




Date: Mar 12, 2015 06:11 am Title: Chapter 41- Dinner for Four with the Devil
Wow this was a nice meaty chapter!!!
Michael I'm so proud of you!!! Not only did he hold is own against James without having to cross a line, but he made himself open and vulnerable with Maji.
I can only imagine James ramping up his plan to take Michael down now that he got shown up at the dinner. He is such a hipocrite. How can one person be so dence especially one that is supposedly highly educated. Hate! That's what. He's blinded by it and the loss of control he had over Maji. Sigh.
I think Michael did win Janelle over. She's more open to seeing that Michael is not doing any harm to Semaj. James on the other hand will harm Semaj in order to so called keep her safe. So illogical.
I'm hoping now that they opened up a little more their relationship will deepen. Michael has made so much positive strides. I would love to see them go away to college together. They need out of that environment asap. And if her parents try to do the same bullshit with Mone. If I were Semaj I would just snatch her up and some how take her with me. (Too many complications but I would try something lol). Oh and what I would like to see for Michael and Semaj is some...lovin. Lmaoooooooo. Let him see her up out them clothes!!!
Oh and how could I forget. Kudos goes out to Aaron!! Much props for stepping up and telling Michael what's going on. Sometimes your worst enemy can be your best friend and your best friend your worst enemy.
More soon! <333
Author's Response:
As you know I try to write some pretty large chapters.
Yes, Michael did very good at the dinner. I'm proud of him myself lol!
James... like I said we'll see about him pretty soon! *smiles*
Hopefully Janelle releases the brick wall that was put between her and Semaj and won't try and do the same with Simone. Hopefully they'll both decide to step up to the plate and own up to their own responsibilites and not try and hand off more responsibilites to the ones they already have. It's just not fair and it's selfish.
Of course! You guys want the lovin', hahaha I got it!
And yes *claps* for Aaron, good thing he did step up. Let's just see where it takes us. And girl isn't that the truth! Enemies at times can be better than your own best friend which is a shame.





Date: Mar 11, 2015 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 41- Dinner for Four with the Devil
So proud of Michael in this chapter for acting like a gentleman. He shouldn't have been late though, but he redeemed himself in the end.
James is not going to let this go. Not with his ego. He will make Michaels life a living hell at work. I hope as he gets to know him that James sees his potential though, and decides to stop his crazy ass plan. Guess it depends if he has any humanity at all.
I think Janelle is OK with them dating now. She seems more reasonable than James.
As for Mike and Semaj, more sex please! Lol.
Author's Response:
Yes, he definitely did redeem himself. If James has a heart and actually cares for the wellbeing of Semaj he will stop whatever he's cooking up but we'll just have to see. I know you guys want some more of Michael and Semaj lovin' hahaha!
Date: Mar 11, 2015 09:39 am Title: Chapter 41- Dinner for Four with the Devil
All I know is Michael got James' ass at that damn resturant! im so proud of him!i think..Michael won Janelle over but you never know! James is doing some shady shit though!
Michael and Semaj really openend up! its really cute! Michael is spruuuuuuung lmaooo
Author's Response:
Lol yes girl he got owned.
Yes they did, and yes he is, lmao.





Date: Mar 10, 2015 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 41- Dinner for Four with the Devil
Why does Semaj refer to her mother and father by their first names?
I love how you contrast Semaj's "OMG something is going to happen" with Michael's restraint. It adds to the tension, so that I was constantly on the edge of my seat. I'm proud of Michael for keeping it classy and proving James that he isn't just some thug.
This chapter gave me life. I love how you really fleshed out the conversations and showed the night, start to finish. I felt like I was watching a television episode, rather than snippets of a story. You maintained scene (e.g. knocking over her glass of coke and later picking up the ice cubes), you saw conversations to their completion, and you stayed true to both Semaj's and Michael's personalities without blending the two.
- I think James is going to load him up with grunt work. Make him pay for making James look like a fool
- I think he has won over Janelle, as much as is possible. I could see her calling her mother to consult. She can see the similarities between her relationship with James and Semaj's with Michael.
- That's a tough one. I'd like him to be more cuddly with her. I'd like to see his soft side become more bold, behind closed doors. I also see Semaj getting more paranoid about him going out....she knows something is up and she knows he's still in the business.
<3
Author's Response:
To answer your question it was easier than constantly writing "my mom" or "my dad" so I just had them call them by their first names.
Anyway, thank you much! As I've told you I worked really hard on this chapter for it to be what it was. So your comments about it, I was really happy to read! As for your theories about James and Michael we'll have to see when he returns back to the office on Monday! Oh Michael still being in the illegal business is definitely something that is going to make Semaj question their relationship but just for that also we'll have to wait and see.





Date: Mar 10, 2015 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 41- Dinner for Four with the Devil
I never reviewed on this before but I always kept up to date with it and you are fanastic this story is so amazing I love the relationship between a good girl and a bad boy still being strong even though Semaj parents don't approve
Just though I finally praise you for such a amazing story
Author's Response:
Aww, this means a lot to me! Don't be afraid to shoot me a review every five chapters or so. It's greatly appreciated!
Date: Mar 10, 2015 07:14 pm Title: Chapter 1- Brown Eyes
Lol, literally all he wore were button downs and slacks. He still cute tho.





Date: Mar 02, 2015 04:54 pm Title: Chapter 40- The Invitation From Hell
plzzzzzzzzzz continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading girl!





Date: Mar 02, 2015 12:01 pm Title: Chapter 40- The Invitation From Hell
I think the dinner will go well in the beginning but something is worrying me in the back of my head like James is going to do something terrible.
Author's Response:
You'll have to read to find out! Thanks for reading!
Date: Mar 01, 2015 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 40- The Invitation From Hell
Michael's smart ass mouth. I hope the dinner goes okay! I'm glad he's doing the dinner. Supporting their relationship most of all supporting semaj. Michael is always so caring! he gets mad when she doesn't have a jacket, or being somewhere unsafe๐๐ He be giving her his mean ass glares lmaoooo I can only imagine how a mug can look on his pretty face๐๐๐
hope the dinner goes well but I wanna talk about Sparkle. When she is going to audition she is gunna SLAAAAAAAYYY. Lol I can feel it!
Author's Response:
He does have a smart mouth, lol! You'll see how the dinner goes in the new update. Enjoy!
I imagine it too. Like that sexy little side eye with a smirk!
The audition chapter is going to be nice! I know some of you guys can't wait until spring break!





Date: Mar 01, 2015 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 40- The Invitation From Hell
That is until I saw her sitting at our usual table, her head tilt back as she dumbed the remaining Flaminโ Hot crumbs into her mouth.
^ Excellent real-world visual. I think few readers will have to try to visualize that...it just comes to life because it's a moment that is so common.
Why is Lina dwelling on Tucker? Hmm. That was an odd line in convo and now my ears are up. Do I need to be sketchy on Lina?
fuckin crucial hour of physical therapy
^ I think you meant 'brutal'
I'm so glad that he agreed to go. I love how Semaj handled his reticence. I'd like to see him tuck away his smart mouth and shock her with his manners. Seeing Semaj stunned, James frustrated by Michael's class, and her mother won-over, would be priceless.
Great update!
Author's Response:
- Thanks! It's something I do pretty often at lunch so it just popped into my mind.
- Lina: Hahaha, well... I don't think you need to be sketchy. She's not going to do anything low down or dirty. So no, I think youo're good.
Yes yes, brutal would've been the better/correct word.
I didn't want to make him give in easily, so I'm glad I took the route I did. I hope you enjoy the next chapter.
Thank you!
Date: Mar 01, 2015 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 40- The Invitation From Hell
....."And lawd plz let this dinner be okay Amen"๐๐๐ lol these stories u gotta pray loll I hope michael can be civil but at the same time he just that person to not sugarcoat nunthing (I'm like that lol ppl these dayssss lawd) so he just gon express what he feels and wht not but again he doing it for his boo so u kno got to R-E-S-P-E-C-T the parents lol he was being extra over his car but like I would too I'm extra over my candy and chips lolll and Semaj lawd Jesus gotta pray for her cuz Tucker livin in a fantasy with em babies doeee ๐น๐น๐น
Author's Response:
That prayer was much needed girl! Sugarcoating is the wrong route to go. So I don't blame you for not doing it. It causes toooo many problems IMO. He was definitely extra over his car but some guys are just like that. Tucker is... a headache.





Date: Mar 01, 2015 08:45 pm Title: Chapter 40- The Invitation From Hell
As suspicious as this dinner is I'm hoping Michael doesn't disappoint Maji. That means a decent outfit and a tamed mouth. Now I know James is going to be pushing buttons but this is where I would encourage Michael to walk away. This will be most interesting.
As for Kearston she's petty with a Capitol P. She better not be the god mother Tucker is talking about either.
More soon!!! <333
Author's Response:
Funny you say disappoint because he kinda does in the beginning but you'll see!
Kearston.... its a shame how a cousin can act such a way. But there will be a chapter for the mess with her!
"She better not be the god mother Tucker is talking about either" LOL. No tut, I promise you.





Date: Mar 01, 2015 08:20 pm Title: Chapter 40- The Invitation From Hell
I think Michael will keep his mouth under control because he loves that girl. So I don't care what he says, he will want to leave a good impression on her parents. Any other sentiment he expresses to her in private is him being full of shit.
He was being a little spoiled brat in this chapter, when he wasn't busy acting like somebody's father. Lol. She has to dress him like she's his mother, but earlier he was hassling her about not wearing a jacket. Its like he has two inner personalities battling for control. But I bet both would like it if Semaj called him Daddy.
Author's Response:
He somewhat kept his mouth under control. He was respectful that's all I'll say about that. LMAO @ "I bet both would like it if Semaj called him Daddy" but you know what ima agree with that tho.
"Two inner personalities battling for control" - excellent point out... I'm glad you noticed that.
Michael is obviously just overprotective but stubborn at the same time... which is not a good mixture.
Thanks for reading! I hope you like the new story.





Date: Mar 01, 2015 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 40- The Invitation From Hell
Lmao, " I donโt wear no fuckin slacks onna daily basis or button down shirts like some good lil prissy kid." I see what you did there :3
Author's Response:
Lol girl I didn't realize what I had done until you pointed it out. MJ was still sexy in the button down shirts and slacks.





Date: Feb 27, 2015 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 39- Feel that Heat.... II
What the hell kind of crack is Tasha smoking making him work for James?!!!
Author's Response:
Lmao, came back and read that part over again? Hahaha, wellll like I told two other reviews some people have this thing where it's hard for them to see people who they're close to do wrong. They feel "oh I've known that person for forever they would never stoop that low." That's Tasha's mentality right now, she believes that James won't do anything to physically hurt Michael so she's overlooking Michael's precautions for not wanting to work with James. It'll all come out in the end and we'll see just where all of this will lead us. Again, thanks for the review and support girl!