Date: Aug 02, 2015 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 10. Running Back Into You...
It was a good chapter girl! And I can understand Dawn's reasons. Michael's ass ain't thinking. What would Geena have said if she seen some woman at their door telling her that she's pregnant by her fiancée? Come to think about it.. Wouldn't that mean Michael was kinda cheating on Geena with Dawn if they were sexing the whole time he was seeing her in order for him to just up and get engaged? Chile BYE. Michael is lucky dawn ain't cuss his narrow ass out. That's ugly. Either way, he knows about the child now. So get the fuck over it and start being daddy. And yeah, he probably wouldn't have gotten married had she told him she was pregnant when she found out. And at the same time, that woulda been even more bs cuz then all he woulda did was try to be with her outta obligation. I'm still not really here for Michael to begin with because I still can't get behind his retarded ass logic. He was allegedly in love with dawn but broke her heart and married another woman? Shit will never make sense to me. All I know is if he even tries to act funny or throw any kinda shade after this point, Dawn needs to say to hell with being sorry and drag him for filth. She's said sorry enough.
Author's Response:
Your reviews give me life. You be going in, I swear. Lol.
And thanks girl. Anywho, Dawn did try to protect him from getting into major trouble that's why she never told him about Kyan, but it still not an excuse. Michael deserved to know about his child whether it was going to ruin his marriage or not. Hell, either way it goes, he cheated on Geena So his marriage was bound to be over. But we would know cause it would be up to Geena to make that decision, call the shots.
But both of them did each other wrong. They both done things to each other that they regret. So really it's 50/50 in this.
And you're right, about Mike being obligated to be with Dawn had things gone differently. But he shouldn't.
And as for Michael throwing shade, it's possible he would but we coukd just give him the benefit of the doubt for now about that.





Date: Aug 02, 2015 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 10. Running Back Into You...
I could see where Dawn would feel bad and not want to ruin what Michael had with his fiancé but still wasn't the most logical of reasons. Her discomfort and the possibility of messing up Michael's thing didn't take into account the baby.
I'm glad they worked it out to where that can at least speak rationally to each other. Michael is still angry but I don't think it will last too long. He's in love with Dawn so that reason alone will soften the blow. Now he knows he has this precious littl baby so he will focus on getting to know him. As for what his family thinks, that doesn't really matter at this point. Ky is here it's either the accept him or they don't.
My thoughts is what is Geena going to do knowing he has Ky in his life now. Hmmmmmmm.
More soon! <333
Author's Response:
It's understanding she tried to do for the sake of MIchael's marriage, but it wasn't the best thing in the world to do. As you can see, she very regretful for what she's done and she can't take it back. If she could she would.
As for them working it out like two grown adults and not kids, they were able to come up with Dawn and Ky paying him a visit to Neverland and tell Kyan. But no Mike is all smile d at the fact he had a son, his first born. He couldn't have been happier.
As for his family, I think they will accept Kyan into the family, it's obvious that Janet did. The only thing about them, is that they will be shocked because they would never though of Mike and Dawn together but under such complicated circumtances.
Whooo!!!! Girl now that you mentioned Geena ain't no telling how she will react to the fact Michael had his first child with another woman she never knew about. But she has every right to be mad at the fact he cheated throughout their engagement but it's not going to change anything now. So what's the use of fussing at him about it?
But she will be somewhat disappointed tho. She has that right too. Hioefully, she doesn't do anything but be happy that their daughter have an older brother.
Date: Aug 02, 2015 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 10. Running Back Into You...
- well that went better then I thought and it's going to take time for everyone to adjust to this change , I'm pretty sure geena and their daughter are going to be shocked and also who knows how kyan will react to the news but hopefully everything will go smoothly and her reasons were good for her , to keep a child away from their parent just to keep that parent happy is pretty selfish but what's done is done they all have to just move forward
Author's Response:
Yeah, shocking huh? An Yes it will take everyone some time to adjust. And it's possible Geena will be shocked and maybe a little disappointed that Michael cheated on her during their engagement and not just only that, but conceived a child with a woman she didn't know about. Let's just say mike hid both of them very well From.one another so that was kind of his fault.
But hopefully, Kyan wouldn't be upset but I think he would be happy to know his real father his Michael. As for Dawn keeping their son away just so Mike Could live a happy life, well she shouldn't have done that in the first place. Like Mike said, it didn't matter whether he got married or not, his child comes first.





Date: Jul 30, 2015 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 9. Running Back Into You...
But he wanted to enhance them enhance.
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Woah. Michael didn't even want to meet Kyan? I think Michael is going to want partial custody. He's going to want to get to know his son...and he's going to need to vent. I could imagine Michael not returning for the second half, taking a break until the next day.
You have me on the edge of my seat :)
Author's Response:
If that's an error then I apologize. I have auto correction on my tablet and it does the most so yeah. Sorry about that.
Now back to the story.... I think he would have met him, but Dawn wanted to tell him first about Kyan being his son. As for wanting partial custody of him, it's going to be like taking him away from his mother, which she sort of kept him away from Mike and I could understand him doing that, but to get back at her isn't going to make it better. Two wrongs don't make a right. But at least she told him and of course, have a lot of apologizing and explaining to do, and will not keep him away. He doesn't know why she did it but herself.
And yes, he's going to need to vent. A lot. This is his child he didn't know about. And it's possible that he might just end the session until the next day.... probably next week if need to. This is a lot for him to take in one day, especially during the process of working.
Date: Jul 30, 2015 04:27 am Title: Chapter 9. Running Back Into You...
wow damn continue
Author's Response:
Lol, I will.
Thanks for reviewing.





Date: Jul 26, 2015 02:27 pm Title: Chapter 9. Running Back Into You...
it's getting serious...I love your story.. :)
Author's Response:
I know. Lol. And that you. :)





Date: Jul 25, 2015 11:48 pm Title: Chapter 9. Running Back Into You...
I can say that no matter the reason for them not being together Dawn should have never kept Ky away from Michael. No excuse at all. It should have been expected that he would be mad finding out. She did it for her own personal selfish reasons. No matter what Michael did he deserved to know his son existed from the beginning. Not only was he robbed but Ky was robbed too. Why did she want Ky there for that anyway? She should have hashed it out with Michael then brought Ky into the fold. That plan was bunk from the getgo. Sorry Dawn.
That being said Michael is a damn punk walking out like that instead of approaching them in a non brat like manner and wait to throw his little temper tantrum when Ky wasn't around he ran off like a brat.
Niether of them handled this right. Ugh.
More soon! <333
Author's Response:
Yes, she should have told Michael regardless of their relationship and not being together. Mike had every right to know about their son.
And Dorinda tried to tell her. Bringing Kyan would be useless and a dead give away. She tried telling her that, but Dawn didn't listen.
AnAnd Michael was a punk for walking out and not staying and sorting it out, but think about Kyan who was still in the room. They did not need to go eat each other's throat in front of him. But he'll, girl, they both threw damn tantrums. First dawn walks out and now mike.
But they've both did each other wrong. Michael lied about his feelings ,breaking Dawn's heart and she kept a child from him. As the saying goes, two wrongs don't make a right.
They both really need to sit down and quit running way from everything and sort their mess they created out. One person didn't create it by themselves.
Date: Jul 25, 2015 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 9. Running Back Into You...
Oh well, I'm glad it's out there now! His ass knows! I knew Michael would be upset but fuck his feelings. Now he knows a small inkling of how Dawn felt when he was hiding his alleged feelings for her and ran off to marry another woman like she was supposed to be cool with that shit. I know two wrongs don't make a right, but fuck his FEELINGS. Dawn can tell him she's sorry and tell his ass that she wasn't about to trace and run his ass down or show up on his wife's doorstep and tell him and her that she was pregnant. NO. So yeah, Dawn should've found a way to tell him but at the same time I can understand why she didn't. She was hurt and she needed to heal. Now that he knows, he can accept it and figure out how he and Dawn can co-parent and explain to Kyan that his father is Michael. And as he gets older he will realize how much of a fucking coward his daddy is and how he did his mother. So yeah, my feelings are Michael's ass will DEAL. He's thinking only of himself, which is typical. Idk how the session will go after this, they'll probably cancel it. But I do want Dawn to get Michael's ass together if he does too much! Snatch him Dawn!
Author's Response:
Lmbo, you are a harsh one. But I understand why you said what you though.
Yes two wrong don't make a right, but even when you think about, he did deserve to know about their son just like she deserved the truth about his feelings.
So this is like a what and what situation now. They both hurt each other in some way but one didn't do it intentionally though. Yes, Dawn was hurt, but that wasn't reason why she never told Michael about Kyan. When she left Mike,she left. Never looking back only to discover she was pregnant with his child.
But hopefully they can both sort this thing out and move on. They both made.mistakes so they need.to.learn from them.
Date: Jul 25, 2015 09:23 pm Title: Chapter 9. Running Back Into You...
- he has a right to be angry I just hope that he doesn't do anything to get back at her
Author's Response:
Yes, he does. But knowing him, I don't think he would do anything like that. Dawn never had any intentions of keeping Kyan away from him. It just happened when she left him years ago.





Date: Jul 23, 2015 04:55 am Title: Chapter 8. Running Back Into You...
Oh man. Don't take Will You Be There from Michael. I know when he wrote it it must have been super personal to him. It was a poem he wrote that later became a song. It was such a foreshadowing of things to come for him. I can't imagine anyone else having written it for him.
I'm glad Dawn isn't going to keep Ky from Michael much longer. While it wasn't her intentions to keep Ky from Michael in the beginning it's what she did in the end. She had five whole years to tell him. Michael will be upset I just feel it. Regardless of how he ended things with her, important things like children should never be held back. Not unless the person was an abusive individual.
I'm glad she reconsidered working with him. Now we'll see how her telling him about Ky goes down. Dun dun dun!!
More soon <333
Author's Response:
I knooooow!!!! I was kind of hesitant about it and what people may say cause it is a song he written and no one else. But the thing is this is Dawnette's version and the only thing that is the same is the first verse she had sang to Teddy. We dont know what the rest of song is like in her version. So its a high possibility that Dawn may give it to Mike for himself and he makes it into the song its really originally suppose to be. Think about it....
Now, is doing the right thing as to come to her senses and tell michael finally about Ky. She waited years and it was just time for her to just get it out and over with. Yes mike may be a bit uoset, well who wouldnt because this is a child he doesnt even kniw about.
but at least she changed her mind and decided to work with him.
Date: Jul 22, 2015 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 8. Running Back Into You...
I love this story continue
Author's Response:
Thank you so much.





Date: Jul 22, 2015 03:33 pm Title: Chapter 8. Running Back Into You...
It about time lol
Author's Response:
Lol, yesss. No more waiting.





Date: Jul 22, 2015 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 8. Running Back Into You...
Oh, but Michael wrote WYBT:( Why not KTF?
I want to hear Dawn tell him. She needs to get it over with. Procrastination just makes the burn worse.
Has planned? Maybe she'll have her son brought to the studio....or ask Michael to come with her to visit him, and tell him in the car (when she's driving it, so that harming her would endanger his life).
I think he'll need a moment. There will be resentment. Strong resentment. I wouldn't expect any less, as he loves kids and it was by her choice that they broke contact.
Author's Response:
I know Michael wrote it. Lol. But for this story its different. I'm pretty sure after hearing Dawn say she needs a good voice for it, it's obvious who it might go to in the long run....
Very true. She does need to tell him ASAP!
Now as for he plan whatever it is that she's plannedit could be one of those two choices you put. But I don't think she would want to hurt Mike in the car, lol.
If you didn't know you had a child and just now founding out by the mother, you'll need a moment alright. That's a big issue, especially since she waited five years to tell him.
Date: Jul 22, 2015 12:35 pm Title: Chapter 8. Running Back Into You...
I think she just needs to tell him. Waiting a day or two won't change his reaction, whatever it may be. He may be a little upset at first but then he'll be happy cuz that means he'll be tied to Dawn forever. Michael loves kids and having a child with her will make him that much thirstier for her I think. Either way, he needs to know, and he should try to put himself in her shoes as to why she kept it from him.
Author's Response:
Oh trust me, she is. But waiting a day or two was just going to give her time to get it together and come forward to him with it. But yes, it wouldn't change his reaction of course. We all know Michael loves kids like you said and he'll probably be upset that she never told him which wasn't intentially, but he wouldn't hate her. We don't know that yet. But overall, we all know he will be very happy, especially since he has a kid with Dawn. That just makes everything better for him. Lol.
Date: Jul 22, 2015 09:17 am Title: Chapter 8. Running Back Into You...
I can hear Alicia Keys (Dawnette) singing this. I love how well written this chapter was. It clears up some feelings as well as prepares us for the next chapter. Bravo. I never reviewed anything becuase I mostly just love to read the stories and not interfere but this made me get really excited for the rest of the story to unfold.
Author's Response:
Yesss. I think she have sing a song by Michael's befor in real life. I'm not sure but I believe she has.
AnAnd thank you so much. I really take my time writing these chapters.
And I know exactly how you feel. I used to do the same exact thing at first when I became a member on here. But the reviews don't interfere with anything, it's good for the readers and to know your opinion and input on things and I'm looking forward to hearing more from you.
Thanks for reviewing.