Reviewer: MJzNubianQueen Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 11, 2023 04:37 pm Title: HAPPY B-DAY!!! MJ!

Sending hugs and lots of love x

Reviewer: MJzNubianQueen Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 11, 2023 06:37 am Title: Chapter 12

It was a dream :/

Reviewer: MJzNubianQueen Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 11, 2023 06:37 am Title: Chapter 12

It was a dream :/

Reviewer: RakeryiaM Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 01, 2016 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 1

LOVE

Reviewer: Amare58 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 28, 2016 02:25 am Title: Chapter 19

This story is just hilarious LOLOL

Reviewer: jhazzyandmj Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 21, 2015 09:47 pm Title: Chapter 1

If u still get on i hope u read this bc i love ur stories especially  roomies a lie becomes the truth and my bully. I was absolutely  heartbroken wen u stopped updating  these stories plz updste u r really talented nd have a gift u r too good to stop updatin your stories evryone loves them! I would just read through your stories nd come to an end nd find out tht u havent updated that story in years nd i would be completely devastated bc i love ur stories so much u r an inspiration  not just to me but evryone who reviews nd reads your stories so if u r reading this i just hope  u change  your mind about updating your stories especially  roomies a lsie becomes the truth and my bully those r the best eva!!anyways  plz update these stories bc many people d write with  as much passion as u do nd there r only a couple authors  who d write corny material  love u and plz keep updating i wont give up on u.lots of love from me your biggest follower and fan ~jhazzyandmj

Reviewer: Redone Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 07, 2014 09:39 pm Title: Chapter 1

Okay, you asked for a review of the story, so hopefully this lives up to your expectations:

Characters: I like the creative liberties you took with Michael's history. I think the abuse fit in and the development of the turmoil within the family felt natural. I also like how you kept the J5 in there despite it being a more AU story.  And his character? I could see him like that IRL. I loved Flo's nerdiness. Casey was pregnancy at a whole new level of hormonal madness. Same for Rebecca in terms of Bridezilla madness. Brittany...reminds me of a friend of mine. Eerily so. Creepy! 

The only dynamic I didn't really get was in the work setting.

Plot: The unfolding of Flo and Michael's relationship was very sweet. When he put his hand on her leg, I knew this story was a keeper. I liked the work stuff until the boss' death. I got the drama in the apartment, but the death/murder could have been a whole story unto itself. And the Paige, twist? Max twist? Girl, you had enough drama for at least three stories.

Writing: Girl, you are funny! I like your writing style. I also liked when you took Michael's POV. Those were my favorite parts. I think breaks between scene changes would have helped. I had a little trouble tracking at times. However, that stuff can easily be addressed. You've got what a lot of writers do not have - fluidity and attitude. You can't really teach those!

Author's Response: I agree with everything you're saying. When I wrote this story I was really experimenting with plot development and at the time all of my stories were all over the place lol. I love this story dearly but it got a bit ridiculous at times. Thank you for your review and for your others as well.

Reviewer: Ohhthatsjordan Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 31, 2013 02:40 pm Title: Chapter 74

Soooooo I just read all of these chapters and I feel inlove , now I'm gonna have to suffer the wait for an update , keep them coming : )