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Reviewer: eVa Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 30, 2015 05:17 am Title: Prologue

Can we expect an update soon?? :))



Author's Response:

Soon! I just moved and they have not gotten my wifi working yet lol hang in there!

Reviewer: Kelly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jun 29, 2015 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 26

One more thing about ther age, Michael is a little older than Nic, right? I'm asking because some chapters ago Nic was thinking about how old January is he assumed that he has so much knowledge that he has to be older and I wonder if he was right. 

Nic sounds like some kind of sexist, he thinks of those embryos always as boys, and what if they turned out to be girls, he wouldn't love them? It was so cruel to live January, one day he claims to love him, another day doesn't want to see him anymore. Interesting what he thinks of it now that he found out who January really is.

Michael lied so he probably knows something but doesn't want to tell. I'm waiting for more and, um, wish them more "practice" ;-)



Author's Response:

Yes. Michael is about 4-5 years older than Mic. January isn't the same age as Michael. Lol 

Reviewer: MI-Is-My-Morphine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 24, 2015 08:18 am Title: Chapter 26

Had to come back for a second...Maybe, just maybe, it was Eve who sent the poisoned sweets? And Michael is protecting/covering for her? o.O

Author's Response:

;-)

Reviewer: YuliAlexaMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 23, 2015 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 26

I'm speechless lady. I've been reading this without stop and I assure you this is a master piece. I'd say it's the most fantastic way to be inside Michael's mind. You got an admirer from the other side of the globe. God bless you.

Reviewer: xxHollywoodTonight798xx Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 23, 2015 02:45 pm Title: Chapter 26

And just when I thought Mikey was getting better....This happens....Oh Mike, what's going on??? :) :) :D

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 23, 2015 04:27 am Title: Chapter 26

Wow finally caught up and we see the plot thickens. The past has almost caught up with the present. 

Could one of the alters have ordered the hit? Did Michael somehow get access to a phone to call an accomplice? Wow and hmmm all in the same go. I'm always in suspended animation when I read this story! So good!

More soon!<333

Reviewer: MI-Is-My-Morphine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 23, 2015 12:12 am Title: Chapter 26

It was close to impossible for Michael to order those candies from outside. He wasn't even allowed a phone! Yet, he LIED about one of his alters probably having done it?! Wow...what.

He kind of had a moment of panic again, but this time, unlike in others, he didn't want to hide from Nic, but reached for him. < 3 He's let him in! But not totally...Because clearly, there's something he's not telling.

Author's Response:

This was the chapter where I started to be annoyed with michael. Lol I was like "really dude, you're lying to him??" But then I remembered that I wrote it... o.o

Reviewer: hopeful fish Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 22, 2015 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 25

OMG!! Who's trying to kill him?!?!?!? Update soon!



Author's Response:

Update coming tonight!! :-D

Reviewer: xxHollywoodTonight798xx Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 16, 2015 10:50 am Title: Chapter 25

Nooooo!!! Cliffhanger? ?? Lol :P who tried to poison Mickeyboo? ?? I Have to know lol :) :) :D

Reviewer: sydneylovesmike20 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 16, 2015 06:46 am Title: Chapter 25

Woah this getting intense! I'm kinda confused on how someone tried to poison Michael yesterday when he was with nic all day.

Reviewer: MI-Is-My-Morphine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 16, 2015 01:29 am Title: Chapter 25

I kind of wonder what happened to January after Nic Left? How did he take it?

Also, the statement that Michael had never slept with another guy before is slightly dubious, considering how natural and discomfort-free his and Nic's first time together was. MJ knew how to ride that---- ahahaaa, ok, I'll stop here. :D *blushing intensifies*

Eeem...POISON? Wha? Given Michael himself is fine, he probably did it. Either he wanted other people out of the way, so he could 'be' with Nic (ok, poison is a kind of overkill, sleeping pills would've done the job....) or he wanted to...umm, escape? Most likely, it was PETER! Child of the devil. xD Mike's not taking his meds, so....

 



Author's Response:

Lol believe it or not I asked a couple of gay guys if this was feasible as far as Nic being his first. They said it depends on the person and what they like. It is not 100% important other than that it explains part of January. 

Reviewer: Kelly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jun 15, 2015 02:16 pm Title: Chapter 24

I would love to see them waking up together!

Two questions: is Nic the first man Michael slept with? And how  old are both Michael and Nic in this story?



Author's Response:

They are both in their 40s in this story. :-) for the rest... wait and see! ;-)

Reviewer: hopeful fish Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 15, 2015 11:39 am Title: Chapter 24

OK--So I just finished this story, and I have to beg you--PLEASE update soon! It's so good!!

Reviewer: eVa Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 09, 2015 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 24

I don't believe it! They finally did the deed! After so much teasing (and 6 months of reading :p lol).  Yyyeeesssss!!!!! 

Where will their relationship go from here I wonder???  And about the embryos...so sad for Nic :((  

keep up the good work! <3<3

Reviewer: xxHollywoodTonight798xx Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 09, 2015 06:12 am Title: Chapter 24

Hmm I wonder who was that woman that owns the embryos...will she be revailed to us??? As for the sex scene...well...no words, lol Amazing as always :) :) :D

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