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Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 26, 2015 08:55 pm Title: Chapter 8

First - Happy 3 Year Anniversary <3 <3 <3

Second - Michael is being a full out jerk. Exploiting a private moment, putting her in an awkward position, making (and then downplaying) such a hurtful statement. This is just...NO. And I'm not liking these Lisa-Marie foreshadowings. She needs to disappear....sort of like how each album she drops does.....

 

I love your regular chapters, but your extra long ones? fireworks



Author's Response:

THANK YOUUU! I'm going to quote Janet and say, funny how times flies when you're having fun lol :)

Michael is wrong. I don't know what he was thinking about when he told the journalist their secret!

" She needs to disappear....sort of like how each album she drops does....."

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Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 17, 2015 04:13 pm Title: Flashback 4

Oh no you didn't! 😩😩😩😩😩😩 Lisa Marie is always asking for trouble! I hope she's not drama in the future because I'mma jump in the story and beat her ass for Kalli!



Author's Response:

You think it's LMP  as well?

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Maybeeee....

 

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 17, 2015 01:11 pm Title: Chapter 7

????? :,((((( I need a tissue. Of course their relationship wouldn't be the same after all they went through in their lives. They're older. Michael also needs to hear her out. He never does that. Instead he acts like a ass! Now Kalli said something harsh to make him mad and their relationship awkward. Sigh. And now she's sleeping somewhere else.



Author's Response:

They should have tried to work their issues out but I guess Kalliope had enough of waiting for his approval and Michael has enough of her not changing her mind. Hpefully, they can find a way!

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 17, 2015 03:47 am Title: Flashback 4

LOL. I'm from the US. You can't not know who she is. How could he make such a stupid stupid mistake?! This is going to be bad. Especially as he's given her a nickname so close to Kalliope's....



Author's Response:

Could it be Lisa Marie Presley?

Hmm, who knows.

I think it has been showed many times in this story that Michael rarely think anything through lmao

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 17, 2015 02:35 am Title: Flashback 4

Is Michael smoking crack lol? Why would he invite this bitch to his family day? And he doesn't really seem to remember inviting her either....maybe he didn't and she read too much into something he said cause she's thirsty as hell. Lol. Wouldn't surprise me. 

Either way, she needs to leave. Both the family day and the story. 

 



Author's Response:

LOOOL, you're probably right. She mistook his kindness with flirting lol.

You think it's Lisa Marie Presley?

Umm, maybe.

Reviewer: Crazyme55 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 16, 2015 08:32 pm Title: Flashback 4

Elvis' daughter.



Author's Response:

Maybe...

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 16, 2015 07:58 am Title: Chapter 6

Michael is a trip. A complete trip. I know he could not wait to rub that in Charles face. He is so spoiled. If Kalli likes to have fun after work let her! 



Author's Response:

LOOOL, Mike is crazy x)

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 16, 2015 12:59 am Title: Flashback 2

Mama Kat was so annoying! She means well but damn! I would've been went out! All Kalli did was go out with her friends to put a smile on her face and I understand Katherine was scared but damn! And she told Michael....I gulped my own self reading that! Damn I was scared lmaooo and Charles is so sweet. So is Lui bunny but Michael does not play. They all should know that by now.



Author's Response:

They should lol!

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 16, 2015 12:42 am Title: Chapter 5

Daddy Michael is something else but Kalli is silly if she thinks he's not going to come back



Author's Response:

HE IS :) I love me some Daddy Michael lol

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 12, 2015 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 7

Ugh. He's being ridiculously selfish. He wants her to fit into his life and while he thinks about adjusting to hers, he never clues her into those thoughts. It's as though he is pushing her away. If he loves her, he'll do more. And wtf is with her leaving her kids for a night?! They are young and I'm shocked by that. If I were here I'd come back, but I'd sleep in another room.



Author's Response:

Michael has no reason to be surprised. She told him countless times she would eventually get back to work. He had YEARS to get used to the idea.

Kalliope should come back. No reaosn why the children should suffer from their argument

Thank you for the review and the rate :D

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 11, 2015 08:10 pm Title: Chapter 7

Um, I get that she is upset he is not thrilled by her work situation but towalk out on him over it is a bit ridiculous. She didn't give him much chance to get used to it. He was starting to come around. And what she said about rehab was just cruel.

In the first part of this story Kay had a right to be mad at his attitude but he improved and was trying to compromise. Plus not all his points about the kids were wrong. 

Obviously Kay has some resentment about her freedom being taken away that runs deeper than her job. Which isn't totally fair as Michael can't help his fame. That aspect was already set when she met him. Plus part of it is just due to having kids, when you have kids you can't just work 12 h days and take off with your friends on a whim which is what she seems to like doing. Not saying she shouldn't have time to herself but I wonder how much of her anger stems from trouble adjusting to motherhood rather than Michael not being thrilled she is working. 

Kay is not acting very mature. I can understand her but am still disappointed in her. 

She doesn't seem to realize how fortunate she is to have a husband who can afford unlimited housekeepers and nannies. She can take a break whenever she wants which is not the case for most women. Sure his fame has downsides but there are upsides too. I doubt she would be so insistent on working as much if she came home to a dirty house full of screaming kids every day with an uninvolved husband and no help. She doesn't seem to realize how good she has it. 

Michael overreacted at the end by telling her not  to come back so he should apologize. But she is acting like a child in this chapter. I can understand why he lost his temper I would too. 

These two have to fix it. They will both be miserable without each other. Although I know Daddy Michael won't stay at bay for long, especially now that he's met Aiden. 

 



Author's Response:

Hey Camille :D

What she said definitely come from a place of anger but she should have known better. What Kalliope is doing is wrong but when you think about it, her life went from only caring about her to being mother of three in a short time. You're right, she has a hard time adjusting to motherhood.

"She doesn't seem to realize how good she has it. "

Well you know what they say, you never know what you got til its gone!

Maybe they do need a day apart from the other to realize that they can fix their issues.

LOOOOOL! You know Daddy Michael is waiting for the right time to insult Aiden and make sure he doesn't come near his Smoochy!

Thank you for the review :D

Reviewer: Crazyme Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 11, 2015 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 7

Oh This is so sad.



Author's Response:

Hopefully, it will get better :)

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2015 08:54 am Title: Flashback 3

SShe should have told Katherine she was going out to break into Michaels rehab and fuck him. Lol. I would pay money to see Kat's reaction.

These two are a MESS. 



Author's Response:

LMAOOOOO! Katherine would have had a heart attack, I think it was better like this loool!!

They are, and it's adorable ^^

Thank you for the review and the rate Camille :D <3

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 22, 2015 09:11 pm Title: Flashback 3

Pfft.

No dissing 'shrinks' unless you are talking about psychiatristslol

 

Michael told me that his would be the one with a fedora hat on the door.

LOL. Of all the things he mastered, subtlety was never one of them

I love your flashbacks; with each story you add a new element. First switching perspectives and now flashbacks. It's fun to see you branch out and try new things.



Author's Response:

Of course, of course.

LMAOOO! Michael is too eager to see his Smoochy, no time to be subtle ;-)

Thank you 💕 I wouldn't want my readers to feel like my stories are redundant :)

The new chapter is online, enjoy ;D

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 22, 2015 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 6

I'm laughing like a fool. Can't believe I missed this when it was posted



Author's Response:

And I hope you enjoyed it :)

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