[Report This]Date: Feb 20, 2015 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 36- Just My Luck / The Mentally Impaired Girlfriend
LOL that last line though... Michael is too funny in this story! I really hope he does good and goes to college.
If that watch really is a tracker... Semaj's dad just took overprotective parent to a whole new level. lol
Date: Feb 18, 2015 05:25 am Title: Chapter 37- Plottin' On You
Just read both new chapters. If Willow and Marco are involved, it can't be good...
Author's Response:
Girl I really appreciate this! You have that other story with Beyonce but I think you name her Destiny? If that's yours then I have to catch up on it. Sorry I'm lacking.
Anyway, thanks for support.
And Willow and Marco? We'll just have to see where this all takes us.
[Report This]Date: Feb 17, 2015 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 37- Plottin' On You
Hmmm thoughts on James hiring Michael back... We see he's racking up a roster of enemies of Michael so I'm assuming he's going to set him up to take a big fall.
I do hope Aaron rats out Marco to Michael. It will make up for him getting him shot in the first place. It would be such retribution if Michael went into the situation with James armed with info.
Im glad Michael is thinking smart. He doesn't have to be a criminal mastermind to be smart on the streets. It's his life and knowing who or what to trust is a big deal. I hope he keeps that mind set and not start to think that they're just being paranoid. It would be a fatal move.
Tasha needed to follow her gut.
Tucker? He's a fly. Annoying af and transfers shit from place to place.
Looking forward to the Michael and Semaj time. Are they taking their trip to DC?
More soon!! <333
Author's Response:
We'll have to see about Jame's lil plan.
Aaron might just come up... we'll have to say. Girl when are you gonna update Inked??!
That's true, very true. He needs to be cautious of what he's letting slide and what he's getting into.
Tasha.. she's going to think up something.
Tucker? Straight annoyance.
Yesss Michael and Semaj. And yes, right now the stories placing is beginning of February so usually my school (in real life) take our spring break in March and that's what I'm aiming that trip for. In march.
Thanks for the support girl!
[Report This]Date: Feb 17, 2015 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 37- Plottin' On You
I really don't trust James, he's making me scared. I think that Aaron may be turning for the best by helping Michael but he also makes me nervous because you never know what he could do. And girl don't even get me started on Tucker he's just too much always play around too much, its like he's Bipolar or something with the way his emotions change so quickly.
Author's Response:
James is to not be trusted! Lol.
Aaron... hmm.. we'll see.
Tucker is annoying, lol, but I know so many people like that. Girls and guys.
[Report This]Date: Feb 17, 2015 10:44 am Title: Chapter 37- Plottin' On You
PLZZZZZZZZ CONTINUE๐๐๐๐๐๐
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: Feb 17, 2015 07:37 am Title: Chapter 37- Plottin' On You
"He is somewhat trained for this job anyway and I heard that he is trying to get into college... with some recommendations from me he is sure to get in to pretty much anywhere," James assures Tasha
-damn. The ego in that statement.
Your questions:
~ Thoughts on James hiring Michael back... what exactly is this little diabolical plan he has going on?
I think he wants Michael locked up and away from Semaj.
~ Is Aaron serious about helping Michael or do you feel he'll eventually give in to this little 'plan'?
I hope he is. There are enough nemeses already.
~ Any thoughts on Tucker? Lmaoo
IDK. To be honest (and I saw this with the utmost respect for your writing), to me he's just the 5th-6th in a line of people trying to destroy Semaj and Michael. I mean, we have James, Officer Willow, Michael's ex, at least 2 people on the streets, Tucker....who else? That's a lot of drama. A lot.
Author's Response:
His ego is of course off the charts.
Very good theory on James. We'll have to see where it takes us.
About Aaron.... i won't say a word. *zips lips*
I assure you, as I told Camille... Tucker is no more than a pest in this story. A little flirtatious jock who has a crush on Semaj. He isn't out to ruin their relationship. He's not going to try that hard. He isn't any trouble, I promise. Haha.
And you have (the enemies): Willow, Marco, and James.
I wouldn't necessarily put Lonnie in that category as drama because as you sees in and out. I would add her with Tucker she's no more than a pest. An upset ex-girlfriend who can't have her way. Really nothing to worry on I assure you.
Of course you know I am not one to take any constructive criticism the wrong way, so thank you . I won't overwhelm my readers with drama that will take 80 chapters to clear it.
Author's Response:
His ego is of course off the charts.
Very good theory on James. We'll have to see where it takes us.
About Aaron.... i won't say a word. *zips lips*
I assure you, as I told Camille... Tucker is no more than a pest in this story. A little flirtatious jock who has a crush on Semaj. He isn't out to ruin their relationship. He's not going to try that hard. He isn't any trouble, I promise. Haha.
And you have (the enemies): Willow, Marco, and James.
I wouldn't necessarily put Lonnie in that category as drama because as you sees in and out. I would add her with Tucker she's no more than a pest. An upset ex-girlfriend who can't have her way. Really nothing to worry on I assure you.
Of course you know I am not one to take any constructive criticism the wrong way, so thank you . I won't overwhelm my readers with drama that will take 80 chapters to clear it.
[Report This]Date: Feb 17, 2015 07:13 am Title: Chapter 37- Plottin' On You
I knew it! I knew James was up to no good. What a hypocrite he doesn't want Mike with his daughter meanwhile he's the biggest thug of all!
Tasha had better investigate a bit more before allowing Michael to work there. And Michael is best listening to those instincts. He should decline that job.
Can't wait for Mike to get out of the hospital.
And lmao at "Bertha" seriously Tucker? Worst. Name. Ever.
Author's Response:
I know a lot of you all had your assumptions on him, Lol, and you guys are right but we'll have to see how far he'll go.
You know Tasha is going to, she's very cautious with the boys she works with.
This was the last chapter with him in it. Yay!
Tucker is a headache but no more than a pest.
Date: Feb 16, 2015 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 37- Plottin' On You
Hmmmm..I don't know how to feel about Aaron at the moment but I know Semaj's father is in on willow's Nasty ass plan! I wish Tasha did eavesdrop. Shit is gettin real. Ugh I'm glad michael and semaj thinkin into that..like cmon now just weeks ago her father wanted him gone for good now he cheesin. As soon as James was tellin Tasha about michael lookin into colleges..that's when I knew a rat told him. The rat willow and Marco Polo
Author's Response:
Lmao, Marco Polo . We'll just have to see what happens now won't we?
[Report This]Date: Feb 07, 2015 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 36- Just My Luck / The Mentally Impaired Girlfriend
Aww poor Semaj she has to go through all that with Tucker and Michael should really gain some confidence on getting into college. Wonderful story can't wait for the update!
Author's Response:
Thanks girl I appreciate it! Yup its a shame no matter how hard she tries she can't escape Tucker.
Well Michael has been out of college for the pass three years of his life, he just feels it isn't for him. Ya'know? But we'll definitely see what happens.
[Report This]Date: Feb 07, 2015 02:46 am Title: Chapter 36- Just My Luck / The Mentally Impaired Girlfriend
Loved it! I really do hope they make love soon!
Author's Response:
Thanks! The time is definitely coming, Lol!
[Report This]Date: Feb 07, 2015 12:09 am Title: Chapter 36- Just My Luck / The Mentally Impaired Girlfriend
Michael needs to wise up. If he's suspicious of Marco what on gods green earth would make him think he wouldn't snitch on him. And thinking Maji is deluded cause she thinks there is a tracker in her watch he's not as smart of a criminal as he should be. He should have been the one theorizing about the tracker. He's been around James for crying out loud. It's in no way far fetched.
Tucker comes off more than a little Rapey to me. I would not put it past him given his influences. Maji better tell Michael. She wants to be privy to all his doings he's got to be privy to hers. Especially with Tucker being involved. His brother was the reason Michael's laying up in that damn bed!!
When is he getting out of the hospital? His medical bills must be through the roof!!! Lmao.
My bb is 13 :)
Author's Response:
- Michael just doesn't think James would stoop that low.
Lol plus its not true! James is crazy but he ain't thaaat crazy. You guys over thought the Rolex thing a bit. Mikes a criminal who sells drugs , export and imports them. He isn't a mastermind or the smartest that can get every detail. But i assure you the rolex has no tracker, lmfao.
- Michael doesn't think Marco will snitch because Marco knows what Michael is capable of.
Hmmmm... the next chapter is the last chapter of him in the hospital. Girl don't you know it! They are HIGH.
- And awwww. Sweeeet. We're not that far apart.
[Report This]Date: Feb 06, 2015 10:46 pm Title: Chapter 36- Just My Luck / The Mentally Impaired Girlfriend
2 chapters in one week = awesomeness.
I don't trust the Rolex. I mean, she's in high school and goes to a pretty ghetto school. Not smart.
Michael needs to shape up fast. UCLA will not be realistic if these are the life choices he makes. UCLA was a surprise to me...When does he get out of the hospital. He's going to need a job....just how badly does Mr. James want to reconnect with his daughter? Michael was already semi-trained......
Author's Response:
- that is true. My school isnt ghetto... or that ghetto but i wouldn't trust wearin a rolex.
- so do you think he will shape up? Redone I swear you read my mind, we're just gonna have to seeee... im going to update again soon. Sunday night or Monday .
Date: Feb 06, 2015 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 36- Just My Luck / The Mentally Impaired Girlfriend
Idk semaj could be on to something๐ฉ๐ฉ it probably is a tracker in the watch! Ugh the lil baby program!! And her partner is tucker..? YUCK
we didn't have to have a partner for that assignment either. I didn't even get my damn baby *folds arms*
anywayyyy I wonder how michael's reaction gunna be when he see Semaj strollin in the hospital with a baby and a car seat ๐ฉ lmaoo
Author's Response:
Lmao no tracker girl!
- lol my school gives eggs but the schools that are predominantly white get real babies.
- Lmfso we're gonna see!
[Report This]Date: Feb 05, 2015 02:09 am Title: Chapter 35- Snaggletooth Baby
Great as always!
Author's Response:
Thanks Helen!
[Report This]Date: Feb 04, 2015 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 35- Snaggletooth Baby
Let me bypass Lonnie's desperate no ears having ass for a quick minute...
They are so damn CUTE!!! I was holding my chest the whole time when she gave him the jacket!!! Both their reactions to each other was adorable. The sparkle in his eyes. Awwwwwwwee!!
I noticed Maji was trying to omit the fact Michael did go down on her. Lol. Tryna be slick and what not.
Her snaggletooth story was so funny. Poor girl. I was the SAME!!! Underdeveloped till I had my son now I have boobs to share with everyone on this site. LMAOO.
Ok now to Lonnie. I guess it's going to take a bulldozer, several quarter horses and a grip of hearing aides for her to keep away from Michael and listen to what he's actually trying to tell her. "He don't want u no mo!!!" She needs an answering machine cause she keep missing the calls!!
I bet she teams up with Willow and or James. They all in cahoots.
More soon!! <333
Author's Response:
Aww thanks Tut! I appreciate it!
She did try to forget about it though. Tryna be all hidden and secretive but they know! She couldn't hide it, plus she knew she liked it. I can't wait until Michael is out the damn hospital actually, lmfaoo.
Aww tut you have a son?? If you don't mind me asking, how old is he?
Lonnie is just a pain in the buttocks. She just doesn't get the point. She's going to need a large wake up call to get her up off of Michael. You think she's going to team up? Hmmm.... well we'll seeeee.
Thanks for the support girly!