Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 11, 2015 07:46 am Title: Chapter 31

Yay. So exited you updated!!!!

OMG the walls are about to come tumbling down. Eve is insane and the fact it's mentioned she has military training is very interesting. Especially with hypnosis involved. It gives me pause now because I'm starting to side eye Tony for some reason. I want to believe he's a stand up guy. BUT money can make a sane man go mad. By any means necessary to get Michael functioning and back on that stage. 

So Cherries is a trigger to bring forth the alternates or one in particular?  Is she really pregnant or is her message just a triggering code?  So many questions. 

Nic is good for Michael. Michael is good for Nic. They have each other as reasons to hang on. Where are Michael's children?  How has he gone so long without even a visit?  

More soon please. <333

Reviewer: MI-Is-My-Morphine Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 11, 2015 03:00 am Title: Chapter 31

Eve sounds downright possessed. :o

Anyone else catch Nic calling Michael "baby"? He doesn't say it often, but when he does, you know he means it.

Also, I don't know if I've ever said this before, but Sam rocks. He's a great person to have in your corner: he's smart and mild-mannered, but can call you out on your bs. Nic is very much emotionally invested by now, so he needs somebody like that.

Before I forget, there's a competition running on this site for the month of August and I've nominated you for Best Author and Most Creative Author. Good luck!

Author's Response:

AWWWWW!  <3   Thank u!!  *hugs*  You're amazing!  I can't tell you how much reading your reviews means.  It blesses me that you take time to read and leave feedback.  <3

Reviewer: MI-Is-My-Morphine Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 08, 2015 08:14 am Title: Prologue

I need my fix! :D I know, I saw the update before it was deleted, but this is tortureeee.

Author's Response:

Lol I'm working on it. I promise you guys I haven't given up. <3 

Reviewer: Voice Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 03, 2015 09:42 pm Title: Chapter 30

First of all, I've been catching u on this story for the lst few nights after work and I have to say, theres a llot of emotion captured here.  There is his raw sort of emotion that would be painful to even witness, but beautiful at the same time.  Also you know, this is more kindred than most would imagine (I too am half a person, they just arent deceased lol) But I wanted to point this particular piece out::

 

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Michael nodded, still holding the photo close. “I... I didn't have any photos of him, you know?” He murmured. “We didn't keep photos of each other. Just to be safe...”

 “Keep that one.” I told him, thinking it was the very least that I could do. “Keep it and remember him. I have others.”

 Michael didn't seem to hear me. “Where is he?” He asked. “Where is he buried?”

 “Arlington.” I replied. “He and... Ken, the other man in the photo. They both are in Arlington National Cemetery.”::

 

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Imagine the closure form this... of no knoing and being in limbo just not able o find that person yet knowing you can somehow "feel" them.  it's a lot to try and dgest, but also so freeing all at once!  i'll be awaiting your update im jst glad im caught up! :)

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<3

Reviewer: xxHollywoodTonight798xx Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2015 06:50 am Title: Chapter 30

That was such a sad chapter...that last sentence...can't wait for the next update already :) :) :D

Reviewer: MI-Is-My-Morphine Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2015 04:54 am Title: Chapter 30

The feels!

I'm relieved Michael took the news the way he did. Shows that he's getting better. However, the last sentence tells me something isn't quite right. Was that the calm before the storm? I need to know what happens!

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2015 04:32 am Title: Chapter 30

Finally the cat is out of the bag. I'm just glad it didn't really trigger Michael too much. Then again like Nic said another personality might have absorbed the grief. We'll see how things pan out with this hypnosis. I sense dark days ahead. 

More soon <333

Reviewer: eVa Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 28, 2015 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 29

Update soon?? :))

 

Author's Response:

Editing it right now lol