Date: Jan 25, 2015 04:40 am Title: Not his day
I loved it!!! and the suspense is killing me!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you next chapter should be up soon
Date: Jan 25, 2015 04:16 am Title: Not his day
I hope they find Michael
Author's Response:
let's see
Date: Jan 24, 2015 07:41 pm Title: Not his day
I don't know how Chris can outsmart them again... What is he going to do to them!?!
Author's Response:
you'll see soon working on the next chapter soon
Date: Jan 24, 2015 07:38 pm Title: Ooops
Uh oh!! This could mean terrible things for Juliet.
Date: Jan 19, 2015 03:32 am Title: Ooops
Thank goodness Chris doesn't found out about Michael and Juliet
Can't wait for more
Author's Response:
be up in a few hours
Date: Jan 15, 2015 04:27 am Title: Strawberry Bounce
They better clean up fast before Chris gets home
I see trouble
Author's Response:
Let's see shall we
Date: Jan 13, 2015 04:00 am Title: I just want you to know I love you
Loved it lol
Hopefully Chris won't get home anytime soon
Author's Response:
glad you did and I know right
[Report This]Date: Jan 12, 2015 09:07 pm Title: I just want you to know I love you
LMAO at Michael getting all that penis into those too tight boxers >.<
This chapter was very good! I think it was the best written chapter so far! I get nervous about writing sex scenes too and I thought it was good.
Author's Response:
hahaha Just had to add that in
me too I am proud of this chapter, thank god I am not the only one
[Report This]Date: Jan 10, 2015 09:15 am Title: Dead or Alive?
Juliet better get Michael out of there soon!!!! Thank God Paris is safe, though!
I saw your profile! You are so beautiful!
Author's Response:
I know he to be resuced quick I know thank god
Awww Thank you I seen your too You beautiful too
Date: Jan 09, 2015 02:33 am Title: Dead or Alive?
Can't she kill Chris?
Poor Michael just want safe him and bring him back home
Author's Response:
That question is goona be brought up in the next chapter
I know me too
Date: Jan 04, 2015 03:50 am Title: 1 saved!
Michael is fighter he's strong he'll live? Right?
Glad Paris ok
Author's Response:
Well will see later
me too
Date: Jan 03, 2015 10:34 pm Title: 1 saved!
awh I will and im glad Paris came home! and PLEASE DONT LET MICHAEL DIE PLEASE I BEG OF YOU
Author's Response:
thank you, me too, we will seee
[Report This]Date: Jan 03, 2015 08:15 pm Title: 1 saved!
Nooo!!!!! Michael can't be dead! omg I can't believe Chris hit him with his van! I hope Chris gets what's coming to him!
Author's Response:
I know right me too let hopes he not dead
Date: Dec 29, 2014 05:55 am Title: Anything for Freedom
That Dean is creepy
So hope Chris won't find Michael
Please continue soon
Date: Dec 25, 2014 03:39 am Title: You like everyone else
I thought she was really different and tried to help him
I hope Paris is all right poor thing