Reviewer: mjlover1972 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 16, 2015 01:06 pm Title: Chapter 50- D.C. Bound & Past People

5 chapters????!!!!!!!! Nooooooo!!!!! At least add some of your spicy sex scenes in there. Ugghhh what does Joseph want?!?!?! Semaj and Michael are a sexy ass couple 😊😊😀😀😀😋😝😝😝😘plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue😥😀😀😀😀

Author's Response:

Mmmm... I'll think about the sex scenes... you guys might have about one or two scenes that leads up to sex but idk about going into full descriptive detail. It honestly just depends. Anyhoo thanks for reading girly!

Reviewer: Danny Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 16, 2015 10:02 am Title: Chapter 50- D.C. Bound & Past People

Very good keep it up your great writer

Reviewer: super3o Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 16, 2015 09:38 am Title: Chapter 50- D.C. Bound & Past People

Awwwwww snapppp **smacking on sum popcorn** da fudge JOE JACKSON lawdyyy this gon be sum drama and matter fact wht he doing callin sumbody early in the morning it better be sumthing bad to be doing that cuz I would've ben twisted frfr. Loll em at the pool lawdyyy semaj don't kno how to swim chile gon have to learn. Em on the plane lawddyy michael had to get the strongest drink and semaj wanted one too THOUGHT U WAS lolll. I was also weak at how LaToya and Michael arguing for 25mins in the car I would've pop both of em in the head and that awkward moment for semaj and her mom I had felt the awkwardness too lol. And 5 chapters and epilogue left omggggg **died** nooooooooo this my baby I can't oh lawd im not gon make itt lol **finishing my overdramatic moment** u got me all in my feelings now imma keep singing im so blue, she's out of my life, and gone to soon lol

Good Update😂👏👏👏

Author's Response:

Y'all know I had to bring Joseph into it... let's just what he wants.

Yeah she wanted a little sip but Michael was being evil, but he was right though she's too young. 

It might be six or seven more chapters... I sort of altered stuff a little. It all depends on how big I make the next two chapters. If I write a lot on those two chapters then you guys won't have a lot less to read. I don't know, it depends on how I am feeling. Thanks for reading girly!

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 10, 2015 11:26 pm Title: Chapter 49- Chaperoning and Theatre Surprises

Michael and Maji are too cute. Weren't they supposed to be in DC by now?

Wow Lina and Tucker. Didn't see that coming at all. As long as it's real and they're happy. 

More soon! <333

Author's Response:

Because I hadn't updated in a little while I needed to write something up quick so that's why I just did a little filler for this chapter but over the past week I've had time to write so that's why the newest update is them going to Washington D.C. But yeah they were supposed to be there in this chapter but I hope you like the newest one!

I'm sure no one saw Lina and Tucker, lol, but right as long as it's real and they're happy.

Reviewer: Redone Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 09, 2015 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 49- Chaperoning and Theatre Surprises

It was a very cute filler. It was adorable how protective Michael was of Janet. You really brought the chemistry out between Semaj and Michael. They are such a cute couple.

Michael sure got the short end for helping out James. First he gets hurt, now he's gotta watch his back that much more, and finally his siblings now think he got beat up by Semaj. Pfft. No good deed goes unpunished.

Happy to see you back xo

Author's Response:

Thanks and I try my best. I'm glad people like them as a fit!

Very true, Michael does have to watch his back a lot more now that this has happened and since Marco's crazy ass isn't living it down.

Glad to be back, I hope you like the newest update, and I hope I'll be able to update again next week!

Reviewer: Lovemj4L Signed [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2015 09:44 am Title: Chapter 28- For The Love of God Pt. I

Nooooo, why Aaron have to be my baby Jay

Reviewer: Lovemj4L Signed [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2015 06:30 am Title: Chapter 22- Mirror Mirror... Who's the Baddest of Them All?

Kearston be pissing me off💁😒😂

Reviewer: Redone Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2015 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 48- Shit Don't Stop Here

So Michael helped James out? That's a twist!

I think Janelle is just not used to her daughter always being around, when she's in the house. That and she's pregnant and emotional....it's hard to see another relationship blossoming when her own is struggling.

I want Marco to disappear. I can see them harassing Semaj...and James avoiding his office and trying to work from home. I imagine both James and Michael will become increasingly protective of the family as they try to figure out what Marco and Willow are going to try.

Now, where is this in relation to the planned flight to DC? How far away is that?

Author's Response:

Why thank you. I love a twist, lmao.

Agreed, we'll see what happens between Janelle and James. There will be some interaction between those two while Michael and Semaj are in Washington D.C.

Everyone wants Marco to disappear, lol. Let's all try a magic trick and see if it works! You're pretty spot on about Michael and James becoming overly protective.

We'll see what Marco and Willow have cooking up. *rubs hands together*

In my email I told you that the flight to D.C. would be in the next update, well in the update that I just posted it's just a filler, but next OFFICIAL update will be the flight to D.C. ;D

As always, thanks for reading.