




Date: Aug 03, 2016 10:11 am Title: Chapter 44- Onna fuckin' Monday
That was a shocker that Michael didn't get upset about Semaj's and Tucker's kiss. I really enjoyed this chapter.





Date: Aug 02, 2016 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 43- Fallen of the Dysfunctional Family
This chapter was really good. I didn't expect the things that happened in it!





Date: Aug 02, 2016 11:48 am Title: Chapter 41- Dinner for Four with the Devil
Great chapter! I can't wait to see how everything works out between Michael and Semaj's parents.





Date: Aug 01, 2016 06:35 am Title: Chapter 40- The Invitation From Hell
So eager to see how the dinner date goes!





Date: Jul 31, 2016 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 39- Feel that Heat.... II
I enjoyed this chapter very much, but Michael working for James is strange. I'm eager to see what all happens.





Date: Jul 31, 2016 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 38- Feel that Heat....
Another great chapter!





Date: Jul 31, 2016 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 37- Plottin' On You
This chapter has me wondering about so many things! I'm so eager to do find out what happens next!





Date: Jul 31, 2016 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 36- Just My Luck / The Mentally Impaired Girlfriend
Never a bad chapter! I loved it.





Date: Jul 31, 2016 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 35- Snaggletooth Baby
Loved this chapter! Good job.





Date: Jul 31, 2016 11:16 am Title: Chapter 34- Sugar & Spice
This chapter was funny. Good work! Haha





Date: Jul 31, 2016 10:36 am Title: Chapter 33- Open Promises
Good chapter! I hope Semaj can get Michael to change!





Date: Jul 31, 2016 06:19 am Title: Chapter 32- Birthday Kick-Off
Great chapter! Loved Teeny and Duck!





Date: Jul 31, 2016 05:49 am Title: Chapter 31- Mission: Don't Go To Cali
Very good chapter, I like how Semaj's grandma helps her see Michael.





Date: Jul 30, 2016 05:47 pm Title: Chapter 30- The Determination of Semaj Calhoun
I very much enjoyed this chapter, it was great.





Date: Jul 30, 2016 08:21 am Title: Chapter 28- For The Love of God Pt. I
Michael got shot! Oh my gosh. I'm so anxious as to what's going to happen in the next chapter!