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Date: Dec 19, 2012 12:23 am Title: Chapter 43

I feel her on the whole maid thing. Yeah theyre paid for that but theyre people too, not slaves. Mikes pops is sooo wrong for that. Glad they made up.

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Date: Dec 19, 2012 12:19 am Title: Chapter 42

"Now, ask me if I give two fucks..." (fans self) Whooo!! lol I cant believe Flo still trying to dig up his past. Its NONE of your business bruh. Stop pressin him. And you can run after him, it should always be one sided (face palm)And then she said all that when she didnt even mean it. Stop fucking shit up, that was perfect make up sex you wasted.

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Date: Dec 19, 2012 12:11 am Title: Chapter 42

Make up already!! Yall know yall want to.

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Date: Dec 18, 2012 04:45 pm Title: Chapter 40

Didnt I say I didnt believe his ass about Sheryl. He blowing up tryna use that reverse pyschology shit but it aint working. Glad she didnt fall for it. Jess my girl, looking out for the homies. He lucky she loved Casey. 



Author's Response: Your reviews have me rollin omg! Lol please keep going I am very entertained and I'm really glad that you are enjoying the story. Its the first that I'm truly proud of

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Date: Dec 18, 2012 04:40 pm Title: Chapter 39

lol 21 questions while in a bubble bath though? lol Leon is a dumbass bruh but ofcourse Mike knew how to get her back. I was shocked he had friends too lol.I guess i was so use to him in her world. His friends helped me realize how much Flo changed him cuz he was probably worse than all his friends.

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Date: Dec 18, 2012 04:34 pm Title: Chapter 38

Aww shit. I knew Sheryl wasnt all there. Paige crazy too. Witnessing murders and calling bitches hoes and shit. lol This story is getting crazy now. Murder at the office huh?

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Date: Dec 18, 2012 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 37

LMAO! Whose is it?! Flo wild bruh. She finally gave him the throat, like he wasnt whipped already. They have too much fun, water fights in the house and ish. Uh oh, what now? This little girl again?

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Date: Dec 18, 2012 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 36

Mind your business Flo and leave bimbo Sheryl alone. Flo stay diggin mayne. Mike is too sweet. Going with her to all of these things. Casey needs to stfu and say thank you. Appreciate the offers hoe.

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Date: Dec 18, 2012 04:07 pm Title: Chapter 35

I just want to set that bastard Terry on fire! He should be neutered. Spreading his seed and not taking care of his like the simpleton he truly is. VIVA LA RAZA though lol. Love the added latinaness in this. Jessica sounds like my dawg tho. Mike so sweet noticing what Flos putting herself through with everybody elses bullshit and keeping her grounded. I just wanna shake Casey. Wasnt she warned? Ugh Flo stop caring about Sheryl. SHE TRIED TO FUCK YO MAN. 

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Date: Dec 18, 2012 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 34

Oh shit. Caseys pregnant and Mikes been hoein. I dont believe him. Sheryl had better walked away and thanked her gods she still had teeth. I love weddings but hate planning and putting ish together. Flo is too nice doing all of this for becca and not even getting paid. Its like another full time job.

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Date: Dec 18, 2012 03:49 pm Title: Chapter 33

Good work Flo. You won money and solidified a case. But that walking barefoot ish was nasty, I almost gagged. Im glad Mike always sets things right. they always argue but they overcome it quickly. But I will admit I thought they were really gonna break up for a sec, but that would be foolishness. Break up? With Mike? Pppssshhh! lol

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Date: Dec 18, 2012 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 32

OMG!!!! I am gushing mushyness (sp?) like crazy over here. I cant stop cheesing. This is too wonderful. Im so happy! He fell so hard for her and hasnt even been that long. But I guess when you know, you know right? lol Had me jumping up and down when I found of she got his initials tatted! (Rick ross voice) Tat my name on it so I know its real! Ugh! lol. Let me stop. This chapter just had me so giddy, minus Casey slow ass sleeping with Terry simpleton even though she was warned. Your story plays just like a movie. So smooth and seamless. Your writing skills are amazing.

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Date: Dec 18, 2012 03:36 pm Title: Please Read my new story!! Things we do for family

Bout to finish reading that when I catch up on my promised reviews.

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Date: Dec 18, 2012 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 30

This chapter was too live! Lol I so love rebecca letting sheryl know she dont play that shit. Casey better listen to that warning. Mike is so sweet, Flo needs to stop being so sensitive. Dude needs to release his aggression once in a while lol. But its smart of her to put him in his place before he gets use to roughin her up. Love how you added his love of rats to this. Giving this that extra touch of the real Mike in this fictional world.

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Date: Dec 18, 2012 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 29

Move in!! Whats there to think abou? lol. Jk. You dont move in with a dude after a week of dating. Ish goes wrong the next week and he kicks you out and now youre homeless. Not yet girl. Not yet. But omg, Mike and those hickies booyyy. You know he was tearin it up if he left all that evidence behind. lol Derek proposed?! Yay!!

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