed, We don't know unless he shows that he have.
[Report This]Date: May 09, 2015 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 2. Running Back Into You...
plzzzzzzzzz continue!!! He just found out about janet talking to dawnette...he was mad and he know it lolol Lucree better be a changed man or it gonna be a beat down:):):):)
Author's Response:
I will, girl. Lol, Mike was trying hard to hide how he really was feeling. He probably was mad. And Lucree, Hmm....maybe or maybe not he is a changed man. We wouldn't know unless Dawnette takes him back.
Date: May 07, 2015 01:25 am Title: Chapter 1. Running Back Into You...
Continue this please
Author's Response:
Lol, I will.
Date: May 06, 2015 02:35 am Title: Prologue...
Aww u make me feel loved and cherished!!! U make me feel like my opinion matters in a way. Its crazy how it feels like u have a connection with ppl, just by simply exchanging words. I'm glad 2 know this story is not going no where!! Yay! I love it a lot. How did u come up with this story anyway?
Author's Response:
Lol, aww I'm glad I make you feel that way. But,of course your opinion matters. Ppl who read this story their opinions matter because I want to know their thoughts of it and things like that. If I need a little tweaking here or there to make it more interesting, ya know. And as for the crazy feels of me having a connection with ppl by exchanging words, well, it's kind of hard to explain that. I think it comes naturally imo. And yes this story isn't going anywhere. I couldn't do that since you love it So much now. :):) now as for how I came.up with it, tbh, I was actually in church when I came up with this story. Somehow, it just popped up in my head and I had an idea for a third story. It's just came like that. Well, God gave me the idea, let's put it at that. After all , I was in church at the time of the idea for the story. :)
Date: May 03, 2015 10:39 pm Title: Prologue...
I'm loving this a lot. 5 years is a long time 2 finally c some 1 again and a lot can change and happen in such a time. I love the pics they r 2 cute. Will u keep writing this story?! Im a fan of it. I love it so much. Ur a talented writer who came up with a masterpiece of a story.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you love it. And yes five years is a hellova long time since someone seen each other and alot of things do change in such time as that. As you read I'm the story, alot has changed between Michael and Dawnette.
Ans yes I agree with you. The pics are cute that's why I chose them. :):)
Of course I'm going to continue writing this story. It ain't going no where. I promise you that. And I appreciate your love and sweet comments. Thank you so much. Can't wait to hear more from you soon.
[Report This]Date: May 03, 2015 02:31 pm Title: Chapter 1. Running Back Into You...
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue!!!!!!!! Michael is about to have old feelings rushing back and Dawnette is gonna be so sad:((((((
Author's Response:
I will. I promise!!! And it seems like the old feelings are back though he never told Dawnette he had feelings for her five years ago. Why now???? Dawnette probably isn't gonna know how to take seeing him after so long and no contact, especially now that they have a son he doesn't know about.
[Report This]Date: May 03, 2015 01:57 pm Title: Chapter 1. Running Back Into You...
Yeees....!! i love it girl.... :) really. The story is amazing ! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I'm glad you like it thus far.
Date: May 03, 2015 11:17 am Title: Chapter 1. Running Back Into You...
Little Jayden awwwww!!!! And Paula
litte does Dawnette know.....the big artist is gunna be Michael lmaoo
and kayn is Michael son...I seen it coming girl. I can feel the drama
Author's Response:
I had to use them as the characters. Karen is so cure and Paula is sexy as hell. God!!! Lol.
Dawnette is gonna flip when she finds out its Michael.
Ans yes Kyan is Michael's son. Juat wonder how she's gonna break it down to him.
[Report This]Date: May 03, 2015 08:30 am Title: Chapter 1. Running Back Into You...
Awe Kyan is cute. I love Jaden Smith with his little adorable self.
Hmph well Michael if you where in love with Dawn you should have gotten with her. However karma is a gold digging bitch and you married her. Now he has to wallow in regret and loss.
Wow Dawn has to tell Michael about Kyan asap. Let's see when the two come face to face. That will be interesting.
More soon <333
Author's Response:
Girl, ikr!!! I was like, I have to use Jaden for Kyan.
And Michael was being scary and instead of telling Dawn his true feelings, he went against them leaving homegirl heartbroken. And like, you said, karma is a total bitch. That ex-wife of his air didn't love him like he claimed she didn't. What you say and do to another shall be donw unto you. He for what he deserved. He needed to feel Dawn's pain.
And when they meet again in five years, ain't no telling how that's gonna go. Mike probably get let swiped. Kml.
[Report This]Date: May 02, 2015 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 1. Running Back Into You...
Oh love it. Great chapter. Can't wait to see what Dawn and Michael have to say and do when they meet up.
And little Kyan. O Boy.
Author's Response:
Thanks, hun. And when they do meet and see each other once again after five years, no telling what's going to be said or happen between the two.
And Kyan is so adorable. But, Dawn has to let Mike know about him ASAP.
Date: Apr 30, 2015 07:54 pm Title: Prologue...
Great start can't wait to read more! As the story progess I'll leave a more detail review.
Author's Response:
Thank you!!! :):)
[Report This]Date: Apr 27, 2015 06:49 pm Title: Prologue...
Never seems to be a good idea for best friends to become lovers. Someone seems to always get hurt.
Nice chapter.
Author's Response:
Yes, you're right. When one of them catches feelings but the other don't, it causes a lot of problems and leave the other heartbroken.
And thanks. :)
[Report This]Date: Apr 27, 2015 05:55 pm Title: Prologue...
Oh god Michael already living the trife life!! so basically he was cheating on his girlfriend with his best friend this whole time and he's says that's who he's in love with. Come on Mike!! Can't wait to see what happens when their paths cross again. Did he finally get married or did the break up?!? Good start!!
More soon!!
Author's Response:
You see him, huh? Trying to be a lil playa playa, lol. And as for cheating on his girlfriend's with his best friend, he should have ended that stuff with Dawnette a long time ago instead of leading her on and just tell her he had a girlfriend. He don't think. When they do cross paths, it's gonna be...something, especially how the way things ended between them years ago. Well see if he really did get married or did they break up.