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Reviewer: fenderjazzkid Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 19, 2015 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 23- Saved by the Scream

That interview cracked me up because I could picture Michael slouching in a chair and barely caring at all 

Dude, just act right for your PO and she probably won't be on your ass so much. 

But still, it cracked me up.

I wonder how the dad is gonna feel about their relationship if she actually tells him 

 

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Date: Mar 19, 2015 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 22- Mirror Mirror... Who's the Baddest of Them All?

Wtf Angie want? No one asked for her. No one invited her. No one is thinking of her. No one wants to see her face. Why, why, why, why? None of this makes sense. Go away, Angie.

Gawd, I hope Michael doesn't slip up 

Reviewer: fenderjazzkid Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 18, 2015 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 21- The Magic Touch Makes Me Spin

But Guardians of the Galaxy was the shit and Mike gon shut his damn mouth about it

They're official though! *dances*

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Date: Mar 18, 2015 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 20- Troll Doll Look-A-Like

This reminds me of the time I caught a ride with a bunch of my male classmmates and they started smoking. I thought it was gonna get on me and my dad would smell it lmaoo I didn't come in the house for a good while! Stayed outside and talked to my dog *dies* He was such a good friend.

I understand why Michael's upset though. If Michael's ass is telling you someone's dangerous, they're dangerous

Reviewer: fenderjazzkid Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 18, 2015 03:32 pm Title: Chapter 19- Can't Turn A Dog Into A Husband

Is it sad how I crack up when Michael's talking to his PO? This dude never changes and I always laugh. Like damn, act like you have hometraining Michael. 

Taking down braids is just ugh. It took me three days to take mine down last year lmaoo I want more this year, but ima get someone else to help next time. Michael's long ass fingers shouldn't have no problem at all 

Reviewer: fenderjazzkid Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 18, 2015 02:45 pm Title: Chapter 18- I Wanna Know...

 

Honestly, can you blame her for being nervous? Michael Jackson makes me nervous when I'm watching him on screens. I'm just sayin!

 

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Date: Mar 18, 2015 01:22 pm Title: Chapter 17- She's Different, This Is Different, Different Is Good

I'm behind like hell! 

 

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Date: Mar 18, 2015 01:22 pm Title: Chapter 17- She's Different, This Is Different, Different Is Good

I'm behind like hell! 

 

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Date: Mar 16, 2015 10:58 am Title: Chapter 42- Twizzler Snatching Thief

They are sooooooooo cute. Adorable! Michael is turning into a big old softy when it comes to Semaj. 

Can't wait to see his jealous ass when she plays Sparkle. I'm surprised he didn't try to audition himself to prevent the kiss. 

Semaj is still a bit jumpy when it comes to physical intimacy. Will be nice to see her lose that. Hopefully the DC trip will do the trick. 



Author's Response:

Definitely agreed, he's changing.
You already know he's going to be jealous, have his lips all out. And he can't because its for the 12th grade students only at Semaj's school. Michael is way over age, lol, but if he could you know he would've! 
Yes, she still hasn't gotten used to it yet. The DC trip should do a little something something... maybe even before that, hahaha!

Thanks for reading girl! 

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 16, 2015 08:15 am Title: Chapter 42- Twizzler Snatching Thief

You left us with this sweet as chapter! It's soooo cute! I knew Michael was hold her hand lmaoooo

semaj try to say her and Michael look alike lmaoo

 then Michael was being slick kissing her. Michael was singin?! So cute!

just wait until she do Sparkle! Yoooo that's gunna be my part! 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much. Michael always be saying he not going to do this or that but he ends up doing it anyway. For example when Semaj said she was keeping his hat and he said she wasn't...  but what happened? Right, he let her have the hat, lmao! 
I can't wait to write those chapters! Hopefully I can update twice a week for you guys. School is nearing its end!! 

Reviewer: mickey Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 16, 2015 07:18 am Title: Chapter 42- Twizzler Snatching Thief

"His arm wraps around my waist and he walks behind me while pushing me over to the other side so he’s on the side of the curb."

That's a sign of a good man who protectively places his arm around you and makes sure that you are walking on the inside of the sidewalk and not on the side of the traffic.  

I really like how you are slowly showing the true side of him versus the character that life has forced him to become.  

Can't wait to find out who's playing Stix and how Mike will react to that.

 



Author's Response:

Hola Mickey! 

It's nice to see you pointed that out! I was thinking the same when I wrote that line. Claps for Michael, lol.
Thank you! I'm trying to show you guys a gradual change with Michael's character.
I can't wait for the perfomance chapter of that and the practices. 

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 15, 2015 07:50 am Title: Chapter 42- Twizzler Snatching Thief

Awe cute quality time. I was laughing so hard at Liza. Like no girl...just no. I will agree with the store clerk. I was waiting on Michael's smart mouth. Lmao. 

Spring break is coming up!!!!

Im so appreciative of your ability to flesh out such long chapters. 

More soon! <333



Author's Response:

I didnt want Mike to go off on the poor girl, lol! And thanks so much, sometimes they come with ease and other times It takes a couple days. IM WAITIN FOR YO NEXT UPDATE. Laaawd. Tut i been thinking about that story ALL day. Lol update soon. 

Reviewer: super3o Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 15, 2015 07:45 am Title: Chapter 42- Twizzler Snatching Thief

Mannnn I knew James was being phony cuz lol

And Michael sing it sanggggggg lolll 

They cute they cute spending time together

 



Author's Response:

Girl you already knew what James was about. Its a shame.

Semaj and Mike are my favroite couple to write.

Reviewer: mjlover1972 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 15, 2015 02:51 am Title: Chapter 42- Twizzler Snatching Thief

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue!!!!!! james is back to his old ways. Michael keep eating her twizzler:):)):):)



Author's Response:

Lol he did with his annoying ass and James? Yes, lol.

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 14, 2015 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 42- Twizzler Snatching Thief

I love that your idea of a filler is still 4,000+ words.

Very cute scene of them spending time together. Liza was also a nice insert of humor. Girl was thirsty and oblivious. SMH. I also like that it isn't like all of her insecurities are wrong. I feel like this is a lull before another storm.....



Author's Response:

Lol, I hate short chapters with my favorite story so I try not to do that to you guys.

When you say "I also like that it isn't like all of her insecurities are wrong," what do you mean?

You guys won't have the last drama piece to this entire story until after the Spring Break trip. So we're looking at this story to be 65 chapters at the most.

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