[Report This]Date: Jun 09, 2015 02:52 am Title: Chapter 24
Nothing to say. Just.... *fans self*
Date: Jun 03, 2015 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 23
I'm so happy that you share this!! i love this story!! Can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: Jun 03, 2015 11:23 am Title: Chapter 23
Wonderful chapter!
I got all giddy at the end hehe Finally a kiss!!! Yay!!
[Report This]Date: Jun 03, 2015 05:54 am Title: Chapter 23
Oh Mike, so adorable :D and where is that kiss leading??? Uh, we are dying to know lol :) :) :D
[Report This]Date: Jun 02, 2015 02:27 pm Title: Chapter 23
OMG, YES! They finally kissed, FINALLY! XD It's so great to see Michael (Nic too!) moreso accepting who he is and what he feels. And the whole scene starting with the horses and leading up to the kiss - just, all of that was adorable. <3
[Report This]Date: Jun 02, 2015 05:20 am Title: Chapter 23
Wow. So something happening to the embryos caused the descent back into the liquor bottle? Makes sense.
Michael is such a sneak. Lol. He probably took all that time concocting his plan. I'm glad Nic busted him. Well now we know where he stands. He finally grew a pair. Maybe this will help him sort out some of the issues with the alters? Hmmm we'll see!!
More soon! <333
Date: Jun 02, 2015 04:32 am Title: Chapter 23
Wow...this is getting very interesting. Mike is helping nick as much as he is helping him...
[Report This]Date: May 26, 2015 09:43 am Title: Chapter 22
Ohh, the ending was just awesome....He feels smth for Mike aw :P Will he take the big decision to become a daddy? ?? Let's see :) :) :D
[Report This]Date: May 25, 2015 10:27 am Title: Prologue
Lol I love the now kiss graphic. I had the hardest time getting them to that point in this story.
These two really did seem like a world apart before and I was thinking that maybe a love story wasn't even intended. But now, they are more on the same level. Michael can be such a smartass, so Nic has found his match, I would say. His energy could also rub off on Nic and make him slow down and smell the roses instead of overthinking everything.
They have pretty much seen the worst of each other and that has united them. ^^
I also gotta wonder how Sam's gonna feel about this. Being a psychologist, he created a situation in which Michael could open up - and Nic, too - but was it kind of a deliberate matchmaking? Or will he feel a tinge of jealousy?
[Report This]Date: May 25, 2015 01:10 am Title: Chapter 22
Mike is so playful and innocent, but can disarm anyone with his sharp observations. But he isn't doing it just to spite Nic, he really sees his suffering and wants to break through to him, doesn't he? :)
On another note, I wonder what lead FBI to the realisation that the bomb threat was real, when they were set on the idea that Michael did it himself?
Author's Response:
Lol I love the now kiss graphic. I had the hardest time getting them to that point in this story.
[Report This]Date: May 19, 2015 08:38 am Title: Chapter 21
I was expecting this revelation...now I wonder how on earth will Nic tell Michael that his lover is in fact dead. That can't be good, he's doing so well with his treatment and then to find out the truth??? :O
Such a cute scene with the crepes...michael did know how to cook breakfast lol Nice detail! And lol at that sneaky Sam!
Looking forward to the next chappy!
Date: May 18, 2015 01:53 pm Title: Chapter 21
Now it makes sense on why Nic had that dream. Love the story please keep going.
[Report This]Date: May 18, 2015 01:28 pm Title: Chapter 21
Ooooooh c'mon.
[Report This]Date: May 18, 2015 05:10 am Title: Chapter 21
So it comes to a head. I realized I had somehow figured this out a while back but it didn't dawn on me till the last chapter. That's why Nathan was not a part of that family structure of personalities. He was the protector because he was a residue of Michael's lover. The one who could save him. It came full fledged now. The reason his lover disappeared was because he died and somehow he doesn't know that he died. WOW it's all making so much sense now. So Michael was happening in those last months of Nates life. I looked back to that time when Nic had that nightmare and Michael called him Doc for the first time. He mentioned Nate then too. You clever duck!!!!
I'm going to venture as far as to say that The Nathan personality was the one who broke into Nic's house and stole that box of info. He's the one seeking help for Michael that's how he knew where Nic lived. He'd been there before. The puzzle pieces are all falling into place now. I know there is a lot more here and lol at Sam trying to set them up.
More soon!! <333
[Report This]Date: May 18, 2015 04:45 am Title: Chapter 21
Well played, Sam, well played.
Nathan O'Brien. Is it Nic's brother? I KNEW it! LOL Michael and Nicholas can raise the embryos together! :P I'm sure it was really hard for Michael to give a name. He had been so vague about his experience, so finally linking the story to a real person was a huge step, imo.
Who broke into Nic's house? I have no clue whatsoever.
More!!!