Date: Mar 22, 2016 04:06 pm Title: Chapter 48
Well, at least Michael has enough sence to do what his own father should have done to him when he was little. That makes Michael the bigger man than his own father ever could be.
Date: Mar 22, 2016 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 46
Let's have some fun,
this beat is sick,
I wanna take a ride on your disco stick
Don't think too much
Just bust that kick
I wanna take a ride on your disco stick
Sorry, I just couldn't help but write that.
Date: Mar 22, 2016 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 44
My, my, such words from a four year old little girl.
Date: Mar 22, 2016 11:30 am Title: Chapter 42
Is that really true about what Michael said about writing 'Earth Song?
Date: Mar 22, 2016 01:35 am Title: Chapter 40
I have to agree with Tinker13, every story on here is just that; a story. That means every writer has the right to make the story and it's characters into whatever they want.
Date: Mar 22, 2016 12:07 am Title: Chapter 39
It's sad that Mandy had to die, but things like this happen in life so we have to move on. Jess has her own things that make her who she is. I could see a future with her and Michael.
Date: Mar 21, 2016 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 37
I wonder if Paris was really like that.
The whole birds and the bees thing, I mean.
Date: Mar 21, 2016 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 35
I'll drink to that.
Date: Mar 21, 2016 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 34
All I can say is that things are about to get more complicated with the young children there.
Date: Mar 21, 2016 11:04 am Title: Chapter 33
I hope everythin will go well and that Jess will be able to heal. I just worry that the children will ask too many questions. They won't understand what's really going on, but they don't need to know what really happened to Jess.
Date: Mar 21, 2016 10:29 am Title: Chapter 32
There's going to be a lot of questions from the children.
Date: Mar 21, 2016 10:13 am Title: Chapter 31
I think both men knew that Jess had been raped even before the doctor told them.
Date: Mar 21, 2016 08:56 am Title: Chapter 30
Okay, this guy Danny shouldn't be a cop and he really seriously needs to have his ass behind bars.
Author's Response:
He's dead so no longer an issue except for the scars left with Jess
Date: Mar 21, 2016 12:07 am Title: Chapter 29
Okay, Danny needs to be fired. He just can't do that to anyone let alone Jess.
Sereouslly, what is his problem?
Date: Mar 20, 2016 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 24
Here come the questions from Prince and Paris, but i'm getting a feeling that Paris will probably be more of the question asker than Prince.......