Reviewer: Creole_hunni Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2015 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 11. Running Back Into You...

love it please update soon!! :)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much and I will.

Reviewer: mjjangeleyes Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Aug 17, 2015 07:18 am Title: Chapter 11. Running Back Into You...

Looking forward to what s going to happen between Dawnnette & Michael plus Kyan.  I would love to find out if their relationship does stay as friends or even more now that he has found out Kyan is his Son.

Author's Response:

The way Michael feels about Dawnette a more intimate relationship may occur sometime later in the story. Right now they are really not on friend terms so to speak. 

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 15, 2015 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 11. Running Back Into You...

Janet and Dorinda both made good points, particularly Do tho. Hey that rhymed lol. But for real. Yes Dawn was wrong but so was Michael for cheating and lying to begin with. That's what essentially started this mess and why they have a son now. He was wrong from the damn JUMP! As Janet said, two wrongs don't make a right, but oh well. Kyan is here now, Michael knows he's his, so what point is there to still be mad? Especially when the boy was created from an affair to begin with. Does Michael ever think about that? I'm sure Dawn was not expecting her first child to be from a lying cheating ass coward who was supposed to be her best friend. But it happened. As I said before, Michael can try to get smart and keep an attitude or throw this in Dawn's face if he wants to. She need to drag his narrow ass and kindly remind him what part he played in this too. Cuz last I checked, it takes two people to make a baby!! So Michael better cut the bullshit. Yes dawn was wrong, we established that. But it's time to move on like Janet said. Dawn doesn't need to keep beating herself up about this. 

Author's Response:

Lol you a mess. Spittin bars in the reviews now?? But yes, both Janet and Dorinda made some good.points on what's been going and happened between Michael and Dawn. 

But yes, it all started because of Michael which resulted in them both creating Kyan in the mist of everything. 

But even though they should move on, Michael still has that right to be a little angry still for the mistake Dawn made. Just like she had the right to remain angry with him for what he did. They both did each other wrong and its caused a lot of mess between them.

But both Michael and Dawn are stubborn so we'll see if process of forgiving will take place soon.

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 15, 2015 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 11. Running Back Into You...

Dorinda kinda flip flopped. First she was saying how bad it was Dawn kept Kayan a secret and how much Michael missed out then she was saying we all make mistakes. Which is true. 

Janet saying not to hold a grudge is also true however Michael just found out about Kay the day before. He has a right to be mad even for a little bit. Things on his end have not developed into a grudge just yet. If he Carries on resenting Dawn for months and years to come that's a true grudge. But he can be mad for a little while to sort out his feelings. 

Dawn on the other hand has had time to develop her grudge so it's kind of on her whether she's going to hold on to that now that their back in each other's lives. Janet was right about them both hurting each other. 

I'm sure Kay will enjoy the day at Neverland. It's left to be seen how he will react to Michael being his dad. It could go two ways. 

More soon!! <333

Author's Response:

Girl you noticed it too. She is kind of flipped flipped foreal. But if you think about it more she was saying it was bad what Dawn did. She made a mistake for what she did which was not telling Mike about Kyan and she learned from that mistake she made. I'm trying to put it in a way she won't sound so flippy floppy, lol. 

Now as for Michael not having much of time to hold grudges, that's very true he just found out about Ky and all and it all hasn't sink in enough for him. But he do deserve to be a bit angry for while. As fir Dawn, she had plenty of time to hold a grudge as you said and possibly just forgive Michael for what he did for herself not for him.

They both hurt each other bad. 

Aww, and Kyan is going to enjoy his day at Neverland and spending time with Michael. We'll just have to see what his reaction will be when it's out that Michael is his father. 

Reviewer: MichaelBeMine Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 15, 2015 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 11. Running Back Into You...

I think it will be tough for him to forgive Dawn. I mean she did keep his child from him for so long, and he loves children, been wanting them for so long. I do think that was shitty of her to do.Two wrongs, don't make a right here.

These two are stubborn. Not sure if it's going to take one trip to Neverland to get them to move on.

I'm excited for Kyan to meet his daddy. Yay.

Author's Response:

Yes it is going to take Michael some time to forgive her. He just found out yesterday that he had a child with her. It was a shifty move on her part which is something she should have done even if it was to protect his marriage she should have told him. 

Two wrongs don't make a right, amen to that girl, lol.

Aren't they though? It's a shame they'll never get through anything being that way.

The trip to Neverland is only for Kyan to finally meet and spend time with Michael.

 

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 11, 2015 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 4. Running Back Into You...

Ugh! Dawn go for it! For your career go for it! 

She doesn't need to pay down in the dumps Mike any mind. Lls 

Author's Response:

Lol. I think she should. She's very talented and has a voice on her.

And you right girl. She doesn't. Lol.

Reviewer: Creole_hunni Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Aug 03, 2015 12:59 am Title: Chapter 10. Running Back Into You...

Love it!!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I glad you love it. :):)