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Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2015 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 9 (We Got a Good Thing Going)

Michael and Ali are tooooo cute for me! I wonder why Ali wont tell him that she has a child



Author's Response:

Later on, this will be revealed. In fact there are a lot of mysteries and secrets concerning Anton's conception. The cramatic irony is that Michael loves children to death, but she doesn't know that just yet. Stay tuned, boo!

Reviewer: BluJayWay Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 07, 2015 11:38 am Title: Chapter 9 (We Got a Good Thing Going)

Ali had a pretty amazing day. What I would give to be in her shoes!

Reviewer: femalien Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 07, 2015 03:14 am Title: Chapter 9 (We Got a Good Thing Going)

Why didn't she have the guts to tell him about her son? I know Michael would not judge her for being a single mom.



Author's Response:

Yeah, that's sounds crazy doesn't it? However, the dramatic irony is that we know Michael loves children to death, but she will soon find that out. In fact, later on she and the story will explain her the real reason for this fear. Plus, Anton will even become a pivotal piece in the story eventually.  I just can't wait to see how this all pans out.

Reviewer: femalien Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 07, 2015 03:09 am Title: Chapter 8 (Just Good Friends)

Haha, poor Ali is in dire need of some good lovin'! Poor girl's imagination is working in overtime!



Author's Response:

Yes, and I need almost needed a cold shower when I wrote this. Haha, my sick little mind. 

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 05, 2015 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 8 (Just Good Friends)

hol'up! hol' up! i was damn near falling off the bed.  i dont even know where to start!! no matter what they say Michael and Ali gunna end up kissin or somethin because the sexual tension....no damn knife can go cut through it ! Ali's damn daydreams are hot and crazy! Michael throwin hints and well this was my favorite chapter yet!



Author's Response:

Hahaha, well we all know that Mike can get it! And he ain't no dummy, he know she can get it too!

Reviewer: BluJayWay Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 05, 2015 04:52 am Title: Chapter 8 (Just Good Friends)

Just read 7 and 8. Goodness, Michael sure knows how to spoil 'em, and Ali's fantasies are intense. 



Author's Response:

Well, I'm glad you enjoyed it BluJayWay! I was in all my girly feelings when I wrote this. To tell you the truth, I was hot my damn self lol!

Reviewer: mjsplaything Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 03, 2015 05:40 pm Title: Chapter 1 (Who Is It?)

Hello, ladies! I am pleased to announce that the read count for Remember the Time has passed 1000 reads! I am honored and amazed at how much you guys love the story and how you take the time to review and support it! You guys MY motivation to keep writing! I just wanted to thank you all fans new and continuing! I love you guys and wanted to thank you all from the bottom of my heart! Look out for chapter 8 as well. 

P.S. What do you guys about this story becoming a trilogy series? Please comment!


Sincerely,

mjsplaything

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 02, 2015 02:04 pm Title: Chapter 7 (Things I Do For You)

Awwwww that was so sweet of michael to have their breakfast at that beautiful setting!! Lmaoooooo @ both of them checking each other out. 🎢Diggin you diggin the scene <<the song that came to my mind idk lmaooo they are so cuuuute.

β€œShit, I could bounce a quarter off his---β€œ Alessandra said quietly, but Michael turned around quickly.

β€œWhat you say, Ali?” he asked.

β€œOh, I said I wish I had a quarter of this back home.”

^^πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ I knew he heard her though lmaoo

cant wait until the next chapter!


Reviewer: paris-jane Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 02, 2015 09:17 am Title: Chapter 7 (Things I Do For You)

Loved it!

Reviewer: BluJayWay Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 26, 2015 03:13 pm Title: Chapter 6 (Morning Glow)

Just read the last two chapters. Jose is just gross, but Ali was a ninja with concealing her date with MJ. I like where this is going. 

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 26, 2015 07:53 am Title: Chapter 6 (Morning Glow)

Well let's see how this goes. Hella flirting lmao 

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 26, 2015 07:23 am Title: Chapter 5 (Leave Me Alone)

Soooo Alessandra went with Jose and his jealous ass needs to fall back 

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 26, 2015 06:40 am Title: Chapter 4 (Get on the Floor)

OMG I'm roooooooollin!! The funniest chapter! Especially the dance scene

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 26, 2015 06:05 am Title: Chapter 3 (Come Together)

Lmaoooo you had all the funny men in this!

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 26, 2015 05:42 am Title: Chapter 1 (Who Is It?)

Michael gunna walk up in there and everybody gunna act a fool

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