[Report This]Date: May 18, 2015 04:19 am Title: Chapter 21
.....Nathan??? Nic's brother??? :O Well, that was a bombshell for damn sure!!! :) :) :D
[Report This]Date: May 14, 2015 05:24 am Title: Chapter 20
You got me with that 4of 7. I thought from early out that it meant 4 of 7 personalities. Was it the combo to his iPad all along or did you change the premise of it? *Stares at you with the Monty Burns finger tent* LMAOO im just kidding but you did get me though.
Its interesting how each personality is a part of this extremely dysfunctional family but then there's Nathan.
I wonder who this guy is that Michael loved and what happened. Call me cat cause I'm hella curious!!
more soon! <333
ps take care of that wrist!
Author's Response:
Meow! ;-)
[Report This]Date: May 12, 2015 11:21 am Title: Chapter 20
When Mikey leaned on his shoulder and fell asleep....Awww, it was mad cute!!!! And what's up with his personalities???Moreeeeeee, we want moreeee :) :) :D
[Report This]Date: May 12, 2015 03:58 am Title: Chapter 20
I liked this chapter. Even though there was no action and very little dialogue in the second part, you created a very vivid scene. The affectionate moments between Michael and Nic are such a treasure - MJ leaning on his shoulder to go to sleep and Nic smiling because of that. There's so much trust in there!
When Mike asked Nic if January was his boyfriend...Ahahahaha! Michael, Michael, Michael... :')
Yep, I still think Mike's Mr.Right is/was a Marine. I remember when they talked about war and Michael was extremely concerned for certain someone. And IF he was a Marine, there's even chance that Nic knows/knew that person. *moment of epiphany* Omg, that would be crazy!
The final sentence about Peter killing people....o_O
Thank you for this chapter!
Date: May 11, 2015 06:44 am Title: Prologue
*camps outside your house*
Author's Response:
lol, I promise it's coming!. Part of the reason it's been so slow is that I have a wrist injury and its hard for me to type. Don't worry. It should be out this evening! :-)
Date: May 08, 2015 10:56 am Title: Chapter 19
I just love this story! <3 Please don't stop updating, it's just such a perfect plot.
[Report This]Date: May 05, 2015 11:08 am Title: Chapter 19
Ahhh, yay, we finally get to understand what is the problem with Mike....I wasn't expecting that at all tbh :) :) :D and, omg, about Nick's twin brother...does that stuff happen in real life as well??? :O
Author's Response:
Yes it does. :-( my dad threatened me with it. Never followed through but it is a real thing.
Date: May 05, 2015 10:42 am Title: Chapter 19
Amazing chapter, as always. I'm glad Michael's comming around. It's little progress but its still something. Looking forward to the next chapter :)
Date: May 05, 2015 04:46 am Title: Chapter 19
I was so lost from the last chapter because it was so heady but your explaination was excellent. Now I get it...now nick can work on getting Mike to understand ...excellent chapter.
Author's Response:
Lol thanks for sticking with me! ;-) sometimes it takes a little too long to get the explanation. Lol but the good news is the story take good here.
Date: May 05, 2015 04:27 am Title: Chapter 19
Oh yeah just remembered I was watching an episode of Criminal Minds last week that had a camp just like that one in it. It's what made the Un-Sub into a killer. Trying to make himself attracted to women and when he couldn't get aroused he'd kill the girl. It was intense to say the least.
Author's Response:
love Criminal Minds but I don't think I've seen that episode. What's it called? Hopefully Michael doesn't turn into an unsub lol that would not be a nice crossover fanfic
[Report This]Date: May 05, 2015 04:23 am Title: Chapter 19
Wow...Intense! I'm confused as to what happened for Nick to have almost drank himself to death. Something crazy must have happened the night before but when last we left them they were professing love so what the heck happened!! O.O
What was happening to Michael is a lot to take in. Atleast he admitted he needs help and he'll get it. So curious to see where things go from here.
More soon <333
Author's Response:
unfortunately that's one of the sad things about alcoholism. It doesn't really need a good reason, just a trigger. Nic was just overwhelmed and kind of upset it himself.
[Report This]Date: May 05, 2015 02:06 am Title: Chapter 19
That's a lot to take in all at once, but I'm still with you. It was Eve after all?
“How you would know?” He shot back with a level of venom that surprised me. “You sure as hell weren't sober. Are you actually EVER sober? I doubt it. So don't fucking try to tell me anything about what I do!” OWNED.
Finally the silence weeping produced a sound. “Help.” CRYING.
Get better soon!
Author's Response:
lol yeah, I don't think Michael is very impressed with Nick right now. But he does need his help. Glad you liked it :-) hopefully it makes more sense now lol
[Report This]Date: Apr 29, 2015 11:29 am Title: Chapter 18
Slow murder??!?? Is it really just Eve playing a part here...I wonder who is really pulling all the strings...
Can't wait for your next update!
[Report This]Date: Apr 28, 2015 11:56 am Title: Chapter 18
Gotta wonder if Eve is doing someone's dirty work.
[Report This]Date: Apr 28, 2015 10:08 am Title: Chapter 18
Good Lord!!!! What the hell is going on with Mike???...Oh and Nick is talking about Eve, isn't he??? xP