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Reviewer: dupsiemj Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 19, 2014 11:05 pm Title: Chapter Eight

Please do continue.... though I wold love some action.... sorry but I am a complete twihard.... and am used to vampire action.... the usual routine is getting kind of boring... why dont you put an enemy vampire stalking Svetlana and whatnot... Am just saying....

Author's Response:

Most of the action is planned after Svetlana comes of age. This first quarter of the story is supposed to be slow moving and based on Michael watching her as she grows up. There will be plenty of vampire enemies and losts of character deaths so prepare.

Reviewer: dupsiemj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 19, 2014 09:33 pm Title: Chapter Three

Is Michael inlove with Ivana?

Author's Response:

I wouldn't call it love... lol lust maybe. 

Reviewer: dupsiemj Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 19, 2014 09:22 pm Title: Chapter Two

Wow...

Reviewer: dupsiemj Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 19, 2014 09:12 pm Title: Chapter One

Wow... am a vampire fan and I gotta give you an pplause for that... I kind of pouted when you said you'd trace the events of vampire diaries... i do love that movie... but I love twilight more. Am more of a twihard.... Anyway...awesome job

Author's Response:

It's not going to really trace events of vampire diaries, just I used some of their theories about vampires as well as true bloods. I've never seen Twilight *gasp*!!!

Reviewer: Hazel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 06, 2014 09:29 pm Title: Chapter Six

Oh dear... her first crush. Yeah with Michael around, it'll be tough trying to hide this from him.

As for Ivana, I wonder how she's dealing as a new born vampire. Hopefuly, Michael has been able to help her urges under control. Then again, a month seems quite short to fully adjust.

And poor Michael! LMAO I'm cringing at the fact that he has to be stuck with her for all eternity. Bwahaha I know I shouldn't be laughing but damn... that really sucks.

Reviewer: Hazel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 04, 2014 01:35 am Title: Chapter Five

Ok, Ivana needs to go away! She's really irking my nerves... I feel bad for Michael now. lmao But still such a typical man...

And I just love how patient he is with Svetlana. Sighhh He's really come to care for her.. so damn sweet.



Author's Response:

Poor thirsty Ivana... lol Thanks!

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2014 08:35 pm Title: Chapter One

OMG Your writing is impecable!!! I'm so hooked on this story already. I love all your stories actually.  Always intigued.  Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Thank you thank you thank you!! As you already know I'm hooked on your story as well! You're an awesome writer as well!

Reviewer: Hazel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 01, 2014 03:24 pm Title: Chapter Four

I just started reading all the chapters today and I must say, I'm hooked!

Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Yay! Thank you!

Reviewer: LOVEJaxon Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 31, 2014 01:09 pm Title: Chapter One

oh wow! Normally I'm not into vampire stories but I am loving this so far! 



Author's Response:

First vampire story I've ever written! Thanks!

Reviewer: halesjackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2014 11:49 am Title: Chapter One

yay:-)

finally a story of michael as a vampire it's good,can't wait for another chapter

btw what era is this?

 



Author's Response:

Dangerous

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