[Report This]Date: Dec 18, 2012 01:49 am Title: Chapter 14
Bad Era Miike looks straight up Latino so i dont blame her. Their fighting and making up is too cute. Mike is too charming for his own good. Sounds like its about to go down. Mike, Flo, and a minivan full of teens? What could possibly go wrong? lol
[Report This]Date: Dec 18, 2012 01:36 am Title: Chapter 13
OK. I have a short attention span. And reading something Ive already read is something I dont do, thats why i dont buy books but rather borrow them from the library and stuff. But I appreciate you and your skill so that is why Ive made it this farwith my reviews. If only there was a way to unread this so I could read it all over again. UGH! But here i go...
(cheesin like a fool) OMG! SO HOT! Hes so demanding, telling her to say it back. Had me about to say I love you too. lol Im glad Flo finally grew some balls and but that Karen bitch in her place. Now all she needs is to get em gold plated so she doesnt get walked on any more. Chris trippin if he thought that lame ass apology was gonna get him anywhere. Im so happy they quit bullshitting and made out =D
[Report This]Date: Dec 18, 2012 01:22 am Title: Chapter 12
AHHHH!!! Why are you playing with my emotions? lol Here I thought someone was finally gonna get some ass. lol. Ur mean. Had me fanning myself all giddy like for no reason.
[Report This]Date: Dec 18, 2012 01:18 am Title: Chapter 11
AHHHHH!! Mike so nastyy, doing all that petting infront of mama and granny and ish. Love it!! lol I swear Flo is so slow. Glad she knows Karen stale ass is jealous and Mike doesnt hate her. Hopefully she can understand without being told that Mike wants whats in em draws. lol
[Report This]Date: Dec 18, 2012 01:05 am Title: Chapter 10
Grandma cool peeps bruh. Now karen on the other hand needs to be skinned alive. Thats some foul ass shit she did with Chris simple behind. Mike cheered Flo up the best way possible. Im ticklish too and tickle fits are the business! lol
[Report This]Date: Dec 18, 2012 01:00 am Title: Chapter 9
He got exactly what he deserved for talking all that smack, hurting ma girls feelings. He really got under her skin. It was sweet of her to let him sleep. Where did that candy bar end up? lol
Author's Response: Hahahahaha use your imagination!
[Report This]Date: Dec 18, 2012 12:53 am Title: Chapter 8
LMAO! Those kids are so crazy. Mike's good with kids too. oh lawd. Mike's feelin her now, YES!! They are too cute, waking up all snuggled up and ish. lol He knows he liked it. Flo better listen to his mama. She knows what shes talking about.
[Report This]Date: Dec 18, 2012 12:48 am Title: Chapter 7
What an asshole, yo. Felt like straight up deckin him. What he said was really uncalled for but im glad they made up. Im seriously fallin for this Micheal, asshole and all.
[Report This]Date: Dec 18, 2012 12:41 am Title: Chapter 6
“It’s just a little precaution in case you have crabs”
lmao!! that was so unexpected. He is so rude. lol Ricky sounds like he could get it. lol I love water balloon fights! Cant wait.
Author's Response: Ricky CAN get it hahahaha
[Report This]Date: Dec 18, 2012 12:35 am Title: Chapter 5
Aww i can just imagine how cute her southern accent sounds. Im glad she bonded with the ladies in his family. Everything seems smooth so far. His brothers are funny as well. Guess it runs in the family. And thats what Mike gets for throwing people on the floor. Hes lucky she didnt go lower.
[Report This]Date: Dec 18, 2012 12:31 am Title: Chapter 4
Call him pied pier cause he got them hoes flockin. lol jk. Love how you made him easily lovable with the ladies aka his drones. And I so wish I was in that bedroom of his. His family seems very nice.
[Report This]Date: Dec 18, 2012 12:25 am Title: Chapter 3
11?! Hes immeassurable on any scale. Derek and Rebecca belong together on the real because they always preach that truth. Micheals fake apology had me cracking up like crazy though. 'Really?' He is too funny at this office.
[Report This]Date: Dec 18, 2012 12:18 am Title: Chapter 2
'Are you sick or blind or gay?' lol My dawg Brit be going ham though, talking bout tapin heads and ish. lol This was quite cute, her causing a scene to drag her in and the slamming the door in Micheals face, the mice sex. Hilarious! And you could tell they really meant their compliments. Had me cheesin and ish.
[Report This]Date: Dec 18, 2012 12:11 am Title: Chapter 1
LMAO!! I love how how sharp his tongue is. His insults are hilarious and a man with a sense of humor is always sexy. Their banter is adorable. Her friends are really cool. Rebecca speaks the truth though lol. Love it! Great first chapter!!
[Report This]Date: Dec 17, 2012 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMG where do I begin? I ABSOLUTELY LOVE YOUR STORIES!! Ive spent so many nights wide awake because I could not stop reading these masterpieces. I sneak in a little reading time at work, in the line at the grocery store... lets just say im addicted. The way you develop your characters and bring in elements that we all knew about MJ in the real world into these alternate universes is amazing. The plots are terrific and the way these characters interact have me gushing and blushing and bursting with butterflies. I love how each individual story is completely different, showing different lifestyles from different people and bringing out different personas from his real personality.
So far Ive read 3 stories in their entirety and am half way through 3 other stories. I have decided that since you appreciate reviews, (You demanding a review with each post gave it away. You really arent subtle) I will review each and every single chapter Ive read because YOU ARE AWESOME.
My only request is that you have to have more frequent updates!!!
So ... here come my reviews!!
-Chelly
Author's Response: Oh gosh! Hands down best review ever you are the freaking best! And reading at your job hahahaha keep doing it! Unless of course you get in trouble. Gosh how could I say no to you. I'm gonna start updating more frequently. I will do that.