[Report This]Date: Apr 17, 2015 05:06 am Title: Chapter 46- Shots Fired
Lenny and bigs better fess up and tell the cops that its theirs. Mike can get off if they take the blame. Lets see how much they really care for they homeboy. I really thought something was gonna happen to semaj. Half of me was like noooo then the other half was like yeeees drama lol. I loved the chapter, please update soon.
[Report This]Date: Apr 16, 2015 06:16 am Title: Chapter 46- Shots Fired
James pisses me the hell of and Michael's knuckle head ass friends got me twisted. Now he's gonna give James his ammunition. Wouldn't be surprised if this was his doing some how. Shit!!
more soon! <333
Date: Apr 16, 2015 01:19 am Title: Chapter 1- Brown Eyes
DAMNNNNNNNNN!
[Report This]Date: Apr 15, 2015 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 46- Shots Fired
LOL. He's on probation - the cops didn't even need a dime bag to search that car. Michael needs to watch his friends, because this could get him locked up.jfdksal; I love the changes. I was gripped the whole time!
Date: Apr 15, 2015 04:15 pm Title: Chapter 46- Shots Fired
Mannnnnnnnnnnnnnnn danggggg!!!!!!!! Yyyyyyyyyyyy bigs and Kenny got my boo in trouble semaj was right she knew something bad was gon happen she told himmmmmmm lol
Anywayyyy omgggg preach Michael cuz James can't get the scripture in his dumbo head loll and awwwwww they so cute doeee eye but semaj gon kill him
OMGGGGGG Michael funny!!!!!!
"He had onna all white suit wit his hair slicked back. Nigga had so much grease, swore he had enough to fry a whole pack of chicken."
I was done loll
Good Update πππππ
Date: Apr 14, 2015 09:55 am Title: Chapter 1- Brown Eyes
I LOVE THIS STORY, damn !!! I read it like 3 or 4 times, I know almost all the chapters by heart, I'm a little bit addicted xD !
LMAO when Semaj's phone started ringing I was thinking about how Michael was going to murder Lina next time he would see her xD... Seriously they're so cute !! HAHA Michael admitted it : SHE WAS RIIIGHT ! I remember this moment where he brought her a new phone and they talked 'bout his relationship with Lonnie for the first time... He said she was acting like Oprah...Well guess what dude ?!!! She was right !!!
I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER !!! <3 Keep goin' !!
Author's Response:
Awww, this means a lot to me! Thanks for taking your time out to read my story. Don't be afraid to comment more often! I love reading the reviews.
Girl, you already know Michael was going to be heated with Lina if Semaj had grabbed that phone. He was gonna be heated with her too! I'm glad you think they're cute, I like to think so too. Yup, Michael finally admitted that she was right and it's about damn time! I remember when I wrote that, ahaha, it's nice that you recall that.
Again, thanks for reading and don't be afraid to shoot me some more reviews!
Date: Apr 14, 2015 06:55 am Title: Chapter 45- Forever and a Day
Awwww...
Author's Response:
Hey girl great to see you! Thanks for reading, I appreciate it!
[Report This]Date: Apr 13, 2015 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 45- Forever and a Day
I wanted to smash that damn phone myself! The scene was hot though.....
And he gave her a key! Awwww....
James and all his unexplained absences though....shady as fuck.
Author's Response:
Why thank you, and Ikr? She knew he wasn't gon let her pick it up.
Yes ma'am, he sure did give her one.
James... maybe you guys will expect something different from him in the next chapter.
Date: Apr 13, 2015 09:27 am Title: Chapter 45- Forever and a Day
Lolll I died in the beginning with the Spanish guy loll
This whole chapter had me smiling **gummy smile** I was cheesinggggg they r so cuteeeeeee doeee **sniff sniff ** I'm a thug I ain't gon cry lolll jkjk I wish I could see dat pic doe and I was weakkkkkk wen she tho he gave her an apartment I was like boo it's a key to his ain't nobody got time for dat cuz he den gon have two bills to pay **singing bills by lunchmoney lewis**" lolll dats my song anywayyy
Good Update πππππππ
Author's Response:
Michael was annoying him, smh.
I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter! I enjoyed writing it, girl.
Lol right she was going to far with his gifts. He love her, but he ain't buyin her no apartment or house.
[Report This]Date: Apr 12, 2015 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 45- Forever and a Day
Omg this was so sweet. This whole chapter. Sigh. Him in the beginning with the Spanish dude had me rolling. Lmaooo. "Como Estas ingles..." DEAD!!! I was like no he did not just say that. But the kiss with the picture, their little talk at the end...man that melted my heart.
More soon!! <333
Author's Response:
Thank you, Tut!
Michael was really annoying that guy. I wanted a sweet chapter!
[Report This]Date: Apr 12, 2015 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 45- Forever and a Day
Now I see what you meant about the irony lol.
"Damn I loved when this girl said my name, but I ainβt one of them niggas who be like whatβs my name, say my name, that shit was lame as fuck and awkward as hell."
LMAO.
I love that he gave her a key. That, the kiss, and the ending are all super cute. I wonder how Semaj's parents will take it? I also wonder what'll happen the next time Michael and James talk....
Author's Response:
Lol, you notice it? Hahaha.
Glad you found that funny, I chuckled a little bit when I wrote it.
Well we'll see what they think about it in a few chapters to come. Well they talk twice in the next chapter hahaha.
[Report This]Date: Apr 12, 2015 06:57 pm Title: Chapter 45- Forever and a Day
So glad Michael threw her phone cuz that woulda really ruined the whole moment! plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue:):):):) so sweet that he got a key for her:):):):):):)
Author's Response:
You're right it would've ruined the moment. Hahaha, and yup he gotta key for her!
Date: Apr 07, 2015 08:20 pm Title: Chapter 44- Onna fuckin' Monday
That it's a sin part in Sparkle is my favorite! Thank god Michael bit the hell out of his tongue!! Now about Kearston hmmm well it was nice that she apoligized. Michael cant wait for Semaj to drop those panties lmaooo on his little brother's bed though?! Michael got a whole house lmaooo and couldnt wait
Semaj is going....SHOPPINGGGGG
Author's Response:
I find that part funny but cute at the same time. It is one of my favorites too I have to agree.
Michael is putting his anger management to use.
Kearston? Like I told Tut, she shouldn't cause any problems... maybe... maybe not... you guys will have to read and see.
Lol, he didn't care! He would've done it. No way girl, it had been too long for him.
Yup, I have plans for the next two weeks (story wise) lol, thanks for reading girl.
[Report This]Date: Apr 03, 2015 11:27 am Title: Chapter 44- Onna fuckin' Monday
plzzzzzzzzzz continue!!!! James was gettin wow mad!!:(:(:( Michael is HORNY:):):):)):):):)
Author's Response:
Lol yes Michael is a little, or a lot, on the sexual frustrated side of things.
Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: Apr 03, 2015 01:12 am Title: Chapter 44- Onna fuckin' Monday
They're too cute!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I try to make them cute, haha. Thanks for reading, Helen!