Date: Feb 10, 2016 03:54 am Title: Stick Around!
Since you have a new laptop can you update this story
Author's Response:
Working on it :) but remember I still have school so when I get the chance I will update as much as I can
Date: Oct 16, 2015 02:11 am Title: Stick Around!
Are you going to update this and possibly put a new friend up again
Author's Response:
Well, I just got my new laptop :D so I'll update those stories :)
Date: Jul 23, 2015 09:38 am Title: A Day With The Magician
What happened to "A new friend?" I was looking forward to reading that
Author's Response:
Don't worry :) I'll update when my laptop gets fixed





Date: Jul 11, 2015 10:19 pm Title: How It All Began
Neat... very awesome, as well as very well-written, too. I like it... :)
Author's Response:
Thanks a bunch! :D





Date: Jul 11, 2015 10:14 pm Title: Stick Around!
Neat so far... I like it... :)
Author's Response:
Thank you :D
Date: Jun 25, 2015 09:29 am Title: Stick Around!
Are you going to update this and possibly start on A new Friend
Author's Response:
I'll update as soon as my laptop gets fixed :)





Date: Jun 18, 2015 01:51 pm Title: A Day With The Magician
Neat… I like it. :) And the idea of Destinee marrying for love reminds me of Princess Jasmine from the 1992 Disney film Aladdin, as they have something in common: a desire to marry for love. However, that is where the similarities end: while Destinee’s mother, the Queen, is still alive, Jasmine’s mother (who was also the wife of the Sultan, Jasmine’s father) had passed away. Plus, I like the fact that Destinee’s mother agrees with her about marrying for love, and I also hope that Destinee’s father will see sense and learn that marrying for love is quite different, as well as much better. Hopefully his wife will talk some sense into him. I agree with Destinee that her father is being unreasonable there — setting her up with so-called ‘suitors’ who are not very nice at all. She has no eyes for them at all — and the only person she does have eyes for is none other than Michael… good for her. :)
Keep it up with your super-neat, very creative and phenomenally beautiful writing! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying the story! <3
Date: May 09, 2015 10:03 am Title: Stick Around!
That reminds me of a roleplay i did with you once
Author's Response:
I think I remember that :)
Date: May 03, 2015 10:08 pm Title: A Day With The Magician
Omg I love it!!! I'm so blown away right now and. I have been waiting 4 an update so glad it finally came! The pic of the beach is soo romantic and breathtakingly gorgeous! Take ur time reading my story no rush hope u enjoy it wen u do read it. I watched the video remember the time and at the end I said is that all? What happened 2 the rest of the short film and then I thought about it and said 2 myself I have 2 come here 2 read the rest of the short film lol I know that's silly but this story is really good in a lot of ways. Keep it up plz!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your kind words <3 I will keep it going! :D
Date: May 03, 2015 02:02 pm Title: A Day With The Magician
Omg! You betta continue girl!
Author's Response:
I will! :)
Date: Apr 28, 2015 03:10 am Title: Stick Around!
Ur very welcome I got nothing but good reviews which I'm glad my work is being enjoyed by a lot of ppl makes me feel good they are taking time out of their day 2 read my work. But I guess not everyone likes my work its good 2 hear from u as always
Author's Response:
Once I have time, I'll read your story :3
Date: Apr 27, 2015 01:22 pm Title: Stick Around!
Also, I want the story set in 92 since that's when he did the video. Also I don't want it to be a one shot. Some drama, romance, etc! ;)
Author's Response:
Ok :)
Date: Apr 23, 2015 12:59 pm Title: Stick Around!
I am so in luv wit this story and that pic I actually watched remember the time the other day and mj blew me away I thought I saw it coming but mj surprized me! The whole thing with the golden dust and the sexiness just got me. Mj was surely ahead of his time with his short films, I luv mj soo much! If I were in the queen's shoes after kissing mj I would have been with him faster than he could dissolve into that golden dust! lol I'm silly right?!
Author's Response:
Lol, it's ok to be silly! XD And I completely agree with you ;)
Date: Apr 19, 2015 06:51 pm Title: Stick Around!
I luv the idea of the pharoah n queen i luv how the story is like i said b4 i luv it mj was ahead of hiz tyme wen he made his short films he's simply amazing even words r not enough...he is wonderful
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like the story and I totally agree with you :)
Date: Apr 19, 2015 10:06 am Title: Stick Around!
He is so sexy! I love remember the time!
Author's Response:
Totally agree! And same here :)