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Reviewer: shellymjbean1989 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 23, 2015 04:45 am Title: Chapter 5

beautiful ending to this chapter looking forward to the next chapter 



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Thanks girl!

Reviewer: shellymjbean1989 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 22, 2015 06:15 pm Title: Chapter 4

beautiful cute chapter cant wait to read more of this story 



Author's Response:

Thank you! Just posted a new chapter!

Reviewer: shellymjbean1989 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 18, 2015 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 3

dang paris just had to interrupt lol loved this chapter keep up the greaat writing



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I know lol and thanks girl!

Reviewer: the creation 12 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 18, 2015 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 3

Michael just got cocked blocked amazing chapter good job



Author's Response:

Lol I know! Thanks!

Reviewer: MJJRoxForever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 18, 2015 03:01 pm Title: Chapter 3

I likey! You're a good writer and Paris is just adorable! :D



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Thanks and yes she is!

Reviewer: MJJRoxForever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 18, 2015 02:59 pm Title: Chapter 2

;) Awesome! 



Author's Response:

Thanks girl!

Reviewer: loyalpyt Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 18, 2015 02:07 pm Title: Chapter 3

love

Author's Response:

Thanks girl!

Reviewer: mjlifemate58 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Apr 18, 2015 12:11 am Title: Chapter 1

Omg just wow blown away wish mj was my neighbor he looks good in this pic so in luv wit mj plz continu! ♥😍😜



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I know, I love that picture too!! ;) So sexy! And thanks!

Reviewer: shellymjbean1989 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 17, 2015 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 2

great hot story except for a few spelling errors but its still awesome im looking forward to reading more of this story if you will update it regularly keep up the great writing 



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Thank you!!! ;)

Reviewer: loyalpyt Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 17, 2015 06:57 pm Title: Chapter 2

hot

Author's Response:

Thanks! Are you gonna post burnin it down soon?

Reviewer: loyalpyt Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 17, 2015 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 1

I love this you need to continue

Author's Response:

Thanks girl! Are you gonna post burnin it down soon?

Reviewer: the creation 12 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 17, 2015 08:56 am Title: Chapter 2

Great jobs :)



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm so glad you read it! I don't know why no one will leave reviews.

Reviewer: KerenOlivero Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Apr 15, 2015 08:58 pm Title: Chapter 1

well this is a decent start considering you're just beginning..I once wrote chapters that small as a beginner so don't worry. keep practicing and you will do better..some spelling mistakes/missing words here and there and don't forget to put quotation marks when someone is speaking and you may wanna italicize the thoughts, too. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the advice; I will be sure to do that! Glad you like it so far.

Reviewer: the creation 12 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 15, 2015 06:28 pm Title: Chapter 1

Great chapter 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks, next chapter will be longer.

Reviewer: MJJRoxForever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 15, 2015 05:51 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very nice :) Keep at it! :D



Author's Response:

Thanks, I know it's a bit short but I'm new to writing. It will longer for the next chapter. Can you tell other people about it please? ;) 

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