[Report This]Date: Feb 02, 2015 02:54 am Title: Chapter 18: Dreams, Departures & Delights
Yessssss, as I hoped the moment Michael heard little MJ say daddy all his anger would disappear. Prince is so sweet, I love you daddy and OMG when he showed Michael he could dance like him and did his version of Billie Jean that's too cute. Then when Michael said to Prince it was "bad" to do his signature crotch grab, Prince bust out "cause i'm bad' lol π
I hope Michael finally talks to Diana. I can only expect Diana tells him about Prince medical situation. Yes, she withheld the knowledge about their child but, they need to calm down. Michael needs to stop treating her like she is invisible and Jas was spot on Mari still sore about Michael falling for Ana. It makes wonder about Mari sometimes, she is quite harsh and mean. ππ
The three little girls and Prince want to be friends?; already being a flirt just like his father.ππππ I hope Jas & David soon will become parents they are very good people they DESERVE a baby it was sad that Jas went through miscarriage π’. Big Guy in the sky please make it happen. ππ
Please update soon....Is all for L.O.V.E....Lummi πππ
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing Lummi. As always, I LOVE LOVE LOVE hearing from you!
I'm glad you enjoyed the storyline. I took your advice and added your dialogues to Jasmine and Marie's argument. Thank you for suggesting it!
There's always a calm after the storm - stay tuned to find out more about Michael and Diana's relationship! :D
Date: Feb 02, 2015 12:11 am Title: Chapter 18: Dreams, Departures & Delights
I'm crying that was so cute and special πππππ π’π!!!!!
Prince was just magical just like his daddyππππ
NOW ...... Diana needs to tell mj bout prince health issues becuz he needs to know
Marieeeeee chile is doing the most !!!!!! She needs to calm down a lil cuz she didn't need to leave but I see where she coming from
Michael he's okay he can't stay mad that long anyway
Prince awwwwwww I'm really cheeseeeeeyyyyy
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. You are the first person to review this chapter. I am SO glad you enjoyed it.
You're not cheesy - I love your comments.
I hope you stay with me as the story unfolds. :)
Date: Feb 01, 2015 06:35 am Title: Chapter 17: Innocent Voice of Reason
I completely understand how Michael and Marie feel, Iit'll take some time to forgive Diana and Jasmine
Aww can't wait to see father and son bonding
Author's Response:
Yes, it definitely will.
I hope you enjoy those moments when they arrive.
Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)
[Report This]Date: Feb 01, 2015 04:20 am Title: Chapter 17: Innocent Voice of Reason
Well...I understand Michael. He has been hurt so many times and basically Diana really betrayed his trust. She should have told him no matter what. But I dont like Marie acting like this. This basically is not her bussiness and sometimes while reading this I got a feeling that she is gonna kiss him or something. She is overacting, she has nothing to do with MJ and Diana's son. Michael and Diana must solve this by themselves not with some crazy MJ fan. But anyway this is very good.
Author's Response:
I agree, she should have told him but because of the circumstances, she couldn't. Like Jasmine said they were all planning on telling him eventually but never thought he would cross paths with Diana the way he did. Things just went crazy from there and so, it came out six years later. Marie is VERY hurt by the truth and feels she didn't deserve to be left in the dark. It may not be her business but being a close friend and almost sister to Diana made her feel betrayed as well. She would never kiss Michael, that would be too awkward and they both know that. They will figure out a way to work things out, that is, if they still choose to. Thank you SO much for reading and reviewing! :)
[Report This]Date: Jan 31, 2015 04:11 pm Title: Chapter 17: Innocent Voice of Reason
The hurt and kept secrets has put Michael is such an unbelievable place. Michael and Diana's relationship may never be mended.
Maria's out burst to Diana about early feels for Michael I think was from hurt.
I hope Michael and Diana can get past this.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing. I hope you enjoy the story as it unfolds. :)
Date: Jan 31, 2015 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 17: Innocent Voice of Reason
Good glory..if it's not one thing it's something else..
that said I am eager to see what happens next..you have me glued to my computer screen with your updates. hope all of them can find peace again..
Author's Response:
Don't worry, there is always a calm after every storm. ;)
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: Jan 31, 2015 02:38 pm Title: Chapter 17: Innocent Voice of Reason
OMG, welcome back. You wreak your brain for this chapter and it so good, but, Missy you better have the next one ready to go. Please update ASAP..... Daddy? That was so mean for you to end the chapter like that. Yes Diana lied about their son but, Mari just like before goes to such an extreme she is SOOO mean and cold hearted.
{Use if you liked to, Ana walks through the kitchen again; Mary says: well there goes mother of the year. I hope little man have his father brains cause if he doesn't he will just as dumb as his mama. Rage takes over Ana she walks over to Mari and slaps her hard. ENOUGH!!!, you don't want to be my friend anymore fine, I will not begged anymore for your forgiveness and leave you alone. You still deep down jealous or angry that it was me Michael fell in love with; fine then is that how you still feel I can't change that but, I will not tolerate you talking about my son. He is a innocent child, you have a problem with me you come to me and leave my baby boy out of this or just like you called me I will show you what a b*tch I can be and she walks out.}
Come back soon I can't wait for Michael's chat with his son. Which by the way what did she named him??// Is all for L.O.V.E.. Lummi πππ
Author's Response:
HAHA oh Lummi you are too cute!
That's a great idea but I have something else in mind.
I might use that idea down the road for another story.
Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)
Date: Jan 31, 2015 02:23 pm Title: Chapter 17: Innocent Voice of Reason
Okayyyy I got 3 things to say or more idk just roll with the flow
1) Ik that mj and marie r mad but dang they r harsh I mean idk if I could be mad that long I can't hold grudges
2) Diana Diana Diana smh girl u shouldn't have done that sad sad sad but they need to listen to her bout the boy condition
3) AWWWWWWWππππ he is so cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee and on the real note em kids look like michael like u got to get photos and put em side by side and u c the resemblance doe
4) Awwwwwwww he is cuteeeeeee!!!!! I can picture him saying dat!!!!!! Girl y do u keep getting me all in my emotions!!!!
Author's Response:
HAHAHA! You're so cute. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)
[Report This]Date: Jan 26, 2015 07:10 am Title: Chapter 16: The Untold Story
Goooooooood!!! He sang once: but the kid is not my son and now he has one.
Update soon please!!
Author's Response:
HAHA, I know right!
Thanks for reading. Will have it updated by this weekend sometime.
[Report This]Date: Jan 25, 2015 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 16: The Untold Story
Oh boy. Truth can really hurt when it comes out. I feel for Marie but more for Michael.
To learn you have a child you never knew about is so devastating. I can't even understand what Michael Will do when the reality sinks in that he has a son.
What will Michael say to Diana?
Great chapter.
Author's Response:
You're absolutely right - the truth about a child you never knew about can definitely be a painful experience. Stay tuned to find out more. Thank you for reading! :)
Date: Jan 25, 2015 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 16: The Untold Story
well well..it's about time Michael found out, though sad it had to be this way.. in a way I wasn't really surprised at his reaction
Author's Response:
That's because it hasn't fully happened yet. Stay tuned to find out more! Thanks for reading! :D
[Report This]Date: Jan 25, 2015 03:11 pm Title: Chapter 16: The Untold Story
it all makes a lot of sense i hope michael and diana can get over the hurdle of this secret coming out and become a real family with their son and daughter im looking forward to the next great chapter keep up the great writing of this story
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I love your support. :)
[Report This]Date: Jan 25, 2015 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 16: The Untold Story
Yassssss, the Truth Shall Set You Free!!!! So in reality it was 16 chapters in before the WHOLE truth was reveal. I called it too. I had said she was possibly pregnant with Twins and lost one and didn't know she was still pregnant.
I know Michael & Marie are p*ssed at Ana but, the moment that little boy goes inside the house and sees Michael and yells daddy is game over. Michael will kneel down and grab his son's on his arms and swallow him in the biggest bear hug ever. He will say My son, my buddy, my little prince. πππππΌ
Kai better not betray Michae there is nothing that π{joseph} can offer Kai that Michael won't give her + Michael is trusting her with the most precious thing in his life , Joe is very evil and plain and simple a F*cking *sshole I wish I could come through this story and gave him the *SS whooping HE Deserves. π¬π¬π¬π¬π¬π¬
Please update ASAP.....Is all for L.O.V.E....Lummi ππππ
Author's Response:
Yes, my dear Lummi you guessed everything correctly but I didn't want to reveal it until NOW. I'm so glad you enjoyed seeing the whole story unfold. Do you really think Michael will behave that way? HMMMM....I don't know....
Kai is a smart woman but is very confued about what to do. We'll just have to wait and see what happens next.
Thank you for reading. I love love love hearing from you! :D
Date: Jan 25, 2015 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 16: The Untold Story
Heartbreaking really it is , but she couldve told him once they got together again
Can't wait to father and son finally meet each other
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I'm glad you still like where this is going.
Date: Jan 25, 2015 02:18 pm Title: Chapter 16: The Untold Story
Oooooooohhhhhh lawd Jesus so much drama so much suspense girllllll again y do u keep getting this story all up in my emotionsππ !!!! JOSEPH GOT ON MY LAST NERVES!!! Y is he always in sumthing goodness gracious " wanna be startin somethin" lmll ππ and they getting ready to see the baby boy Awww I can't wait !!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing. Stay tuned for more! :)