Date: Jun 16, 2011 01:18 am Title: Chapter 21
could they get any cuter???? lol seriously they are so fucking adorable together omg!!! I LOVED this chapter I had a smile on my face the whole time reading it!!! I can't wait for more!!!! keep it coming great job on this story :)
Date: Jun 16, 2011 01:12 am Title: Chapter 21
Yay now its 100! congrats girl..now im to sleepy to read it lol I'll read and comment tomorrow.
Date: Jun 16, 2011 01:06 am Title: Chapter 21
Hahah to cute :) this story just makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside lol :D its just too adorable! Cnt want for the next part
Date: Jun 15, 2011 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 20
Aww this story is to cute :) they went from calling eachother bitches & gay to kissing & i love you's aww just beautiful :P cnt wait for the next part
Date: Jun 15, 2011 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 20
Congrats on the 4000 views!! Wonderful chapter and looking forward to hearing how Flo and Michael are going to work on the case together.
Date: Jun 15, 2011 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 20
dang girl the sex is hot! loves it. Lol Flo is addicted to Sims 3 and Michael is addicted to Flo I love them. I see chicks don't take my girl Flo seriously, thinking she just a nerd one day Flo gone get in Sheryl face she betta back off her man. I cant believe your surprised you have that many views..your story is amazing one of my favorites. I even have my boyfriend read it sometimes. He actually asked me was this story true..lol he's so dumb. I love Michaels point of view you should do it more often.
Date: Jun 15, 2011 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 20
OMG.. they confessed they loved each other!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAY!
UPDATE SOON.... LOVE THIS!!
Date: Jun 15, 2011 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 20
OH MY GOODNESS!!!!!! I loved chapters 19 & 20 they were soooo good!!! I love jealous Michael he is just too adorable & I love how he gets when he makes her blush they are just perfect for each other & flo is so sweet & nerdy they are just too adorable for words I am loving this story I can't wait to read more!!! Also I really like when you do a few chapters in Michaels POV very interesting ;)
Date: Jun 15, 2011 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 20
Aww I love how they're acting like a real couple now :) Good job girl, keep it up xx
Date: Jun 15, 2011 03:25 pm Title: Chapter 20
OH! Steaming Hot after reading that I felt like I was in a sauna
xxxx
Date: Jun 15, 2011 11:42 am Title: Chapter 19
Fuck you Terry hate guys like him always thinking the best thing about a woman is opening her legs and being quiet. Flo is just to cute I love her, she drives Michael wild and she doesn't even know how much of an effect she has on him. Yay I love Michael's point of view I can't wait :D
Date: Jun 15, 2011 11:39 am Title: Chapter 19
DANG MIKEY!!!!!!! MICHAEL SHOWED TERRY!!!!!! OOOOOOOO PLEASE UPDATE TODAY!!!!
Date: Jun 15, 2011 10:18 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh My GOD! I love this story. You don't even know how good it is. and it's so damn funny! The part where Michael threatened his co worker with rusty scissors and when he mentioned foot fetish I was rolling. like tears were in my eyes. You're an amazing writer. <3
Date: Jun 15, 2011 06:42 am Title: Chapter 19
loved this chapter.... they are so casual at work... but im sure that other people know about them know... since Michael threatened his coworker!! That was genuis!! :P
Update soon please!!
Date: Jun 15, 2011 03:23 am Title: Chapter 19
I looove this so much. Update soon! xx